I can't find anything to criticize here -- this is a truly excellent sub. It's easily applied to other campaign settings, and hints at a rich culture under the surface. I'm already thinking of ways to apply this to my game, so here's two paws up and an HoH for good measure. 5/5
I like this alot - it exemplifies a good, solid "Warrior Code." Perhaps it's just my realism (bordering on Cynicism) kicking in but this, to me, looks alot like a Code of chivalry. I never supposed Mercenaries abided by a Code of Honor save for "Win the battle, get the gold, head home."
All in all, for what it is, it's absolutely great. I like the language especially. Simple, written very much like a Medieval document, but at the same time flowery in it's own right, without being verbose at all.
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