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Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-06 09:11 AM
The flying eyes greatly remind me of the silly old arcade games. But still, this is a great take on just that. It shows that there is actually some hope for many of those clishes. Good job. Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-13 09:27 AM
I can't see the picture you posted unless I click on it.. Did you draw it? Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-14 08:38 AM
Hope you get it working soon. Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Murometz's comment on 2010-10-21 07:40 PM


Pic no worky again!



 



Like everything about them except their names. :)


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Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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valadaar's comment on 2007-11-02 02:26 PM
I like it a lot David! And it is not often I learn a new word - first time I saw crèches. Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 02:08 PM
OK, this is my take on the whole "flying eyeball" cliché. Enjoy! /David Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-02 02:28 PM
Orb-Bats...Orbats..Get it? Get it?....:-) Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-13 10:19 AM
Yeah, I know...something with the gallery, I guess...I´ll try to fix it. The pic is drawn by my friend Johanna, who is a really talented artist. Hopefully, I´ll be able to post more of her stuff soon. /David Go to Comment
Orbats - The eyes in the sky
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-04-22 03:34 AM
Wheee...! Nice! Thanks, Strolen! Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-09 12:00 PM
I was absolutely thrilled that you had the back story and motivation!

Well written, it drew me right through to the end. I have a great sense of the location and aura that she has over the town. Just an outstanding submission. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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MoonHunter's comment on 2007-11-12 02:45 PM
This is an incredible post. It has such useful layers of detail that present a complete picture. So many uses....

And helps capture some of the mood of the set too. You really need to read all of it to take the whole picture in, but this is my favorite piece of the set. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-11-02 06:57 AM
I enjoyed reading this a lot! She's the only thing that keeps the spirtis of the dream world from wrecking havoc on a city that has sprung around the mysterious gate-way into the world of dreams. What is there not to like? Kudos on that dark, gothic spirit that you have infused both this NPC with as wel as the mysterious, gloomy world she inhabits. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-11-03 02:16 AM
I love it, from top to bottom, the symbolism, the well of dreams, the codependence of the Moon and Locastus, and even her humble beginings. Kudos Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-11-02 10:00 AM
All of your submissions are good. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-11-02 08:43 AM
It invoked memories of "Planescape" and that woman in Sigil, whose name I no longer remember. That is good. There are too few personas like these here at the Citadel!

Well written and good grammar! (being a european I know how hard it is to match the grammar of these UK/US whiz kids!)

If you want to boost your score, well, let me tell you: Bold headlines and paragraphing goes a long way. Believe me! You have done fine in that regard, but for mastery you should study the user "valadaar". He is a masterful teacher of that art.

While I was one of the original proponents for plot hooks I think it is perfectly fine you don't include any. I love playtesting notes.

Too bad it didn't work out. By the way: Evil GMs are really GMs that want to challenge their players to rise to the occasion and excel. When, or IF the players do that the sessions become legends in themselves, memorable and with time nearly mythical. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-11-02 08:47 AM
Oh, and I LOVE the name "The Bloated Moon". LOVE IT! Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Murometz's comment on 2007-11-03 10:36 AM
okay, AG trumped me on the first and foremost comment i was going to make. The name, Bloated Moon, for an NPC, and particularly for an NPC of this caliber, is simply stupendous. I drool.

Her story and the delicious detail puts this over the top for me. A great world unfurls before us, and we have certainly taken notice, David.

Great work! Just great.

Get going on Locastus entry! :) Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Murometz's comment on 2008-12-13 06:07 PM
So lovely. The sorceress of Locastus! Her tale is a captivating one, David. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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valadaar's comment on 2007-11-02 07:53 AM
Well, we got ourselves a great new poster! A little long, but then again it is good so no problem there.

Have had theives world on the brain lately, and she reminds me of the type of entity of Tempus or Ischade level. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
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Stephie's comment on 2007-11-02 08:16 AM
Great work! Very enjoyable read. Go to Comment
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