Like the idea Pieh. If you added more background (for example something like what strolen wrote about) it would make it even stronger. Go to Comment

I think the idea here is good - perhaps a bit lacking in polish, but for an early sub it is good.

I wouldn't bother with blindness or deafness - just running around feeling like you are on fire would be enough for me. Go to Comment

Bump, i like it and I think revisiting older posts jogs the memory. Go to Comment

Hey Pieh,

I felt bad about knocking your rock jacket so I went and looked up one of your other submissions to see if I could give you a bump there. At any rate I looked this up and I can't believe these people gave it such high ratings. After all Moonie made the post a couple of weeks ago about vote inflation, and how we shouldn't just be nice etc. My point is that this arrow which causes the illusion of pain and then disappears is nothing more than a standing spell or temp. curse. It lacks style and the context and the back story is weak. I don't see how it is in game use could further roleplaying.
I love some of the other stuff you have done, and I am sorry this is not one of them.

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These suggestions would have really improved it. Go to Comment

Awesome idea, man. I love to screw with my players and the looks on their faces after I used this on them were priceless! What else you got? Go to Comment

I must agree, it could become dangerous to the barkeep.

But if the duration would be say 1d4 days, this could make an interesting practical joke (and not an over-powered one, as this one must be).

If the whole village/town knows about this (very likely), the villagers will certainly have their fun. And all those sarcastic comments.


But wait...
Imagine the players steel from that alchemist, or his friend. Besides gold and stuff they find some old excellent wine...

Can you say "unusual personal marks"? Go to Comment

I think the days would be a highly appropriate duration if this brew was part of a local celebration, giving the drinkers instant costumes for thier parts. Locals seeing the characters with wings might draw interesting conclusions.

"Oh, so you're the fertility angel now? My son in law needs some guidance, you understand. Here's the honey-butter, go and get to work."

What happens when the wings wear off? They just go "poof", or do they shed and disintegrate? Go to Comment

Don't hesitate, dude. Keep putting out ideas! Go to Comment

So why would anyone make this semi-magical brew?

Do you have a mad alchemist who thinks he is a brewer in the area?

How long is the life expectancy of some wise ass Barkeep who serves this stuff to someone who does not want non-functional angelic wings? Unless I was really lawful good, this man would be in a difficult way soon after.

Ditto for said mad alchemist (soon after I find them)...

How expensive/ inexpensive is this stuff? If it is expensive, wouldn't you ask for your money upfront... as the outraged patron probably is not going to pay. So you, the barkeep, would be out all that money. Go to Comment

I am not sure I voted for this one. So now I am. Go to Comment

Personaly as well I was thinking about a duration of 1dx + y hours where X could be about 8 and y about 2...
Days would be good as well.

If this is for 1d4 years, I would also say.... The bartender is in serious trouble. Go to Comment

Thanks for you feedback. You can use this however you want, I was just trying to throw an idead out there for fellow Gms to use. I see now that i should have put alittle more thought into it... Ill be more careful in the future. Thanks. Go to Comment

Dont you worry. I will post more. I just need to collect my thoughts earlier in the day so i dont have to fix a bunch of stuff. Go to Comment

I have a few other items posted on the site, you should check those out. Im glad you had fun with this one. Go to Comment

This is good. It is silly, but it is good. Go to Comment

The barkeep would need to have burly bouncers to protect him from whoever he served this to. Go to Comment

I happen to have a church that consist almost entirely of paladins. Their god is a Couatl, and they would no doubt love to spread some angelic wings while they do the same with their "Divine judgement." Go to Comment

Cute, silly, and odd, but quite usable. Go to Comment

Interesting. Go to Comment