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The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
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valadaar's comment on 2010-08-29 07:51 PM
I think this one needs to stew a little more - it feels unfinished. Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
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Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 09:23 PM


An intriguing concept. Overall, I think the sub brings out the evolution of the Mirror-folk very well. Also, I especially like the first paragraph of Closing Thoughts.


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The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
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outrider's comment on 2010-09-29 06:13 PM
I would need to have more information about where they came from. Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
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Dossta's comment on 2010-09-30 11:44 AM
The Mihrral made me laugh out loud. Nicely done!

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Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Pieh's comment on 2010-08-27 11:15 PM
The thorns as weapon would be a rare sight. But, I imagine rare enough that it couldn't hurt to make them permanent until discharged. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-08-26 08:37 PM
Very impressive. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2010-08-26 10:11 PM
Nice to come back to the citadel and see something like this pop up fresh and new. Very interesting and quirky... The whip idea for the thorns are a nice added touch. For someone who likes simple and new items of mystery/ magic I give this a good job. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2010-08-27 10:27 PM
Also.... what is the duration of the thorns as a weapon? Do they have a life span as well or is it a permanent thing? Go to Comment
Augment Trees
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Chaosmark's comment on 2010-08-26 11:41 PM
This is quite eye-catching. I love the idea of the quickly shifting thorns protecting inherently magical stones that possess nifty properties. The randomness of the stone effects is almost detracting from the idea, up until you remember that this tree only grows and thrives in areas contaminated with chaotic magic.

One thing I might like to see is the life-cycle of the trees. Do normal trees start slowly mutating into Augment Trees, or do seeds from normal and Augment Trees fall to the earth and soak up the contamination themselves, sprouting and growing as Augments instead of normal trees? Go to Comment
Augment Trees
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Hrofgar's comment on 2010-08-31 10:22 PM
Very cool. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
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valadaar's comment on 2010-08-29 07:49 PM
Pretty cool Pieh - though if they are portable, you may wish to change the numbers to make the more powerful effect less likely.



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Augment Trees
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Blydden's comment on 2010-08-26 08:41 PM
You have no idea just how useful those Light Teal Stones would be in my house. Go to Comment
Rod of Duality
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Pieh's comment on 2010-08-16 12:05 PM
I don't think you understand how they work. They are two full-sized fighting staffs. They are magically bonded to each-other so that when you move one, the other moves in an opposite direction (relative to itself). They are not nunchucks. Go to Comment
Rod of Duality
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-08-16 08:49 AM
Useful magical nunchucks. Go to Comment
Rod of Duality
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2010-08-24 10:51 PM
I agree with valadaar... while having an item able to mimic its opposite is interesting but I fail to see exactly how this could be used in combat effectively. Seems rather confusing. Go to Comment
Rod of Duality
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valadaar's comment on 2010-08-24 03:34 PM
I think a little more description on how it would be used could help - how could I fight with it unless I stood in an area just as wide or wider then where the staff was located?

It seems that it would be difficult to use without additional telekinetic powers to position it properly.


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Rod of Duality
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Kassy's comment on 2012-04-22 10:44 AM


I too would like to see some clarification.



Apart from that it's a neat idea.


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Rod of Duality
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Dossta's comment on 2012-04-22 12:14 PM


I rather like this.  Having a second stave that mirrors one's motions could be a really nifty combat trick.  At the very least, the second stave would be causing general mayhem about 10 ft away while you engage an opponent directly.  Just watch out for friendly fire.


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The Demon-Stick
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-08-10 05:39 PM
A useful little item. Go to Comment
The Demon-Stick
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-08-11 07:33 PM
What happens if he did get out? Go to Comment
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