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Artemius Coil, Physician
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-04 03:45 PM
YUCK! What a disgusting place and the same goes for the man. I don't think anybody would want to go there willing.. I do have a few questions. Does the good doctor make house calls if it is Mowar Dusk or one of his henchmen that needs medical assistance if so does he try to clean himself up a little or not give a shit because Mowar Dusk is his Boss? Since he knows most of the alchemists and apothecaries, do the Red Honey addicts come to him for a "prescription or is it more expensive to get a "prescription" from him rather than from the street dealers? Is the Red Honey that he gets for himself purer than the Red Honey from the street dealers? Does he ever prescribe red honey for medicinal purposes or is Red Honey only for recreational purposes?

Sorry about all of the questions but as you know "curiosity kills the cat" and as I am all feline I am very curious. Go to Comment
Artemius Coil, Physician
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-05 05:24 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-30 04:12 PM
Really awesome, very different. Locastus remains in top form. Go to Comment
The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-26 12:40 PM
If you held a poker at normal temps (one not heated) to the skin of one of these creatues) would it burn it? 5/5 and an HOH Go to Comment
The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
Obsidian's comment on 2007-12-28 02:09 AM
man, this is so good. It is so out of the ordinary. I loove the section on the psychology of T'cha. It is so different. Keep it up! Go to Comment
The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-29 08:19 PM
These guys are slick and well done. To de-trek the race, just add some more limbs :) Go to Comment
The T´Cha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-01-04 01:29 PM
I remember reading this while you were working on it..I liked it then..I really like it now the finished product..still thinking about grave yard.. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Strolen's comment on 2008-01-03 09:24 PM
Very sinister location. Giving players the top part can just get you wondering what the hell is going on there. I almost didn't want to read the rest because I sort of enjoyed the suspense of not knowing what it is. I very much liked the creature and it didn't leave any questions on what was going on. Beautifully descriptive and I wish I had a game to use it in! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2007-12-12 02:39 AM
Very nice, very nice. As a huge fan of Bas-Lag and anything that does a Picasso on typical fantasy, Locastus really speaks to me, and this submission is no exception. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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MoonHunter's comment on 2008-03-05 01:57 PM
I can not believe I missed this one. Well now that that oversight has been corrected (and voted upon), I must say I do like the way this submission came out.

Factories with bound demons/ spirits magi-punk at its finest. And dark magi-punk at that. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Maggot's comment on 2007-12-17 03:24 AM
An industrial revolution gone wrong! This mechanical horror does a terrific job when it comes to revealing the heavy price that rapid industrialization carries. Great work! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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EchoMirage's comment on 2008-10-27 04:46 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-12-11 11:29 PM
I'm pleased that I could help. Will you do an entry on the Bllod Shylocks? 5/5 Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Kinslayer's comment on 2008-01-30 02:52 PM
Is this a Wal-Mart parody?

I like the vivid description, I can almost hear the pumping steam in the pipes. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Chaosmark's comment on 2008-10-05 03:45 PM
Very nicely set up and execution. The concept and the description merge together perfectly. I like it, I like it a lot. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Dozus's comment on 2007-12-12 07:42 AM
Industrial, oppressive, soul-eating... What else could one ask for? Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Murometz's comment on 2007-12-12 01:48 PM
Another fascinating piece. I can only echo what others have already said. Great one, David! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-12 09:04 AM
Excellent - well described and paints a vivid picture indeed! Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Demagogue's comment on 2007-12-11 10:02 PM
Great work, Ouroboros, this is a truly dark piece that really reveals the spirt of the Witherdowns. You set up the mood perfectly, then reveal the gruesome truth. Awesome. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-12-12 09:14 AM
I believe you could use this (with some minor adjustments) in RPGs like Shadowrun or CoC. That would probably be pretty cool. Go to Comment
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