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New Herbia
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-11-12 11:25 PM
New Herbia
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CrimsonShadow's comment on 2005-12-05 01:07 PM
There is quite an array of non-humans running around in this village. You might want to consider toning down the non-humans and turning this into a mythical place that may or may not really exist...just some thoughts. Go to Comment
New Herbia
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Murometz's comment on 2015-01-21 01:10 PM
Interesting town premise, could use some more love on the details Go to Comment
New Herbia
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-08-07 08:09 PM

Not far from the OgreSalt Ocean’s coastline there stood a small village named Erbia. Erbia was frequented by aquatic humanoids and basically anything else you could imagine that would visit a small town for shelter and food.

I don't know I can imagine a lot.


Two adventurers, one was a Humanoid Lizard whos mother was a Copper Dragon (Name: Siren) and the other was an Elf whos father was a Brass Dragon (Name: Tharivol) had been coming to this town for about 2-3 years now and had become quite fond of it. These kind of 'dragon' facts only mean stuff to hardcore DnD players. I am not sure it would mean anything good.

One day as Siren and Tharivol were on their way to Erbia an Ocean Giant gone mad MAYBE HE WAS JUST LOOKING FOR FOOD AND SHELTER? was climbing out of the water and heading towards the town. Siren and Tharivol fought with the Giant. Tharivol was knocked unconsious near the end of the fight POINT BEING THAT EVERYTHING AFTER THAT POINT WAS SIREN'S FAULT? . Siren managed to slay the Giant but unfortunately its body fell onto the little town and destroyed it SERIOUSLY HOW BIG WAS THIS GIANT OR HOW SMALL WAS THIS VILLAGE. and everyone who had not mangaged to flee IS THIS STORY REALLY ABOUT KATRINA? STOP BLAMING THE VICTIMS.

On this day Siren and Tharivol vowed to rebuild it… WHAT DID THEY DO WITH THE GIANTS BODY?!? And they made good on the promise (except that due to communication WITH WHOM error the city is now called New Herbia) IS THIS ONE OF THE PHILOSOPHICAL HYPOTHETICALS, LIKE IF YOU REPLACE EVERY BOARD OF THESUS'S SHIP IS IT STILL THESUS'S SHIP?

Currently the town has a Temple of Healing that is ran by Siren, a WeaponShop run by three random dwarves THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS A RANDOM DWARF! EVERY DWARF IS EXACTLY WHERE HE OR SHE SHOULD BE AND IF NOT THEY ARE LOST IN A VERY DELIBERATE AND NON-RANDOM MANNER!!!!!, a Magic Shop that is run by a strange six-armed pale-skinned humanoid who never speaks WHAT IS SO STRANGE ABOUT HER?, a Orphanage run by charismatic female elves (Tharivols idea SO THARIVOIS HAS SOME SORT OF NO FATTIES/CHARM SCHOOL POLICY FOR HIS EMPLOYEES. I OWE YOU AN APOLOGY. THAT IS SO STEROTYPICL FOR A BRASS DRAGON'S BASTARD ), two Inns (one run by a shapeshifter and the other by a centaur HOW DO WE KNOW WHICH IS WHICH?), a Collesium run by an Ogre with a monacle JUST A THOUGHT MOST COLLESIUMS, OR STADIUMS HAVE MORE THAN ONE RUNNER AT A TIME. THEY CALL IT A RACE. PROPS THOUGH IT IS HARD TO RUN WITH A MONACLE, a AllyWay labelled caution in quite a few languages and another Allyway where an assassin sell his poisons and drugs ANOTHER PHILOSOPHICAL PUZZLE! IS THE GUY THAT SELLS THE POISON THE ASSASSIN OR THE GUY THE DELIVERS THE POISON?.


DRUNK WRITER's GUILD REJOICE

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New Herbia
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-08-07 08:36 PM
I TAKE BACK MY ORIGINAL VOTE. THIS IS BRILLIANT! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2015-06-23 12:02 PM
I knew a campaign like this one... :)

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Morningstar's comment on 2015-08-07 08:04 PM
Kinda looks like it was cranked out on a random generator. How does that one paragraph of history impact this village, in any way? Go to Comment
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Morningstar's comment on 2015-08-12 12:31 PM
Kinda looks like it was cranked out on a random generator. How does that one paragraph of history impact this village, in any way? Go to Comment
Arrow of Personal Hell
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Strolen's comment on 2003-10-04 07:30 PM
I think I would make the arrow dissappear on impact. Hate for anybody else get their hands on it, not to mention it opens up more possibilities.

I would also make this cult, while not peaceful, not wanting kill anybody either. Thier lot in life would be to put the fear of hell into others. They would have successfully caused fear of their area for all that go near it catch the stinging hell of their arrows. I would say that they would also go out on 'missions' where they would go out and search down certain people to shoot them with the arrows. The group would probably make awesom assassins if they ever chose to actually kill anybody, but their mission, and perhaps promise to the demon that gave them the power, was to cause pain in the world.

The arrows could make normal people appear possessed and cause a Salem Witch Trial type thing which may be their purpose. They could cause high ranking people to be distrusted because of a sudden madness, especially if the cult ranged farther then normal where nobody has heard of these arrows so the witnessed results would be a mystery. A whole village could be inflicted...

Lots of possibilities for this cult and item and lots of results that could come from it. Would like to see a write-up for the cult. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2003-10-02 03:14 AM
Perhaps tell also, who does use such an item? Is it freely available, or does a special organisation use it?

Maybe it is publicly marked as 'evil', and outlawed, so the PCs may have to seek it covertly. Or have to meet their user... and survive. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2005-06-21 02:41 PM
There is nothing bad about bringing an old topic to the fore again. If you have an idea, write it down.

Sometimes, we call it simply a BUMP! Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2003-10-02 02:15 PM
I need to put in the obligitory plug that this is not a D&D specific site.

That said I actually like the item. Perhaps to aid those not familiar with the D&D 3.0, you could describe the difficulty of avoiding the blindness and deafness. Like "Very hard" or "Easy".

I could see using this item as a way of hunting down rouge that refuse to join the guild. They would send out an ambush team and snipe the lone rouge, making him an example of what happens when you defy the guild. Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2003-10-02 10:47 PM
Great corrections. Keep up the good work. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-10-02 07:13 PM
I have nothing to say here that hasn't already been said.
Hope to see more of your stuff, dude! Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-10-02 10:10 PM
Good job on the remake, dude! Let's see more of your stuff, yeah? Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2003-10-02 01:41 AM
Can I suggest you write a better set of description please. This is an okay item that I almost ignored because of what you put in as the description. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2003-10-05 02:48 AM
Thank you for updating it. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-06-22 09:45 AM
Please do not call me Moonie. Ever. Thank you. Go to Comment
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Ylorea's comment on 2003-10-02 10:19 AM
Seems a pretty expensive item, as the save DC's are pretty terrible.

I do ponder on the duration. I can hardly imagine they cause lasting blindness and deafness. I would assume that this would be based on the spell used and thus from the DC I can derive the caster level.... ehhr no, I still need the Inteligence or Charisma bonus of the creator.

As I see the DC's, I assume this was D&D based? Go to Comment
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Pieh's comment on 2003-10-02 08:34 PM
I appreciate all your comments seeing as how I'm new to the site and always open to tips that can help me out... And yes i realized this was not a Dnd speficic site and i would have used terms to apply it to other games but i was a) half asleep and b) i havent played many other rpgs, Ive played Dnd and a little Palladium so i apologize for any confusion caused by my lack of thought. Thank you all for your support and critisism, it helps me out alot. Any tips on what a good description could be? I also meant to put in a duration but forgot. Go to Comment
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