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Arrow of Personal Hell
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MoonHunter's comment on 2003-10-05 01:48 AM
Thank you for updating it. Go to Comment
Arrow of Personal Hell
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-06-22 08:45 AM
Please do not call me Moonie. Ever. Thank you. Go to Comment
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Ylorea's comment on 2003-10-02 09:19 AM
Seems a pretty expensive item, as the save DC's are pretty terrible.

I do ponder on the duration. I can hardly imagine they cause lasting blindness and deafness. I would assume that this would be based on the spell used and thus from the DC I can derive the caster level.... ehhr no, I still need the Inteligence or Charisma bonus of the creator.

As I see the DC's, I assume this was D&D based? Go to Comment
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Pieh's comment on 2003-10-02 07:34 PM
I appreciate all your comments seeing as how I'm new to the site and always open to tips that can help me out... And yes i realized this was not a Dnd speficic site and i would have used terms to apply it to other games but i was a) half asleep and b) i havent played many other rpgs, Ive played Dnd and a little Palladium so i apologize for any confusion caused by my lack of thought. Thank you all for your support and critisism, it helps me out alot. Any tips on what a good description could be? I also meant to put in a duration but forgot. Go to Comment
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Pieh's comment on 2003-10-02 08:00 PM
I fixed it! Yeah! Go to Comment
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Pieh's comment on 2003-10-02 09:14 PM
Thank you all once again. Go to Comment
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Pieh's comment on 2009-03-31 11:40 PM
It was pretty much my first submission... I guess I could revisit it. Back then there just wasn't as many high quality submissions, so stuff like this got pretty good votes.

As for the 'rock jacket.' I'm sorry you didn't like it, I think a 1 is a little harsh, but I can live with it. I'd just like to thank you for going out of your way to see what else I could do. Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-18 05:40 PM
Actually Strolen, we could leave this item alone and make another arrow that would do the effect you suggested. Arrows of Madness perhaps?

P.S. Yes, I know it's an old topic. MEH! Leave meh be! Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-21 02:44 PM
So I've been told by Moonie whenever I do so. ^^ Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2005-06-22 10:41 AM
*blinks, then nods* Aye. Will (not) do. Go to Comment
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-30 03:10 PM
Like the idea Pieh. If you added more background (for example something like what strolen wrote about) it would make it even stronger. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2009-04-01 08:26 AM
I think the idea here is good - perhaps a bit lacking in polish, but for an early sub it is good.

I wouldn't bother with blindness or deafness - just running around feeling like you are on fire would be enough for me. Go to Comment
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kaos2571's comment on 2007-09-26 08:46 PM
Bump, i like it and I think revisiting older posts jogs the memory. Go to Comment
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Nocontrivedname's comment on 2009-03-31 10:45 PM
Hey Pieh,

I felt bad about knocking your rock jacket so I went and looked up one of your other submissions to see if I could give you a bump there. At any rate I looked this up and I can't believe these people gave it such high ratings. After all Moonie made the post a couple of weeks ago about vote inflation, and how we shouldn't just be nice etc. My point is that this arrow which causes the illusion of pain and then disappears is nothing more than a standing spell or temp. curse. It lacks style and the context and the back story is weak. I don't see how it is in game use could further roleplaying.
I love some of the other stuff you have done, and I am sorry this is not one of them.

NCN Go to Comment
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Nocontrivedname's comment on 2009-03-31 10:46 PM
These suggestions would have really improved it. Go to Comment
Wing Brew
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2004-03-23 12:45 PM
Awesome idea, man. I love to screw with my players and the looks on their faces after I used this on them were priceless! What else you got? Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2003-10-02 02:06 AM
I must agree, it could become dangerous to the barkeep.

But if the duration would be say 1d4 days, this could make an interesting practical joke (and not an over-powered one, as this one must be).

If the whole village/town knows about this (very likely), the villagers will certainly have their fun. And all those sarcastic comments.


But wait...
Imagine the players steel from that alchemist, or his friend. Besides gold and stuff they find some old excellent wine...

Can you say "unusual personal marks"? Go to Comment
Wing Brew
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Agar's comment on 2003-10-02 01:21 PM
I think the days would be a highly appropriate duration if this brew was part of a local celebration, giving the drinkers instant costumes for thier parts. Locals seeing the characters with wings might draw interesting conclusions.

"Oh, so you're the fertility angel now? My son in law needs some guidance, you understand. Here's the honey-butter, go and get to work."

What happens when the wings wear off? They just go "poof", or do they shed and disintegrate? Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-10-02 09:09 PM
Don't hesitate, dude. Keep putting out ideas! Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2003-10-02 12:38 AM
So why would anyone make this semi-magical brew?

Do you have a mad alchemist who thinks he is a brewer in the area?

How long is the life expectancy of some wise ass Barkeep who serves this stuff to someone who does not want non-functional angelic wings? Unless I was really lawful good, this man would be in a difficult way soon after.

Ditto for said mad alchemist (soon after I find them)...

How expensive/ inexpensive is this stuff? If it is expensive, wouldn't you ask for your money upfront... as the outraged patron probably is not going to pay. So you, the barkeep, would be out all that money. Go to Comment
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