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Harvester of Eyes
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Pieh's comment on 2010-11-14 06:46 AM


I think I need to post my inspiration for this piece.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oyaFu0PD7Vk



I think I captured the feel of the song quite well in my submission, what do you guy's think?


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Pieh's comment on 2010-12-21 11:35 PM
I actually started to go into detail about the God of Eyes and his place in the Ocular Court at one point during the write-up. It was interesting and I still have ideas for it, but it was mostly irrelevant to the submission and didn't fit the style I was going for. I am going to start the God of Eyes write-up soon, because there is interest in him. Thanks. Go to Comment
Harvester of Eyes
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Pieh's comment on 2013-05-01 09:54 PM
I got that detail from the song lyrics:

"I see a garbage can, I pick it up
I look through all the garbage
To see if there are any eyes inside
I'll put 'em in my pink leather bag"

I had made the assumption that the harvester was a male and the pink leather bag added something interesting to him so I went with it. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2010-11-16 08:45 AM


Nicely done, and creepy as all get out


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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-11-15 03:03 PM


I likewise would have preferred a madman to a cultist of elder gods, but Brent is allright, methinks.


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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-11-17 11:43 AM


I echo the others here, this would fit nicely for the one night session format. Nice one.


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Pariah's comment on 2010-12-23 12:21 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2010-12-23 12:26 AM
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 11:34 AM
I love the tone of this - its oddly self referential nature ("You see that Twack up there?")


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Ouroboros's comment on 2010-11-17 12:34 PM


I like this one as well. Both content and formatting are highly original, too. Nice work. Just about the only thing that annoys is the font-size bonanza, but that is really a minor complaint :)



 



//D 


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Silveressa's comment on 2010-12-21 08:51 PM


Not very often I give a 5.0, but this  is well presented and well written, makes for an easy plug in to any horror game out there.



(Eso terrorists and Supernatural it would fit into easily)



It'd be nice to see the god of eyes written up sometime, as it would make for an unique and nasty deity for characters to oppose.

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Silveressa's comment on 2010-12-21 08:55 PM


The nasty curse for his followers to cast  would be to force people to see visions of the future deaths of their loved ones. (a possible future only but the victims likely won't know that.)



This would work well on multiple levels. In game, its likely more horrifying for the characters to foresee the death of those they care about then of themselves.



Out of game players usually don't worry much about the gm railroading the deaths of their characters (rarely used tactic by any gm) but forcing the death of npc's in a particular manner happens plenty often, making this far more likely to be believed as an absolute future, rather then a possible one.


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Forganthus's comment on 2012-05-22 05:03 AM
What does he do with the eyes? I'm picturing an eye-ball studded monster that he keeps in a trashcan somewhere, close at hand, in case he ever has to unleash it at some overcurious snoops. Go to Comment
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olontur's comment on 2010-11-14 02:23 AM


This isn't what you usually see on Strolen. ;)



I really like it, though personally in a modern game, I'd prefer a psychopath to a cultist, and that would fit the Monster quest even better, but that's just my personal opinion...



 



Good work!


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Dossta's comment on 2010-11-15 02:13 PM


I agree with Strolen, that this would be a bit difficult to fit into an existing campaign, but I think that it could make a fun stand-alone adventure.  The imagery of this one is great, and I can see Brent singing the song you posted.


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herrozerro's comment on 2010-11-18 12:05 PM


Only Voted


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MysticMoon's comment on 2010-12-19 03:30 PM


This has a lot of flavor and makes me wish I was running a Cthulhu-esque game. I like it, especially the dark god aspect.



I think it could work well as either a Koontz thriller or an episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer.


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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-08-28 02:23 AM


Why is he a crossdresser? Just because?


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Strolen's comment on 2010-11-07 08:32 AM


Pieh owns the Moon Razer and wrote this on the night of a full moon, such the abrupt ending. The writing ended but the killing began!



A new take on werewolves perhaps.


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Pieh's comment on 2010-11-09 09:04 PM


I just got back to this piece, and I can't remember for the life of me what comes after "It can." We will go with Strolen's interpretation, as I can't seem to recall  what I did last night and my breath stinks of carrion.


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