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The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-29 07:19 PM
These guys are slick and well done. To de-trek the race, just add some more limbs :) Go to Comment
The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-04 12:29 PM
I remember reading this while you were working on it..I liked it then..I really like it now the finished product..still thinking about grave yard.. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Strolen's comment on 2008-01-03 08:24 PM
Very sinister location. Giving players the top part can just get you wondering what the hell is going on there. I almost didn't want to read the rest because I sort of enjoyed the suspense of not knowing what it is. I very much liked the creature and it didn't leave any questions on what was going on. Beautifully descriptive and I wish I had a game to use it in! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-12 01:39 AM
Very nice, very nice. As a huge fan of Bas-Lag and anything that does a Picasso on typical fantasy, Locastus really speaks to me, and this submission is no exception. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-03-05 12:57 PM
I can not believe I missed this one. Well now that that oversight has been corrected (and voted upon), I must say I do like the way this submission came out.

Factories with bound demons/ spirits magi-punk at its finest. And dark magi-punk at that. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-17 02:24 AM
An industrial revolution gone wrong! This mechanical horror does a terrific job when it comes to revealing the heavy price that rapid industrialization carries. Great work! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
EchoMirage's comment on 2008-10-27 03:46 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-11 10:29 PM
I'm pleased that I could help. Will you do an entry on the Bllod Shylocks? 5/5 Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Kinslayer's comment on 2008-01-30 01:52 PM
Is this a Wal-Mart parody?

I like the vivid description, I can almost hear the pumping steam in the pipes. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-05 02:45 PM
Very nicely set up and execution. The concept and the description merge together perfectly. I like it, I like it a lot. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Dozus's comment on 2007-12-12 06:42 AM
Industrial, oppressive, soul-eating... What else could one ask for? Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Murometz's comment on 2007-12-12 12:48 PM
Another fascinating piece. I can only echo what others have already said. Great one, David! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-12 08:04 AM
Excellent - well described and paints a vivid picture indeed! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-11 09:02 PM
Great work, Ouroboros, this is a truly dark piece that really reveals the spirt of the Witherdowns. You set up the mood perfectly, then reveal the gruesome truth. Awesome. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-12 08:14 AM
I believe you could use this (with some minor adjustments) in RPGs like Shadowrun or CoC. That would probably be pretty cool. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-12 02:44 AM
Hi Cheka! Yep, Blood Shylocks and organ traders are coming up. That´ll be truly bleak...:-) Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-05 04:25 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
Kassil's comment on 2007-12-29 04:56 AM
This is freaking awesome. I love it. It feels like a mix of the Mortuary in Planescape, the steampunk-ish feel of China Mieville's books, and a certain eerie, creepily morbid touch special to it. The visual image of it hanging on the skyline like a diseased, rotting tree stump is arresting, and the way the interior is described gives a good feel for it.

The aspects of how the Caretakers feel soiled, and some strive to absolve themselves somehow, gives it a more real feeling, as well, with ordinary folks trying not to let their job get to them... Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-10 05:47 PM
Yet another good submission. There must be a way of cleaning any soul vestiages from the body before reanimating it. Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-12-10 11:43 AM
Ah, the latest addition in an expanding setting! A great one as well, I should mention that I will GM a session in the Locastus setting tomorrow and the tower will be one of the locastions featured. This write has what I expected of it when I read the headline. But I feel that it is missing something, that little extra. Hmmm(need to think about that), but still- a great submission that recives a high score from me. Go to Comment
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