There are game stats, but it isn't necessary to understand him, so that's cool.
Seems pretty average- what do the items do? What is his personality?

3/5. Go to Comment

I give it a 85 because it has catchy lyric and is easy to dance to.....

Okay, my age is showing again.

It is a very well written piece and a good character. Thought it has some defined game system elements, they are not required to understanding the character. Go to Comment

Nicely written...
Though you could have altered it a bit - so, it is just a character you played. You could have described his personality into greater depth, and his interactions with the group as well.
It's pretty much alright. 3/5 Go to Comment

You now, I kinda find myself liking the first person narrative and the style of 'Roleplaying Notes' you use. Personal experiences, who the character was, how he was used, etc

I also like the list of things he learned in the Night Below :) Go to Comment