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Maug, The Bitter God
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Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 11:43 PM


A refreshingly different God


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Rock Traghax
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-25 11:39 AM
I'd like to ride one of those. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-09-25 10:03 AM
The lightning wreathed lance put me off for a second. But this is a well executed submission and it provides an interesting beasty. Thanks. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Chaosmark's comment on 2008-09-25 11:04 PM
I think you captured just about everything needed within this post. Very nicely done. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Murometz's comment on 2013-10-30 12:51 PM
Great take on the ubiquitous fantasy "lizard mount". Terrific detail. Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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valadaar's comment on 2008-09-25 08:06 PM
Your stuff is always of superb quality Ouroboros! I like this one a great deal.

Only request - any plot ideas? Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-25 11:43 AM
Just remember to hold on to your hat - and bring plenty of sugar lumps...:-) Go to Comment
Rock Traghax
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Mesenchymal's comment on 2008-09-27 02:58 AM
I love these critters..would love to saddle one up....mind you not with the sissy english saddle like they use in Sweden...but the good ol western saddle like a real cowboy rides...*L* Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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manfred's comment on 2008-09-18 07:14 AM
...or rooms dug into its flesh? I bet there is some interesting way to bypass the creature's immune system and defensive reactions. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Scrasamax's comment on 2008-09-18 08:02 AM
I like it, it is certainly not what I had in mind, but it fits the basics of the challenge. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-17 09:36 PM
Does the Dragon not feel pain when things are bolted onto it? Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-17 09:37 PM
For some reason the bit to give this an HOH is missing. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-09-18 02:07 PM
Why is the HOH thingy missing from this? I want to give it an HOH but it won't let me do it. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-09-18 10:15 AM
A good quality submission. It has good scientific explanations and fits well in your setting. It may be a bit on the dry end for me, but still a good piece that adds to your marvelous world. Always looking forward to more Locastus stuff. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-09-19 10:32 AM
It's missing for me too. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Chaosmark's comment on 2010-05-30 11:25 PM
Epic. Biology.

I don't care so much about the physics of it. This is just so out there and so awesome that now I want to see more worlds break away from the norm and have truly strange creatures.

Flying jellyfish. What a concept. Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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valadaar's comment on 2008-09-17 09:33 PM
Not quite a dragon, but an excellent piece nonetheless. You should run a Locastus RP here - I'd play :) Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Ouroboros's comment on 2008-09-18 11:26 AM
Somehow I imagined this as some sort of floating, oversized man-o´war, with very little in the intelligence and perception department. I sort of envisaged the buoyant tisue to be something extruded from the central core, like a shell, hard and insensate.

The whole thing is, of course, completely without any base in real-world physics, chemistry and biology. I´m sure somewhere, a physicist is tearing his hair out over the inconsistencies in lift and buoyancy, a chemist is weeping softly over the line: "Chemically altering helium" and a biologist is clawing her face in despair over my flagrant nonchalance of animal size v/s nutrient mass intake rules. Oh, well, with magic everyting is possible (and its always fun to annoy people).

Thank you for your comments - Your criticism is what makes me a better writer.

/David Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Ouroboros's comment on 2012-06-15 04:05 PM
Thanks, Forganthus. A late thought on these critters is that they could be the larval stage of something a bit more... interesting. Perhaps they are the spawn of the Great Air Kraken, a ferocious beast that lives in the upper atmosphere and snacks on airships... Go to Comment
Blimp Dragon
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-06-14 03:10 PM
Awesome stuff. I'd like to hear if there are any related creatures. Stuff like this usually isn't made/evolved in isolation.

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