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Maug, The Bitter God
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Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 11:43 PM


A refreshingly different God


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Rock Traghax
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-25 11:39 AM
I'd like to ride one of those. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-09-25 10:03 AM
The lightning wreathed lance put me off for a second. But this is a well executed submission and it provides an interesting beasty. Thanks. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Chaosmark's comment on 2008-09-25 11:04 PM
I think you captured just about everything needed within this post. Very nicely done. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Murometz's comment on 2013-10-30 12:51 PM
Great take on the ubiquitous fantasy "lizard mount". Terrific detail. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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valadaar's comment on 2008-09-25 08:06 PM
Your stuff is always of superb quality Ouroboros! I like this one a great deal.

Only request - any plot ideas? Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-25 11:43 AM
Just remember to hold on to your hat - and bring plenty of sugar lumps...:-) Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-09-27 02:58 AM
I love these critters..would love to saddle one up....mind you not with the sissy english saddle like they use in Sweden...but the good ol western saddle like a real cowboy rides...*L* Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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manfred's comment on 2008-09-18 07:14 AM
...or rooms dug into its flesh? I bet there is some interesting way to bypass the creature's immune system and defensive reactions. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Scrasamax's comment on 2008-09-18 08:02 AM
I like it, it is certainly not what I had in mind, but it fits the basics of the challenge. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-17 09:36 PM
Does the Dragon not feel pain when things are bolted onto it? Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-17 09:37 PM
For some reason the bit to give this an HOH is missing. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-18 02:07 PM
Why is the HOH thingy missing from this? I want to give it an HOH but it won't let me do it. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-09-18 10:15 AM
A good quality submission. It has good scientific explanations and fits well in your setting. It may be a bit on the dry end for me, but still a good piece that adds to your marvelous world. Always looking forward to more Locastus stuff. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-09-19 10:32 AM
It's missing for me too. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Chaosmark's comment on 2010-05-30 11:25 PM
Epic. Biology.

I don't care so much about the physics of it. This is just so out there and so awesome that now I want to see more worlds break away from the norm and have truly strange creatures.

Flying jellyfish. What a concept. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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valadaar's comment on 2008-09-17 09:33 PM
Not quite a dragon, but an excellent piece nonetheless. You should run a Locastus RP here - I'd play :) Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-18 11:26 AM
Somehow I imagined this as some sort of floating, oversized man-o´war, with very little in the intelligence and perception department. I sort of envisaged the buoyant tisue to be something extruded from the central core, like a shell, hard and insensate.

The whole thing is, of course, completely without any base in real-world physics, chemistry and biology. I´m sure somewhere, a physicist is tearing his hair out over the inconsistencies in lift and buoyancy, a chemist is weeping softly over the line: "Chemically altering helium" and a biologist is clawing her face in despair over my flagrant nonchalance of animal size v/s nutrient mass intake rules. Oh, well, with magic everyting is possible (and its always fun to annoy people).

Thank you for your comments - Your criticism is what makes me a better writer.

/David Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Ouroboros's comment on 2012-06-15 04:05 PM
Thanks, Forganthus. A late thought on these critters is that they could be the larval stage of something a bit more... interesting. Perhaps they are the spawn of the Great Air Kraken, a ferocious beast that lives in the upper atmosphere and snacks on airships... Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-06-14 03:10 PM
Awesome stuff. I'd like to hear if there are any related creatures. Stuff like this usually isn't made/evolved in isolation.

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Blood Lover!

       By: Murometz

Forsht Bligo is a dwarf who loves the taste of blood. He's become quite the connoisseur over the years. Pigs blood, sheeps blood, cow's blood, if it's red and warm, Forsht considers it a delicacy. The fresher and hotter the better. Forsht will often sneak up on cattle, prick them with his dagger, and catch the flowing blood in his orc-skull drinking cup. His life goal is to taste the blood of every living animal. Although he has not yet sampled humanoid blood, he is not averse to doing so if the right opportunity presents itself. He is not particularly unpleasant if approached and can be easily befriended. Its just that he simply can't get enough of the "Juice of Life", as he calls it. Forsht's troubles come in the form of frightened and angry villagers who have proclaimed the misunderstood dwarf a vampire. Since Forsht is amused by this, he does little to dissuade anyone. This will lead to some dicey situations for Forsht in the near future.

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