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John Bloodycoat
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-12-01 12:23 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-01 01:47 AM
I like this piece. Normally I despise story pieces as often the narratives get in the way of transmitting information about the character/ things. This was exceptionally done, so it mullifies my normal complaints about it (though it was a tough read). This has a number of great hooks and dramatic plotlines (historical or world current) which have an impact. The character is useful, and who knows maybe a PC might need to be the John Bloodycoat of his generation. Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-01 11:38 PM
Not bad, though it was rather tough to read. I would have liked to seen the narrative broken up and some information presented in a normal format as opposed to the inflective. Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-01 11:46 AM
I have been waiting so long for the chance to give this a 5/5 and an HOH. Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-12-05 03:01 PM
I agree with my peers here. While it was a good account of folklore, it was a pain to read. Not so that it was hard, as I could continue on without much pause in determining words, but reading text in such abundance in that manner is difficult on the eyes. Otherwise a great sub in my book. It rings of a political headless horseman. Go to Comment
John Bloodycoat
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-01 12:59 PM
A great story, and I love the choice of period.

Well Done! Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Strolen's comment on 2006-10-07 02:05 PM
Pretty darn cool and well-written. Very usuable! Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2006-11-12 01:29 PM
Congratulations to the winner of the "One of a Kind Quest". First place and 100XP goes to

Psalmanazar!
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Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-28 11:39 PM
Been waiting for you to release this... Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Kassil's comment on 2006-12-21 01:09 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-29 01:59 PM
Lovely. An exceptional idea wrapped in a wonderful package of literary grace. I will throw a HoH at this sometime. For now it has to take my 5. Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-10-10 04:49 AM
Very nice!
And Psalmanazar: If you read this, you must go to the forums and vote on finalists to be eligible to win the lifeforms competition! You must vote before the 15th of october. Here's the link:
http://www.strolen.com/guild/index.php/topic,3577.msg48110.html#new Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-30 12:06 AM
Ah, the rogue philosopher is very close to my own doorstep :P

This is well written, and the decline of the Zhâo Wén Jûn in the prolog is quite poingant. While the idea of a elemental of culture is not new to me, this is without a doubt the best presentation of a intellectual/societal spirit that i have ever read. Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-28 08:58 PM
Could this be offered a new paper body and if so would it accept it? Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-10-03 05:20 AM
Excellently written! Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Incarnadine's comment on 2006-09-28 09:33 PM
Beautiful.

Other than a few minor grammatical errors (I don't know what a 'li' is, and the spelling of nearly), this work is executed with a definitive flair of the imagination.

It's also written damned well. Kudos. Go to Comment
Zhâo Wén Jûn, The Morning Lord of Writings
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-28 09:03 PM
Wonderully written. You get tomorrow's HoH Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-09-29 06:55 AM
Love it. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-29 11:07 AM
Psalmanazar, wish you posted more often, I'm a big fan of your stuff! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-29 11:45 AM
This is truly an impressive sub! Great work! Go to Comment
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