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The Stories of Sama
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-06 11:38 AM
dang! thats good mythology P! more! Go to Comment
The Stories of Sama
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-10-13 11:55 AM
Very nice creation myth, and it sets up a nice epic conflict. I would like to hear the history from the prospective of the demons and false prophets. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-05-26 09:57 AM
I have no problem with the repeating the first few lines of the post as the introduction. You keep doing that and you will do fine.

I like the write up, both in presentation and content. It provides an excellent plotline to be either lived through OR to be set into the past.

We really need more historical elements/ events in the system. They can be the most useful for GMS. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Iain's comment on 2006-05-26 06:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-26 08:32 AM
Stunning, a strong charismatic character feeding on the negative emotions and turning that around into a bloody and horrible war. The line that caught me the best was

'From the heavens came the tears of a million dead, those who'd lived and died following Beggar.' Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-26 08:43 AM
5/5 for this really good post. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-05-26 10:22 AM
Praise where praise is due, and it’s certainly due here

Great stuff – 5/5 & gets today’s HoH vote

Possible plot idea
What is a shaman were to contact the spirit of Beggar and start the whole thing up again, this time as a cult rather than a political movement.

If the nobility were scared the first time, imagine how they’d feel when the movement has the power of religious conviction behind it. And imagine what they might do the stop it.

Now if that’s not a scenario just waiting to happen, I don’t know what is. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Priv8eye's comment on 2006-05-26 04:04 AM
I really like this. A nice history for a place which gives it a nice rounded background. Nice points like the mane of the Beggars Gate being misunderstood through time. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-14 03:08 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Roack's comment on 2006-05-25 11:19 PM
Scary, rebellious, beautiful! Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
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Pariah's comment on 2006-05-25 10:55 PM
Well, normally I come up with or find some amusing quote, but I couldn't find the motivation to do that for this one. So instead I took a page out of Generic Strolenite's book and copied the first couple of sentances. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-25 10:47 PM
I can honestly say, I like everything about it!

Except maybe for the repeating first sentences. :D Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Murometz's comment on 2007-04-13 10:03 AM
BUMP! and an HoH. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Murometz's comment on 2007-10-02 09:30 PM
Roack sums it up nicely. Scary, Rebellious, Beautiful. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
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Appaloosa's comment on 2006-05-25 10:20 PM
Powerful historical post. Excellent backgroud for more "modern" implications

This one gets a major YeeHaw from me. :) Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
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Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-25 10:44 PM
You should be a writer... or maybe you are I dunno. I love the presentation of the story. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-04 06:07 PM
Really good as the others have said! Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-04 12:52 AM
Another one of my favourites, and a great source of inspiration. Dystopic, dysphoric, dystonic and other things beginning with dys...I love it! Perfect in presentation, content, symbolism and atmosphere. What else is there to say? 5/5, and it damn well deserves it. Good job! /David Go to Comment
Sama
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-05-21 12:32 PM
I imagine that he is a desert god... Deserts seem to foster angry monotheistic deities. Go to Comment
Samahen Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2007-02-11 09:13 AM
This is a good piece. I want a little more of everything though as this and the other post leave a lot of ideas floating around. Go to Comment
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