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Cells in The Western Bogs
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-13 07:09 AM
Who is in charge of administering this justice? Who does sentencing, who guards people while they build their own prison? Can people not dig out? (If my choices were try to dig out of earth or stand still in swamp I know which I would choose. And by nature a swamp should be easy to dig through. And the worst that could happen is you die trying... oh well!) Why is it so cold in winter? Swamps are usually pretty warm, and especially buried in a bioactive pit it should be quite 'comfortable', if wet, in winter unless there is a special weather system. I like the general idea, but wish it were fleshed out more. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-17 12:21 AM
It's true bogs can be cold, and with the water it would be especially unpleasant. I wasn't meaning to be difficult - I like the post :-) Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Murometz's comment on 2007-01-14 01:36 PM
Here's an oubliette if I ever saw one. I actually LOVE this P! A somewhat mundane, but morbid addition to any world! Love the feel of cold, misty bog prisons!

beautiful! Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Murometz's comment on 2007-09-06 10:53 AM
beautifully atmospheric, despite its simplicity. I like this a lot!

for some reason, i get "Cool Hand Luke" flashbacks.

BUMP. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-02-08 10:09 AM
"You can judge a society by how well it treats its prisoners"


Ugh, that sounds awful, seem like a death sentence to me,

nicely done.

What is a helspar? I assume it is something like a lighter, but never heard of it before. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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valadaar's comment on 2007-01-14 01:05 PM
Nasty! :) Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-13 09:54 PM
Creepy good. I always tend to find enchanted/cursed chess sets appealing for some reason. I like the way that it has to be stolen, and that violence must ensue. Couple of questions. I understand that if the chess set is given away or sold, things get worse for the poor sap. Does this also apply to their afterlife, as well? As in, they might die in a mad house, but do they have a shot at heaven? And does the curse affect whoever it was given or sold to? Also, if someone is hired to steal this on behalf of another party, does the curse treat the thief or the employer as the owner? Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 11:46 AM
I have seen this idea bounced around in fiction a great deal. (The Seventh, most recently). I still like it. I am sure there are many variations we could have.

Now, if Pariah would spell check and put in extra returns between paragraphs, I would of given him a 4.5 Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-09 04:32 PM
Very....evily good. 5/5 Perhaps in Steal It,Please the owner has arranged the theft from himself without letting the PCs know. Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-12-18 07:50 PM
Great work. Stored this for later use. My PCs are up for a treat. Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Pariah's comment on 2005-11-05 12:41 PM
Yeah, I know I had atrocious spelling at some points in there. I was giving it a good 24 hours before I went through it again. I didn't thik of the paragraph returns though, thanks. Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Pariah's comment on 2005-11-05 01:01 PM
Updated: Spell Checked Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Pariah's comment on 2006-01-10 09:45 PM
To quote my English teacher. WOULD HAVE! WOULD HAVE! The would of comes from would've. Bad Moon, proclaiming my grammer bad when you use bad grammer youself. ;) Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-08 04:41 PM
I'll definitely make some changes before I use it, but I love the chess set idea and the history you put with it. It makes me start thinking of twists I could put on this (and other) items. Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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Murometz's comment on 2006-02-27 10:48 PM
checkmate! Go to Comment
The Demon's Advantage
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valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 08:12 AM
So the worst that could happen is for it to be taken without violence, for the owner would not be able to clear his curse?

A neat item that ca be a driver for a villian.
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The Demon's Advantage
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valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 08:12 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Johann's Cloth
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Strolen's comment on 2006-08-27 09:32 PM
This is a really good one that could come in handy in any number of instances.

"No Magic Allowed" -- hahaha

Magical sensitive creatures that you are hunting can be decieved till the last moment.

Wonder if it would work resting on the burlap? Dishonest at a shop. This is NOT magical sir. I will give you only 2 silver for it. Go to Comment
Johann's Cloth
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manfred's comment on 2007-02-18 04:02 AM
A simple, but beautifully logical item with a useful property - how could I miss it? Correcting oversight now. Go to Comment
Johann's Cloth
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-10-12 10:50 AM
Good Solid Item. It has its own complications. Go to Comment
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