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The Tower of Necrology
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Murometz's comment on 2007-12-10 02:11 PM
A zombie factory chock full of lovely detail! I like the bit about the Caretakers feeling "soiled" and seeking to be absolved. Also like the Body Praxis detail. You know, I kinda agree with Mike. There is something "sexy" missing, but I dont know what it may be.

Anyway, Locastus grows, and I rejoice. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-09 06:59 PM
An excellent place. Question - is there any of the original person's soul/spirit remaining within the husk of a Deader? Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-12-09 05:31 PM
A place of dire mystery, described in hideous glory. Nightmarish and useful.

Well done. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-10 02:25 AM
Val: I have this notion that the soul must be kept away from the Deader, otherwise it will turn into a real, bloodthirsty undead. I think the Deaders are more like golems than zombies, the makers just make use of a thing with all the right joints and so on, which would otherwise be expensive to make.... Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-10 12:16 PM
Any and all suggestions are welcome! Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-10 04:54 PM
A late vote due to my slow computer. Not all fantasy is elegant castles or wild woodland. Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-12-10 11:48 AM
First of all, let me say that I love the name! And while there was nothing wrong with the write-up I felt that it was somehow lacking. More like a frame for something then the actual "painting". It shows much promise though, and hints at some great ideas.

This could be expanded, and I would love it to be!

(P.S- As Valadaar, my vote is a placeholder until you expand it.) Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-10 07:08 AM
Good bones for a location, but currently somewhat missing the meat. You mentioned in chat that you would be changing that in time, so this vote is a placeholder - I'll change it as needed. Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-21 06:38 PM
You do really good maps! Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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valadaar's comment on 2011-03-10 09:31 AM


Map link is broken...

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The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-10 07:11 AM
This is more of a frame work and flavour text for a series of subs that´ll flesh out the area (I hope). /D. Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-21 06:20 PM
OK, ladies and gentlemen, I´ve added a map to this sub as well.
Sadly, it has to be a linked image, since our gallery ain´t accepting uploads at the moment.
As soon as it works again, I´ll put the map up as a nice thumbnail.
Hope you´ll like it!
/David Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-21 06:41 PM
Thanks, val!

Pen, paper, lots of eraser and microsoft paint(TM) is a lethal combination...:-) Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-01-04 01:07 AM
YES!! Finally, I managed to put the map in there!

Hope you´ll like it!

/David Go to Comment
The Witherdowns
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-05 04:29 PM
Love the map..I know how hard you worked on it..It looks great..Darlin Go to Comment
The Human Races of Locastus
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-10-09 06:17 PM
I like every part of this except the Autumn Kingdom, because it's a massively cliche'd clone of China.

Otherwise, it's great. Go to Comment
The Human Races of Locastus
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manfred's comment on 2007-12-04 08:08 AM
Wow again. Lots of meat here, yet the write-ups manage to stay very compact. The inspiration for some of the races is visible, but doesn't poke into the eye... they are all very usable. It is indeed a good inspiration! Speaking for the formatting-crazy crowd, it could be easily split into a scroll, but it is fine as is.

Great work, O.! It is easy to create new races/minorities based on this list - I may end up doing that very thing. :) Go to Comment
The Human Races of Locastus
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-04 09:37 PM
Yes, I rather feel that many exotic unique kinds of humans can be more interesting (and work more logically- why do ALL THE ELVES IN THE WHOLE WORLD have the exact same culture?) than a bunch of semihuman creatures. If there are nonhumans, they had better be totally weird, or it really won't hold my attention. Go to Comment
The Human Races of Locastus
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-03 11:32 PM
Amazing. Wonderful characterization of various races and locales. I love it. Go to Comment
The Human Races of Locastus
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-03 08:59 PM
What a teaming city yours must be. Go to Comment
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