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The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-26 12:40 PM
If you held a poker at normal temps (one not heated) to the skin of one of these creatues) would it burn it? 5/5 and an HOH Go to Comment
The T´Cha
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Obsidian's comment on 2007-12-28 02:09 AM
man, this is so good. It is so out of the ordinary. I loove the section on the psychology of T'cha. It is so different. Keep it up! Go to Comment
The T´Cha
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-29 08:19 PM
These guys are slick and well done. To de-trek the race, just add some more limbs :) Go to Comment
The T´Cha
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-04 01:29 PM
I remember reading this while you were working on it..I liked it then..I really like it now the finished product..still thinking about grave yard.. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Strolen's comment on 2008-01-03 09:24 PM
Very sinister location. Giving players the top part can just get you wondering what the hell is going on there. I almost didn't want to read the rest because I sort of enjoyed the suspense of not knowing what it is. I very much liked the creature and it didn't leave any questions on what was going on. Beautifully descriptive and I wish I had a game to use it in! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-12 02:39 AM
Very nice, very nice. As a huge fan of Bas-Lag and anything that does a Picasso on typical fantasy, Locastus really speaks to me, and this submission is no exception. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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MoonHunter's comment on 2008-03-05 01:57 PM
I can not believe I missed this one. Well now that that oversight has been corrected (and voted upon), I must say I do like the way this submission came out.

Factories with bound demons/ spirits magi-punk at its finest. And dark magi-punk at that. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Maggot's comment on 2007-12-17 03:24 AM
An industrial revolution gone wrong! This mechanical horror does a terrific job when it comes to revealing the heavy price that rapid industrialization carries. Great work! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-10-27 04:46 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-11 11:29 PM
I'm pleased that I could help. Will you do an entry on the Bllod Shylocks? 5/5 Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Kinslayer's comment on 2008-01-30 02:52 PM
Is this a Wal-Mart parody?

I like the vivid description, I can almost hear the pumping steam in the pipes. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-05 03:45 PM
Very nicely set up and execution. The concept and the description merge together perfectly. I like it, I like it a lot. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Dozus's comment on 2007-12-12 07:42 AM
Industrial, oppressive, soul-eating... What else could one ask for? Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-12-12 01:48 PM
Another fascinating piece. I can only echo what others have already said. Great one, David! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-12 09:04 AM
Excellent - well described and paints a vivid picture indeed! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-11 10:02 PM
Great work, Ouroboros, this is a truly dark piece that really reveals the spirt of the Witherdowns. You set up the mood perfectly, then reveal the gruesome truth. Awesome. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-12 09:14 AM
I believe you could use this (with some minor adjustments) in RPGs like Shadowrun or CoC. That would probably be pretty cool. Go to Comment
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-12 03:44 AM
Hi Cheka! Yep, Blood Shylocks and organ traders are coming up. That´ll be truly bleak...:-) Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-05 05:25 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Tower of Necrology
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Kassil's comment on 2007-12-29 05:56 AM
This is freaking awesome. I love it. It feels like a mix of the Mortuary in Planescape, the steampunk-ish feel of China Mieville's books, and a certain eerie, creepily morbid touch special to it. The visual image of it hanging on the skyline like a diseased, rotting tree stump is arresting, and the way the interior is described gives a good feel for it.

The aspects of how the Caretakers feel soiled, and some strive to absolve themselves somehow, gives it a more real feeling, as well, with ordinary folks trying not to let their job get to them... Go to Comment
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