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Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2009-12-30 11:32 PM
Excellent zombie support, and I really like the variance of its payload. A nice abhorrence I intend to spring on my players. :)

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Khelekgundhal
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-19 06:47 PM
A good idea, I like the bit about the Worm. Other bits like the killing of the parents are a bit cliche and over the top. Go to Comment
Khelekgundhal
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-05 06:34 PM
An interesting demon - and usable. I'd would have avoided starting so many sentences with his name though - seem a little odd. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2009-11-18 12:02 PM
Great presentation. Wouldn't expect something like this would require such expansive showmanship if the buyer could afford it...unless it was cursed with a ghost and succubi!! :) Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2009-11-18 03:03 AM
Handy? Convenient? Yes.
Writing is OK.
But, for a magical world, it seems to make the wondrous mundane. I used something similar back when I was 16; now I recall I should have done it differently.

Truth be said, I'd prefer extraplanar pocket realms to be more mysterious, personalized, surreal than an utilitarian hideaway that is on sale. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-18 12:40 PM
Well presented. 4/5 Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2009-11-18 11:00 AM
ah, the tiny hut of Mr. Leomund re-imagined. The presentation is good. I also like the plothook involving succubi and the ghost of the owner, who has paid a steep price for his horniness :)

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Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-12-11 05:02 PM
I usually shy away from "Cute magic" and in my opinion extra dimensional space is deal changer in all games, but this is fantastic. In my younger gaming days, things like this were the end all of be all of the fantasy setting. I like the plot attached, the mechanics of the item and the presentation is wonderful. Really a useable submission well put together and with fun tone to the piece. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-05 06:31 PM
Cool item - the plot idea at the end really made it for me! Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Redgre's comment on 2009-11-18 12:33 PM
Thank you for the comments. FYI I only presented it in a salesman type way for fun and to see if I could sell it to you as authors or DMs. Yes, I would think an object like this would be very rare and if it were on sale I would suspect something pretty bad to come of it (i.e. a dumping feature similar to the damning sack by valadaar). I think that utility magic is always underrated and perhaps the power level of this item is too high. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
gulkien's comment on 2011-12-20 08:05 PM


wish I had one of these cause its bad ass



 


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Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Pieh's comment on 2009-11-20 02:16 PM
I wouldn't say we don't like stats at all. They can be useful in understanding the properties of an item, if used properly. Don't get discouraged, it's just a site policy (That I think some are overly zealous about) to remain system-neutral and try to make submissions able to fit into anyone's game. All in all, very nice first post. Keep them coming. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-17 02:38 PM
3.5....-0.5 for the stats, otherwise it would be a 4. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-17 09:44 PM
We don't really like stats mentioned here very much. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2009-11-18 11:02 AM
Yep, we are a stats-free site, but you can always put into words what the effects are.

I like the item. Protection for the gore-hound :) and nice quirks on the potential drawbacks. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Drackler's comment on 2011-02-25 09:13 PM


I like it, too. It would be useful to have when running around dungeons and mysterious ruins. Just hope you don't run into a pack of undead. I think that a character may be well-advised to not charge it until the first creature killed outside of town, to avoid getting suspicious glances from the constabulary.



 Which brings me to a question: Does the Blood Cloak always have the same amount of blood dripping from it? Or would it gradually lose liquid as the charge is used up? For instance, if you've almost run out of stored blood, might you only appear as some sort of crazed murderer with a few splatters?



 Bonus points for providing a cursed equivalent.


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Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-12-11 04:53 PM
Nice idea, developed well enough to be useful and with some nice hints about expansion. I know a few players who would really enjoy this.

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Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-05 06:28 PM
Could you put the coat on pigs and then slaughter them to charge it?

Neat item

Now, there are few grammar issues you might want to clear up.

"When the wearer takes damage from a piercing, slashing, or hacking weapons the number of hitpoints the wearer loses are added to the cloak's hitpoints as long as that does not take the cloak above it's maximum (providing the wearer does have blood sorry warforged etc.)."

I'd break that into a couple of sentences with one specifically intended to screen out beings without blood. The provision there simply does not fit as part of the current sentence.
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Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Redgre's comment on 2009-11-17 02:50 PM
Just so I don't mess this up again in the future... What was wrong with the stats? Thanks. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Redgre's comment on 2011-02-25 11:52 PM
Obviously, feel free to tailor to your uses. Here's what I had in mind: When it's fully charged, the wearer looks like they just went for a bath in a river of blood. As it looses charges, the points of impact are 'dried' and become the original brown color. So yes, I agree with your statement that the wearer of a slightly charged blood cloak would look like a crazed murderer with just a few splatters. If the wearer receives a cut, his own blood makes a big red spot on the cloak at the point of the hit just like blood would spread in normal clothes.

Thanks for the comment. After all these years you wonder if anyone looks at your old submissions anymore. Go to Comment
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