Wow. This is a beautiful sub. I never, in my wildest dreams, would have concocted an elemental of culture. Truly, this is a majestic and beautiful creature. The submission was written wonderfully, and I applaud you on originality!
There's not much new in this werewolf, but its an interesting read.
"Whats that Poirot?"
"It is nothing less Hastings than, how you say? the key which opens every door!"
"It looks like a bit of dog fur, Poirot"
"No Hastings! Its is not of the dog"
"I dare say old boy, Wolf?"
"Werewolf Hastings! or at least thats what the murderer wants us to believe." Go to Comment
This is a wonderful submission. I originally have some reservations about her cyberware (call it what you will, that is what it effectively is.. jsut with a different f/x), however the character is complete. It has good dramatic potential, lots of hook. It is well writtend and thought out. In short, two paws and a tail up. Go to Comment
A flower possibly in the plains or maybe all over that is always tilted towards a certain place. Sunflowers. Could possibly follow the sun or could be forever facing a certain position because of something that happened, either the air forcing it that way and it staying, the fire was so strong that the flowers faced away from it. It could be that in one spot a large fire was made or a fire war where many fire elementals were destroyed by the True Gods and radiating out from that point all of this flower is facing away from it so no matter where you are you always know where this place is by seeing which way the flower is facing away from.