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Steelfeasters
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2010-09-02 06:56 PM
An awesome replacement for the rust monster. I'd add Rustcaller_Toxin as a related sub. One of these critters who used this poison would be really nasty. Go to Comment
Steelfeasters
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Underground)
Elbin's comment on 2013-05-29 02:24 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Lockzennites
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-21 11:13 PM


I quite like the underlying concept. Execution is also solid. The itallic bits in particular do heighten the atmosphere well. However, this piece somehow left me logically impressed while its emotional content didn't seem to have come across much in the overall sense. In aggregate, I still think this is a decent piece, hence the median score.


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The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Pieh's comment on 2010-09-29 04:57 PM
Update: HUGE UPDATE! PLEASE REVOTE! Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Pieh's comment on 2010-09-29 05:26 PM
Update: Another Update, just for you Outrider. Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Cheka Man's comment on 2010-08-27 04:29 PM
I don't think I could be nasty enough to shred the mind of one of these creatures. 5/5 Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-09-28 01:26 PM
The basics are in place, but I have to second Val. It feels unfinished. As it is now it is simply OK, but it has the potential to be very good. If this worked on I will update my vote accordingly. Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-09-29 05:42 PM
Vote update. I think your update makes the submission more complete and better in its execution. I still think your mirror Golems are a few notches better than this though. Good job Pieh! Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2010-08-29 06:51 PM
I think this one needs to stew a little more - it feels unfinished. Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 08:23 PM


An intriguing concept. Overall, I think the sub brings out the evolution of the Mirror-folk very well. Also, I especially like the first paragraph of Closing Thoughts.


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The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
outrider's comment on 2010-09-29 05:13 PM
I would need to have more information about where they came from. Go to Comment
The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Dossta's comment on 2010-09-30 10:44 AM
The Mihrral made me laugh out loud. Nicely done!

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Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Pieh's comment on 2010-08-27 10:15 PM
The thorns as weapon would be a rare sight. But, I imagine rare enough that it couldn't hurt to make them permanent until discharged. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Cheka Man's comment on 2010-08-26 07:37 PM
Very impressive. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2010-08-26 09:11 PM
Nice to come back to the citadel and see something like this pop up fresh and new. Very interesting and quirky... The whip idea for the thorns are a nice added touch. For someone who likes simple and new items of mystery/ magic I give this a good job. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2010-08-27 09:27 PM
Also.... what is the duration of the thorns as a weapon? Do they have a life span as well or is it a permanent thing? Go to Comment
Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Chaosmark's comment on 2010-08-26 10:41 PM
This is quite eye-catching. I love the idea of the quickly shifting thorns protecting inherently magical stones that possess nifty properties. The randomness of the stone effects is almost detracting from the idea, up until you remember that this tree only grows and thrives in areas contaminated with chaotic magic.

One thing I might like to see is the life-cycle of the trees. Do normal trees start slowly mutating into Augment Trees, or do seeds from normal and Augment Trees fall to the earth and soak up the contamination themselves, sprouting and growing as Augments instead of normal trees? Go to Comment
Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Hrofgar's comment on 2010-08-31 09:22 PM
Very cool. Go to Comment
Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2010-08-29 06:49 PM
Pretty cool Pieh - though if they are portable, you may wish to change the numbers to make the more powerful effect less likely.



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Augment Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Blydden's comment on 2010-08-26 07:41 PM
You have no idea just how useful those Light Teal Stones would be in my house. Go to Comment
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