Wow. This is a beautiful sub. I never, in my wildest dreams, would have concocted an elemental of culture. Truly, this is a majestic and beautiful creature. The submission was written wonderfully, and I applaud you on originality!
There's not much new in this werewolf, but its an interesting read.
"Whats that Poirot?"
"It is nothing less Hastings than, how you say? the key which opens every door!"
"It looks like a bit of dog fur, Poirot"
"No Hastings! Its is not of the dog"
"I dare say old boy, Wolf?"
"Werewolf Hastings! or at least thats what the murderer wants us to believe." Go to Comment
This is a wonderful submission. I originally have some reservations about her cyberware (call it what you will, that is what it effectively is.. jsut with a different f/x), however the character is complete. It has good dramatic potential, lots of hook. It is well writtend and thought out. In short, two paws and a tail up. Go to Comment
When the campfires grow dim, stories are told. Stories of lost cities, great heroes and legends of old. One of these is the story of Knurlheim. Once the proud capital of the Dwarfs, now a ruin- abandoned long ago. Filled with vast riches and treasure. It’s secrets forgotten with the decline of the Dwarfs, long ago. No one knows is certain if it ever exsisted at all.