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The Balm of Synsyia
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Murometz's comment on 2006-03-17 11:19 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Balm of Synsyia
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 08:21 PM
Great Job on this one.

Both the value and curse are extreme. Use in moderation for sure :) Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2005-12-24 11:18 AM
It feels a little under-developed, but it's basically solid. A false eye with the essence of a god implanted in it becomes a pale reflection of the eye of that god, especially since it must be a small, and thus 'weak' shard - But what inspires a person to put a sword-tip in an eye? Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-12-18 08:06 PM
I like it. :) Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-13 07:21 PM
Wow, I like it, It's a little creepy now, too. Still feels like it's missing a bit of something, but I like it. Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Pariah's comment on 2005-12-24 10:51 PM
Bleh. Underdeveloped is right. I think I might've thought of this about 1130 to 12 at night, and typed it up then. No notes on this sucker anywhere, which means it got developed for a total of 10, maybe 15 seconds. Okay, I'm guessing that it would be because he could feel the power emenating off of it, figured out the it was a piece of one of Her swords, and figured that this would help his brother, maybe even allow him to 'see' out of the glass eye. Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Pariah's comment on 2005-12-26 03:10 PM
Updated: A little bit here, a little bit there and it stops feeling underdeveloped Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Pariah's comment on 2006-04-15 12:24 AM
Muro I'm thinking about doing another, slightly more sinister eye replacement. You might reconize the next one too. Go to Comment
The Eye of the Pig
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-13 09:40 PM
I love the name! Eye of the Pig invokes horror/terror, before you even begin reading it. I wish the details were a bit expanded on as others have mentioned. Also, I realize and understand that this is part of the Shards of the Storm Quest, but I feel that if it was a stand alone item, and its powers were radically different, leaning towards something more sinister, this would have been AWESOME! Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-03-14 07:08 PM
FUN.
I can't wait to do something like this to my heroes. They'll be real happy when their flintlocks and crossbows get sopping wet from being flung into the mud. In fact, I don't even know if they'll be able to escape. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-13 10:23 AM
Are suspected criminals put through this whilst awaiting trial? I wish the UK had a prison system like this,LOL. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-12-18 07:45 PM
If such punishment as this prison system is common enough to be accepted by the peasantry and middleclass of a kingdom, it is likely that this land will be rife with power hungry corruption at the top of the systems structure. Informants might be pretty common as well, "better them than you." A criminal might rat out just anyone to not be caged in that bog.

I like this. A lot.

It's easy to adapt to a special setting or world. A good base for adding details.

Sincerely, Mike. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Chaosmark's comment on 2007-01-14 05:11 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Pariah's comment on 2005-11-15 11:08 PM
Okay, Zy. a bog is not nessacarily warm in winter. This would be further north if you're going to be getting at the -5 at midday. A bog would only be a 'bog' about half the year then. In the winter you'd have frost going down into the ground a good ways, and probably permafrost a bit deeper. On the digging during summer, when it is wet and soggy. You ever try to dig a hole in a lake bottom? The water will fill it in, and a bog is a lot of standing water. The farthest down you could probably dig before you hit the water level would be 6 in. Then your pulling more water out of the hole than substrate.

Ill work on the penal system and pos it. As well as fix stuff to this sucker. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Pariah's comment on 2005-11-16 11:30 PM
Updated: Added content Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-13 07:09 AM
Who is in charge of administering this justice? Who does sentencing, who guards people while they build their own prison? Can people not dig out? (If my choices were try to dig out of earth or stand still in swamp I know which I would choose. And by nature a swamp should be easy to dig through. And the worst that could happen is you die trying... oh well!) Why is it so cold in winter? Swamps are usually pretty warm, and especially buried in a bioactive pit it should be quite 'comfortable', if wet, in winter unless there is a special weather system. I like the general idea, but wish it were fleshed out more. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-17 12:21 AM
It's true bogs can be cold, and with the water it would be especially unpleasant. I wasn't meaning to be difficult - I like the post :-) Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Murometz's comment on 2007-01-14 01:36 PM
Here's an oubliette if I ever saw one. I actually LOVE this P! A somewhat mundane, but morbid addition to any world! Love the feel of cold, misty bog prisons!

beautiful! Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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Murometz's comment on 2007-09-06 10:53 AM
beautifully atmospheric, despite its simplicity. I like this a lot!

for some reason, i get "Cool Hand Luke" flashbacks.

BUMP. Go to Comment
Cells in The Western Bogs
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-02-08 10:09 AM
"You can judge a society by how well it treats its prisoners"


Ugh, that sounds awful, seem like a death sentence to me,

nicely done.

What is a helspar? I assume it is something like a lighter, but never heard of it before. Go to Comment
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