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Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
dark_dragon's comment on 2010-02-15 04:31 PM
Because I forgot to vote! 4/5 Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-21 03:55 PM
Update: Just added the credit Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-21 04:08 PM
Update: Small grammatical change, I sadly didn't catch on my first proof reads. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-22 11:51 PM
Thank you, MoonHunter & Murometz for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I would like to take a stab at answering MoonHunter's question(s). When getting into building an apocalyptic undead army, there is always costs, tactics, availability, and many other concerns. If you fail to diversify your army you are bound to run into trouble. For example, giant sized zombies are great at gate crashing and breaking a shield wall, but if outnumbered by smaller units, it tends to get overwhelmed. Another way of looking at it is damage per second (per hex perhaps). If a maximum of 5 or 6 zombies can engage a single human sized opponent, then with a Gravyman that number is effectively higher. One last thing to consider is priests or clerics turn ability. Their "anti-undead specialization" does need to be countered for effective world domination. The Gravyman can offer a solution. Hope that helps. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2010-04-20 05:24 PM
Update: Added: Author's note, Marshland potion to the list, and corrected grammatical/spelling issues raised by dark_dragon. Also I modified the summary. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2009-12-30 11:32 PM
Excellent zombie support, and I really like the variance of its payload. A nice abhorrence I intend to spring on my players. :)

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Khelekgundhal
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-19 06:47 PM
A good idea, I like the bit about the Worm. Other bits like the killing of the parents are a bit cliche and over the top. Go to Comment
Khelekgundhal
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-05 06:34 PM
An interesting demon - and usable. I'd would have avoided starting so many sentences with his name though - seem a little odd. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2009-11-18 12:02 PM
Great presentation. Wouldn't expect something like this would require such expansive showmanship if the buyer could afford it...unless it was cursed with a ghost and succubi!! :) Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2009-11-18 03:03 AM
Handy? Convenient? Yes.
Writing is OK.
But, for a magical world, it seems to make the wondrous mundane. I used something similar back when I was 16; now I recall I should have done it differently.

Truth be said, I'd prefer extraplanar pocket realms to be more mysterious, personalized, surreal than an utilitarian hideaway that is on sale. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-18 12:40 PM
Well presented. 4/5 Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2009-11-18 11:00 AM
ah, the tiny hut of Mr. Leomund re-imagined. The presentation is good. I also like the plothook involving succubi and the ghost of the owner, who has paid a steep price for his horniness :)

Welcome to the citadel! Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-12-11 05:02 PM
I usually shy away from "Cute magic" and in my opinion extra dimensional space is deal changer in all games, but this is fantastic. In my younger gaming days, things like this were the end all of be all of the fantasy setting. I like the plot attached, the mechanics of the item and the presentation is wonderful. Really a useable submission well put together and with fun tone to the piece. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-05 06:31 PM
Cool item - the plot idea at the end really made it for me! Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Redgre's comment on 2009-11-18 12:33 PM
Thank you for the comments. FYI I only presented it in a salesman type way for fun and to see if I could sell it to you as authors or DMs. Yes, I would think an object like this would be very rare and if it were on sale I would suspect something pretty bad to come of it (i.e. a dumping feature similar to the damning sack by valadaar). I think that utility magic is always underrated and perhaps the power level of this item is too high. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
gulkien's comment on 2011-12-20 08:05 PM


wish I had one of these cause its bad ass



 


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Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Pieh's comment on 2009-11-20 02:16 PM
I wouldn't say we don't like stats at all. They can be useful in understanding the properties of an item, if used properly. Don't get discouraged, it's just a site policy (That I think some are overly zealous about) to remain system-neutral and try to make submissions able to fit into anyone's game. All in all, very nice first post. Keep them coming. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-17 02:38 PM
3.5....-0.5 for the stats, otherwise it would be a 4. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-17 09:44 PM
We don't really like stats mentioned here very much. Go to Comment
Blood Cloak
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2009-11-18 11:02 AM
Yep, we are a stats-free site, but you can always put into words what the effects are.

I like the item. Protection for the gore-hound :) and nice quirks on the potential drawbacks. Go to Comment
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