You had me at "You can feel the grip pulse".

I was then fully yours when the wounds bled sand momentarily and, if severed, shatters as sand. Great details and those sold me on it. The stats and such, while distracting, were easy to flow right through to see the beauty (ugliness?) of the ideas.

Awesome first sub!!

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Neat. I've always has a soft spot for the khopesh, and remarkably usable weapons of less suitable materials. Flavor is good, names are great, history is fun. Solid.

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And it's stuff like this that remind me of why I love the flavor of the WH settings, it's a well crafted sub with a very good backstory.

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I never played Warhammer, but i like the style of this blade. Good names, good details, good stuff.

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 An excellent first sub. Welcome aboard!  

 

 

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Warhammer is indeed inspiring.

Welcome to the site, a good first submission :)

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Vote added.

4.0/5

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This will be perfect for the new campaign I'm just getting off the ground (Ancient Near East -ish.) I like this new take on the vampiric weapon trope and the description makes it very unique and cool.

I too like the flavor of WH. Even though I am only mildly familiar with the system, I regularly raid the sourcebooks for ideas (I am currently "plaguing" the party with Skaven and my Chiros sub was partially inspired by the Vampire Counts.)

I did get tripped up a bit by the stats. I could gather the meaning of most by context, but I don't know what Chaos Dice are or how I might translate that into my system of choice. More system neutral description would be much appreciated.

Overall this is an excellent first sub. Welcome!

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Thank you, that is a massive complement to me :)

I just hope my players feel the same sense of "Warhammer-ness" when I run games :P Go to Comment

Thank you :)

In my opinion, Warhammer evokes such awesome ideas that, after reading through some of the books, any GM should be brimming with stuff like this!

Plus, the beauty of it is, the setting is so hard on players that they eventually kind of 'look forward to' the next exciting way you will almost kill them all :P

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Thank you very much!

I didn't know whether to put the stats in there, but I thought if I left them as simply explained as possible, they wouldn't be too intrusive. Glad that paid off :)

Definitely looking forward to submitting more, and I certainly have a lot more Warhammer inspired (yet, ultimately, setting neutral stuff) all ready to go. Go to Comment

Glad to be of service :) And thank you!

I have to check out the Chiros sub then, as I love WH Vampires. They are just so much more evil and insane than any other vampire lore I can find.

Sorry about the stats... Basically, Chaos Dice increase the chance of spells going haywire, whilst not in any way adding to the casting. Normally, you cast magic by rolling a dice pool and adding up the numbers. If the numbers pass the target number, you cast the spell. If you get any doubles, triples, etc, then you get a miscast. Chaos Dice only count towards getting doubles, etc, but not towards the total target number.

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