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Cannibal Magic
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2010-01-08 02:25 PM
Very nice. I'd go a different route with the eighth time, basically a cannibalistic version of the magical "passing through the Abyss." Anyway still a cool concept. Reminds me of a passage from the Book of the Law:

"Worship me with fire & blood; worship me with swords & with spears. Let the woman be girt with a sword before me: let blood flow to my name. Trample down the Heathen; be upon them, o warrior, I will give you of their flesh to eat!" Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2010-02-15 10:57 AM
Once it gets to a location you wouldn't want to destroy it for fear of its cargo being released in a huge cloud. Key would be getting to these early. The army/support unit of this one has me envisioning controlled zombie wars. Not what I am used to :) Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
manfred's comment on 2009-12-27 08:06 PM
A zombie support unit? Well, if you are building undead armies, why the heck not! Makes an amusing "medic" unit for the troops. :) Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
manfred's comment on 2009-12-28 01:24 PM
And oh, then there is the Marshland: a strangely thick fog, that slows down all living beings in it down to the speed of zombies. Nothing like competing on even ground. :-> Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-12-22 08:04 PM
Apocalyptic Zombie?

Still an interesting concept if you necromancers like pushing the edge of their own magical technology. The question is... why would they?

I mean they are more effective than regular zombies, as a zombie support role. Why would they make these rather than just get a zombie bull or a bigger zombie creature? Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2010-01-01 04:50 PM
Nice, and by nice I mean it has the potential to be stomach turningly disgusting. I love the name too, zombie gravy! Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-12-23 12:32 PM
5/5, truely a new take on the zombie. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2009-12-22 08:21 PM
Cool, a "30" entry expanded and then some!

Moon's question is a good one, but I have enough juicy details here to use these guys.

This is a sweet paragraph!

"A Gravyman is created to have it's giant baglike stomach filled with one of a number of different possible potions. The zombie breathes in air, the air mixes with the potion, and a gas is released. The four lungs help produce a whole lot of the gas really quickly and belch it out making a large cloud in moments. The gas produced is what makes a Gravyman worth making." Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2010-01-05 02:32 PM
I do believe this is my fave Quest entry so far. *thumb up* Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-23 12:16 AM
I see a little Left 4 Dead here as well, but only a little. You have added so much beyond that trace and the name - Gravyman - is suitably disturbing.

Well done sir!
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Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
dark_dragon's comment on 2010-02-15 04:21 PM
some errors in the post:

s/The zombie has a soul purpose of/The zombie has the sole purpose of/g
s/undead within it's vacinity/undead within its vicinity/g

Otherwise a nice new undead! I like the different payloads and possible uses. The Mirror Image and Hallucinatory gases are what I'd like to throw my players into. Good job on a suitably repulsive undead! I can see a whole range of further zombie support coming into play. Lots of cool ideas flowing into my brain from this. Cool! (not sure where the apocalypse comes in though...) Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
dark_dragon's comment on 2010-02-15 04:31 PM
Because I forgot to vote! 4/5 Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-21 03:55 PM
Update: Just added the credit Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-21 04:08 PM
Update: Small grammatical change, I sadly didn't catch on my first proof reads. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2009-12-22 11:51 PM
Thank you, MoonHunter & Murometz for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I would like to take a stab at answering MoonHunter's question(s). When getting into building an apocalyptic undead army, there is always costs, tactics, availability, and many other concerns. If you fail to diversify your army you are bound to run into trouble. For example, giant sized zombies are great at gate crashing and breaking a shield wall, but if outnumbered by smaller units, it tends to get overwhelmed. Another way of looking at it is damage per second (per hex perhaps). If a maximum of 5 or 6 zombies can engage a single human sized opponent, then with a Gravyman that number is effectively higher. One last thing to consider is priests or clerics turn ability. Their "anti-undead specialization" does need to be countered for effective world domination. The Gravyman can offer a solution. Hope that helps. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Redgre's comment on 2010-04-20 05:24 PM
Update: Added: Author's note, Marshland potion to the list, and corrected grammatical/spelling issues raised by dark_dragon. Also I modified the summary. Go to Comment
Gravyman
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2009-12-30 11:32 PM
Excellent zombie support, and I really like the variance of its payload. A nice abhorrence I intend to spring on my players. :)

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Khelekgundhal
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-11-19 06:47 PM
A good idea, I like the bit about the Worm. Other bits like the killing of the parents are a bit cliche and over the top. Go to Comment
Khelekgundhal
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-12-05 06:34 PM
An interesting demon - and usable. I'd would have avoided starting so many sentences with his name though - seem a little odd. Go to Comment
Accomodations in a Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2009-11-18 12:02 PM
Great presentation. Wouldn't expect something like this would require such expansive showmanship if the buyer could afford it...unless it was cursed with a ghost and succubi!! :) Go to Comment
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