I really like this weapon, and the twists mean it can be integrated into your campaign and gives it potential for great story telling.
If your gaming system has a way of compelling PCs to act in a certain way, it would be great to have biter slowly transform its wielder as it becomes hungry.
I really see it as a quiet parasite, slowly chnaging the behaviour of its owner to further the axe's purpose, in the same way as Toxoplasma gondii makes rodents seek cat pheromone, Biter would make the owner pick fights with the races that Biter likes.
It could be really fun to GM, with a few "You know, this guy is really getting on your nerves, and you have no idea why..." dropped every so often.
4.5//5
Now there's a weapon with personality! Love the flavor of this piece. I'm sorely tempted to use it one day, if I find the right PC to weild it.
Three votes to post as it, I like the three alchemists youve created, they are far from the reflex guy in a wooden slat market shop herb sellers
Give us all 30, I say.
If you are concerned about the sheer amount of text, to make it more browse-able, you could provide a teaser (a few words) telling what each is about.
Good content, this one. Some of them stand out as excellent, like the Heir of Wishes. Some are adorable - the Prodigy. A few of them could use improvement, like 7 or 23.
I can see myself using this.
This looks very cool, I would pack all thirty into one submission and look at responses. I can not tell you if its too much if I do not see them all together. However, in my opinion, as long as a sub is good, it is not too large. My two cents.
Great one, Redgre! I was bored at work today and started skimming this submission again, and lost myself in the details for an hour.
Ye gods! Quite the work here Sir!
Lots of good content, linkage to other subs, not just your own, interesting characters. Top notch!
This may be one of my favorite submissions in a long, long time. Thanks for posting all 30!
And a fifth vote. Seriously, you really can't give us TOO much information; I doubt too many people come here who aren't interested in packing more stuff in.
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An axe that so loves to be fed.
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