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Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-28 10:54 PM
A very Confucian tale for a very interesting creature. A spirit to represent Culture, fading away as the people fall away from the ideals of the past.

A striking creation: 5/5. Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Fallen Angel's comment on 2010-11-01 12:24 PM


5/5

 



Very ethnic and confuscian.


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Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Kassy's comment on 2014-07-24 12:40 PM
5/5 + HoH + Fav'd.

One word: brilliant! Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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hylandpad's comment on 2011-08-22 10:44 AM


Wow. This is a beautiful sub. I never, in my wildest dreams, would have concocted an elemental of culture. Truly, this is a majestic and beautiful creature. The submission was written wonderfully, and I applaud you on originality!



Easily 5/5


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The Lizard Who Leaves His Tail With The Cat
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2007-02-14 12:50 AM
This reads like its just about finished. Is it ready for consumption Psalm?

(let me be the first to say, the title is sublime!) Go to Comment
Luther Von Brandt
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-08 09:44 AM
Well-written and nothing new. Your basic good-looking wealthy killer. Go to Comment
Luther Von Brandt
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-08 09:49 AM
Extra points for lycanthropy and actually doing a song of fantasy entry. It is well written, but in the end, not that exciting. Still some good dramatic hooks. High Paw! Go to Comment
Luther Von Brandt
NPCs  (Major)   (Mercantile)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-08 09:50 AM
not bad, not bad at all. I like the application of the song into a character, and I think that his rise to power and subsequent 'exile' were quite well written. Go to Comment
Luther Von Brandt
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-08-08 09:07 AM
Not all that original, but a nicely executed take on a standard theme

Solid, useful NPC – would make a good campaign villain

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Luther Von Brandt
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-07 11:58 PM
I happen to love Warren Zevon!

There's not much new in this werewolf, but its an interesting read.

"Whats that Poirot?"
"It is nothing less Hastings than, how you say? the key which opens every door!"
"It looks like a bit of dog fur, Poirot"
"No Hastings! Its is not of the dog"
"I dare say old boy, Wolf?"
"Werewolf Hastings! or at least thats what the murderer wants us to believe." Go to Comment
Luther Von Brandt
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valadaar's comment on 2014-06-04 12:45 PM
A good mid-range villain. A mini-campaign could rotate around this fellow.

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Doctor Ghanek
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-05-21 11:12 AM
This is a wonderful submission. I originally have some reservations about her cyberware (call it what you will, that is what it effectively is.. jsut with a different f/x), however the character is complete. It has good dramatic potential, lots of hook. It is well writtend and thought out. In short, two paws and a tail up. Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Iain's comment on 2006-05-22 10:06 AM
Absolutely superb. An amazing character with many many good plot hooks. Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-21 09:48 AM
Now this is an intersting Orc carecter. Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-08-08 08:58 AM
Great stuff Psalmanazar – original and well thought out – a complex character with strong motivations and a believable background – 5/5 and a Hall of Honour Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Psalmanazar's comment on 2006-05-15 09:20 PM
Updated: Updated: Added a bit of information on her combat potential. Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Psalmanazar's comment on 2006-05-18 07:28 PM
Updated: Updated: Updated: did a little re-organization of the appearance and equipment sections, and a bit of a re-write to the roleplaying notes. Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Psalmanazar's comment on 2006-05-18 07:29 PM
Well, anyone have any suggestions or comments before I turn her into a proper submission? Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-14 04:04 PM
Psalmanazar, I really like your work. This, and Candles of God. Very original. Intriguing concepts. Ripe with tangential ideas! Go to Comment
Doctor Ghanek
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Murometz's comment on 2007-01-10 10:35 PM
BUMP, check out her EYE!!! Go to Comment
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       By: Strolen

A flower possibly in the plains or maybe all over that is always tilted towards a certain place. Sunflowers. Could possibly follow the sun or could be forever facing a certain position because of something that happened, either the air forcing it that way and it staying, the fire was so strong that the flowers faced away from it. It could be that in one spot a large fire was made or a fire war where many fire elementals were destroyed by the True Gods and radiating out from that point all of this flower is facing away from it so no matter where you are you always know where this place is by seeing which way the flower is facing away from.

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