Sorry, not clear there. They don't need to serve the fifteen years to be able to be promoted. If you show promise during your term as a turm (did I really just write that?) then you are put forward for promotion to Templar. This could be a tany time during your time in the lower ranks. Go to Comment
Well presented submission, the adventure hooks are good and the character is well explained even if there isnt much on him, rather than his deeds. The character reminds me of the main character from The 13th Warrior. Go to Comment
A nation was conquered and the conquerers took control and put themselves in all positions of authority. One major problem, the new rulers and the now peasant/ruled class speak entirely different languages.