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Eib-ha-bok
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-03-20 09:49 PM
Nice if a bit uber-powerful. Go to Comment
Eib-ha-bok
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Murometz's comment on 2010-03-24 06:15 PM
Been meaning to comment, having read this...

I like this nebulous lovecraftian entity. First of all, great name! Second I like that "he" is generalized, and though you add nice details on the priests, everything can be recalibrated per campaign needs. Third, I like the time-consuming hook.

Good stuff. (Also like manfred's idea) Go to Comment
Eib-ha-bok
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Redgre's comment on 2010-03-21 03:23 PM
I like your option manfred and I would like to add it to the main submission, with your permission of course.

Question: Why do you say the priests are uber-powerful? Devil's advocate for one second... doesn't an AD&D cleric of the same level have 3x the tricks and almost all of them are more useful? I agree combining this with wizardry could be a deadly combination but on it's own... it's not that impressive to me. If anything I was thinking they would need an upgrade. However, time magic is always tricky... either too powerful or too weak.

I'm sure the devil is in the detail on this one. Additional clarification most certainly would have helped. Perhaps I submitted it too early in a desire to meet the quest deadline.

Thanks for your feedback. Go to Comment
Eib-ha-bok
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Redgre's comment on 2010-03-29 09:56 AM
I like your ideas with special note on your Time Knots idea. This idea adds a great deal of purpose to the cult I was still stewing over. My original intention was actually more of a side quest with a second part or a problem that was to be 'trickled' into the campaign and become increasingly important as the adventure progressed. I think it could now be much more... I will be updating this submission soon and will be making reference to your additions. Thanks a lot for your ideas. Go to Comment
The Fares Family of Deities
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-03-11 04:11 PM
Nice. You took lots of time over it. Go to Comment
The Fares Family of Deities
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-17 01:25 AM
I quite like the write-up of this family of Gods and the setting when you explained the inspiration for them. But I think some of the background needs to be expanded eg. who tempered with the contract b/w Retir & Dharina and why.
btw, I think the bracer thing that you mentioned are called armguards
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The Fares Family of Deities
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Redgre's comment on 2010-03-11 04:34 PM
F.Y.I. There is more... I just wanted to give a summary and see how well it's received before fleshing the rest of it out for you. Let me know what you would like completed as a individual entry. Thanks for your attention. Go to Comment
The Fares Family of Deities
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Redgre's comment on 2010-03-13 11:33 AM
This isn't the complete batch of deities. I guess I can see why you thought it was complete. This submission is only a single family and a summary at that... to give you, the folks at Strolen, a chance to decide if fleshing out the whole world here, is worth it. Making the myths is more difficult as all original deities how ever many that might be, could be included in each myth. I'm seeking collaboration on this and was unsure which direction I should go with submission types etc. and I figure that a future codex of all contributions might be best. Go to Comment
The Fares Family of Deities
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Redgre's comment on 2013-05-20 04:34 PM
This was going to be huge... I was going to flesh out each deity, their priesthoods, and their dogma in separate submissions. Lack of interest convinced me drop the project. I have to admit that Retir & Dharina where more developed than most. Thanks for giving it a look, Moonlake. If this is something that would be used, I might pick it up again. Go to Comment
The Fares Family of Deities
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tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2010-03-13 08:19 AM
The origin concept is pretty cool, the gods are okay.

I know it's a first draft, feels like it. I think the myths need some more detail and the composition needs tightening up, but it's a nice first pass, a good overall concept and a good reason for very different gods to be thrown together - in fact I'm surprised they aren't more different. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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Strolen's comment on 2010-01-28 05:46 PM
Update: Updated numbered formatting as requested. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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manfred's comment on 2010-01-31 03:53 PM
Nice list indeed! Care to make a generator from that? :)

I like the #62 most, but the not flashy options are important too. Great work, Redgre! Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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MoonHunter's comment on 2010-02-21 05:42 PM
Basic utility post for those that don't know wht they want to do with a town, city, ec. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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Scrasamax's comment on 2012-11-11 01:50 AM
How did I not see this before??? I have rectified this egregious oversight with a Hall of Honor nod and a Johnny Come Lately Golden Nomination. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-01-28 10:14 PM
All good-I like #23 the best with it's drunken mayor. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2010-01-29 06:59 AM
Massive submission. Obviously a lot of work went into this.

I found #51 amusing, and particularly liked the last half of the city traits. The first fifty felt somewhat mundane, but hey, not every city can have mountains suspended in the air above them. ;)

5/5
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Dozus's comment on 2012-11-03 05:27 AM
I do agree. It's a list that could be purely practical and boring, but it's practical and interesting, and finely written. The kudosiest or kudos to Redgre for this one. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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Murometz's comment on 2010-09-24 08:13 PM
How did I miss this one? Masterfully done, Redgre! Will be used. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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axlerowes's comment on 2012-11-03 09:34 AM
I like these tools for gaming, they are not in depth disquisitions or stories, but they are fun. Nicely done. Go to Comment
100 Unique Town/City Properties
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axlerowes's comment on 2012-11-10 08:35 PM
Bump, my comment may have sounded negative, but I admire this. Go to Comment
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