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Scrasamax's comment on 2012-05-03 07:11 AM

Now this is a truly exotic mount, bravo sir, bravo

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EchoMirage's comment on 2012-02-10 09:55 AM


Echo approves. Elves. On the moon. Floating on a carnivorous lotus. Hell yeah.


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Cheka Man's comment on 2012-02-10 03:35 PM


How do they catch prey? Like bladderwort do?


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Cheka Man's comment on 2012-02-10 08:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2012-02-10 02:18 PM


Wow, this is a good one, and is just the sort of thing I was hoping for with Exotic Mount. I think that the visual here is pretty neat - who can complain about people riding around on swimming flowers? I also like how you've worked the flower heavily into the monks' lives, outside of just a means of transport. I can really imagine this a part of some big, fantastic painting.



Job's a good 'un.



(On that note, though, I don't deserve any credit at all for this - I did nothing more than suggest what I hoped was an inspirational freetext).


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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 12:31 PM


I see what you mean by victim of a bad edit. It's certainly more than a little chunky. I'll take a look at it at fix the spelling errors here sooner than later.



You actually had more to do with this post than you think. You asked a lot of good questions in chat the other day. The answers are there; on the surface, lurking in the shadows, and in the developing world around the lotus.

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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 01:06 PM
Update: First paragraph re-edited. I don't know why I kept putting an extra "u" in "enormous." Nor why I kept using the word "enormous." Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 02:52 PM
No, but apparently I did so. I'm in the process of rewriting that paragraph now. Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 03:47 PM
Update: The Mystery of the Missing Paragraph has been solved, ( actually I just rewrote it and added some new detail, but if you didn't read the first, you'll never know!)

While I was at it, I added the last paragraph in. I had conceived of it before publishing, but didn't manage to work it in. I have since found a way. Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 03:50 PM
Yes, exactly like the Bladderwort. apparently this was another paragraph that went missing in the editing process. Back to writing... Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 04:06 PM
Update: Last missing paragraph rewritten. It might be a little choppy, but I just wanted it to be up there for now. I apologize to all the other recent activity that I'm pushing off the Recent Activity Bar in the main page. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2012-11-05 04:51 AM
Love it. As exotic as mounts get. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2012-02-10 02:38 PM


Awesome!! Great visual, great details (Tsamno, partially digested delicacies, etc...). Smacks of surreal "old sorcery" (you know that time before the waves swallowed atlantis and all that) Very trippy!!



 



I once did some crappy submission about 9 and half ways to use a giant lotus in fantasy. This certainly takes the cake!

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Murometz's comment on 2012-02-18 07:15 PM


There is quality and then there is what i like to call, roackwality, which is like quality combined with what Echo said.

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Murometz's comment on 2012-02-18 07:15 PM


There is quality and then there what i like to call, roackwality, which is like quality combined with what Echo said.


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Murometz's comment on 2012-02-18 07:19 PM


There is quality and then there is what i like to call, Roackwality, which is like quality combined with what Echo said.


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axlerowes's comment on 2012-02-10 12:13 PM


I had very little to do with this exceptional write up or this wonderful world you have created.  But this fantastic, I  loved it when you told me about it and I love it now. 



 



The first paragraph has a number of errors in it and doesn't flow as well as the rest of the piece.  The second sentence for example seems to be the victim of a bad edit.  



But after the second paragraph the whole piece moves really smoothly and clearly . 


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axlerowes's comment on 2012-02-10 02:19 PM
It looks like you cut out a lot of the sub, did you mean to do that? Go to Comment
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-05-30 11:24 PM
5/5. I want to try some Laurecci. Go to Comment
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-05-30 11:24 PM
5/5. I want to try some Laurecci. Go to Comment
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