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The Acibus Foundry
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-12 03:44 AM
Hi Cheka! Yep, Blood Shylocks and organ traders are coming up. That´ll be truly bleak...:-) Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-05 05:25 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Kassil's comment on 2007-12-29 05:56 AM
This is freaking awesome. I love it. It feels like a mix of the Mortuary in Planescape, the steampunk-ish feel of China Mieville's books, and a certain eerie, creepily morbid touch special to it. The visual image of it hanging on the skyline like a diseased, rotting tree stump is arresting, and the way the interior is described gives a good feel for it.

The aspects of how the Caretakers feel soiled, and some strive to absolve themselves somehow, gives it a more real feeling, as well, with ordinary folks trying not to let their job get to them... Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-10 06:47 PM
Yet another good submission. There must be a way of cleaning any soul vestiages from the body before reanimating it. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-12-10 12:43 PM
Ah, the latest addition in an expanding setting! A great one as well, I should mention that I will GM a session in the Locastus setting tomorrow and the tower will be one of the locastions featured. This write has what I expected of it when I read the headline. But I feel that it is missing something, that little extra. Hmmm(need to think about that), but still- a great submission that recives a high score from me. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Murometz's comment on 2007-12-10 03:11 PM
A zombie factory chock full of lovely detail! I like the bit about the Caretakers feeling "soiled" and seeking to be absolved. Also like the Body Praxis detail. You know, I kinda agree with Mike. There is something "sexy" missing, but I dont know what it may be.

Anyway, Locastus grows, and I rejoice. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-09 07:59 PM
An excellent place. Question - is there any of the original person's soul/spirit remaining within the husk of a Deader? Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-12-09 06:31 PM
A place of dire mystery, described in hideous glory. Nightmarish and useful.

Well done. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-10 03:25 AM
Val: I have this notion that the soul must be kept away from the Deader, otherwise it will turn into a real, bloodthirsty undead. I think the Deaders are more like golems than zombies, the makers just make use of a thing with all the right joints and so on, which would otherwise be expensive to make.... Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-10 01:16 PM
Any and all suggestions are welcome! Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-10 05:54 PM
A late vote due to my slow computer. Not all fantasy is elegant castles or wild woodland. Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-12-10 12:48 PM
First of all, let me say that I love the name! And while there was nothing wrong with the write-up I felt that it was somehow lacking. More like a frame for something then the actual "painting". It shows much promise though, and hints at some great ideas.

This could be expanded, and I would love it to be!

(P.S- As Valadaar, my vote is a placeholder until you expand it.) Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-10 08:08 AM
Good bones for a location, but currently somewhat missing the meat. You mentioned in chat that you would be changing that in time, so this vote is a placeholder - I'll change it as needed. Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-21 07:38 PM
You do really good maps! Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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valadaar's comment on 2011-03-10 10:31 AM


Map link is broken...

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The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-10 08:11 AM
This is more of a frame work and flavour text for a series of subs that´ll flesh out the area (I hope). /D. Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-21 07:20 PM
OK, ladies and gentlemen, I´ve added a map to this sub as well.
Sadly, it has to be a linked image, since our gallery ain´t accepting uploads at the moment.
As soon as it works again, I´ll put the map up as a nice thumbnail.
Hope you´ll like it!
/David Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-21 07:41 PM
Thanks, val!

Pen, paper, lots of eraser and microsoft paint(TM) is a lethal combination...:-) Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-01-04 02:07 AM
YES!! Finally, I managed to put the map in there!

Hope you´ll like it!

/David Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-05 05:29 PM
Love the map..I know how hard you worked on it..It looks great..Darlin Go to Comment
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