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Wand of Illusory Sound
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2007-02-06 12:10 AM
A nice basic item. This seems like a general item, rather than a "one of a kind". (That is good because the story element really didn't do much for me.)

It can a sound to sound like ? and others odd sentence bits made much less than it could be. This one needs a bit of editing before it is ready from primetime. Voted now, will delete and revote when you edit. Go to Comment
Wand of Illusory Sound
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-02-05 04:20 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Wand of Illusory Sound
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2007-02-05 06:50 PM
I like it. Lots of fun can be had with the wand. I'm a fan of quirky items that cause the PCs to develop headaches. This certainly qualifies! Go to Comment
Wand of Illusory Sound
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-05 10:24 AM
A useful little item.

On sentance needs to be chopped up a little or restructured:

The sound cannot be located simply because it is an illusion and is entirely in the person's head, part of the mild insanity caused by such an unnerving sound can cause the target to think he has an idea as to the direction of the sound only to prove him incorrect (which can be unnerving).

Otherwise, useful and logical. Go to Comment
Cult of the Red Pantheon
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-16 10:55 AM
This seems incomplete. I feel like I am missing some pieces. It should go back to Pieh's sandbox/ working space until it is ready to be released. Go to Comment
Cult of the Red Pantheon
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-16 07:44 AM
This is interesting, though it could stand some polishing...a good bit of polishing. The two godlings are certainly powerful, and unless this is set in an anime style superfantasy well out of the normal PC's ability to confront. While there is nothing wrong with the idea of a military coup and a magical backed elven revolution (elven bolsheviks?) the power is just too high. Go to Comment
Cult of the Red Pantheon
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axlerowes's comment on 2006-10-04 03:02 PM
Not overly drawn out. They are solid one dimensonal villians that a group of heroic PCs could really sink their teeth into. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Strolen's comment on 2008-04-20 09:02 AM
I like the names. Especially if it was named by its inventor who knows he annoys the elders and continues to do so with the name. Imagine the flourish of introducing the newest invention to the counsel. :)

Mabye a little too much for my light magic taste but a fun submission to think about! Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-12-08 05:02 PM
Silly. Why would they, the technical people, call it a Dirigible? Illiteration is cute, but in this case annoying... to me. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Pieh's comment on 2005-12-11 11:40 PM
It's just a snazzy name for the submission, they would probably just call it a Tunneling Machine, or something practical like that. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Scrasamax's comment on 2005-12-05 03:08 PM
I absolutely love the name, and the fact that it was not automatically palmed off onto the mechanically minded gnomes. (Shakes fist at gnomes). The idea seems fairly well fleshed out, and has a plausible backstory. Even Dufgar (who is never described) seems easy for me to imagine. (A young dwarf not yet grown into his beard)

Now for the axe. There are several grammatical and capitalization flaws that need to be ironed out, but nothing that inspires the wrath of the average reader.

Good luck with this, I don't how others will respond to the normally non-magic using dwarves having a magical tunneling machine. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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EchoMirage's comment on 2010-10-09 06:16 AM


What Strolen said: Dugfar would have been exuberant at his first major creation, overflowing with poetry and joy. It's Dugfar's, it's Dangerous, because that's awesome, of course it's Dwarven, it does Dig, and man, for one last D... Dirigible! Tadaaa.


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Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-12-07 06:15 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Roack's comment on 2005-12-07 06:14 PM
I love it, enough said. The name is brilliant, the idea even more so. Regardless of the grammatical errors, 5/5! Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-02 03:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 12:34 PM
I think this is quite amusing and helps explain how the Dwarves can have so many blasted tunnels! :)

I don't have a problem with spell-using dwarves - the Norse dwarves were pretty magical.

Good Job! Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Stephie's comment on 2008-06-21 06:07 PM
I love dirigibles and I looove the name! Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-07-18 09:28 AM
I don't subscribe to the whole dwarfs and gnomes invent a bunch of steampunk stuff. But if you do and that works in your campaign, then this is probably something you would enjoy. (The hypothetical reader of this comment). I do like the title though, right up my alley. Go to Comment
The Furry Tree-Zombies
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-11-24 09:34 AM
What's wrong with zombies having newfound dexterity? If you ask me, even the current incarnation of zombies are a joke- they're just slow, stumbling things for the heroes to chop up into bits. If zombies could actually move, they could be decent monsters. But as they are, they're ridiculous.

On the other hand, they are rather far-fetched. ;) Go to Comment
The Furry Tree-Zombies
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-23 10:39 AM
Updated: updated free-text Go to Comment
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