Wow. This is a beautiful sub. I never, in my wildest dreams, would have concocted an elemental of culture. Truly, this is a majestic and beautiful creature. The submission was written wonderfully, and I applaud you on originality!
Extra points for lycanthropy and actually doing a song of fantasy entry. It is well written, but in the end, not that exciting. Still some good dramatic hooks. High Paw! Go to Comment
not bad, not bad at all. I like the application of the song into a character, and I think that his rise to power and subsequent 'exile' were quite well written. Go to Comment
There's not much new in this werewolf, but its an interesting read.
"Whats that Poirot?"
"It is nothing less Hastings than, how you say? the key which opens every door!"
"It looks like a bit of dog fur, Poirot"
"No Hastings! Its is not of the dog"
"I dare say old boy, Wolf?"
"Werewolf Hastings! or at least thats what the murderer wants us to believe." Go to Comment
This is a wonderful submission. I originally have some reservations about her cyberware (call it what you will, that is what it effectively is.. jsut with a different f/x), however the character is complete. It has good dramatic potential, lots of hook. It is well writtend and thought out. In short, two paws and a tail up. Go to Comment
Great stuff Psalmanazar – original and well thought out – a complex character with strong motivations and a believable background – 5/5 and a Hall of Honour Go to Comment
Updated: Updated: Updated: did a little re-organization of the appearance and equipment sections, and a bit of a re-write to the roleplaying notes. Go to Comment
Lifeforms (Unique) (City/ Ruin)
A striking creation: 5/5. Go to Comment