I wish I had something I could contribute to the submission to make it better other than a vote, but I don't. It's riddled with unanswered questions and any I might say are more or less echoes of previous commenters.
Maybe, if the player has gotten himself in deep enough excrement, the general will possess him and help him win his fight. Maybe, also, there is now a way to free the general (and maybe even bring him back to life). Go to Comment
This would have been a solid sub and it surely is written okay but like the Captain, the fact that the reason why the mage cursed this seemingly goodness-aligned general is unexplained leaves me with an adverse impression on this particular sub. Go to Comment
An intresting idea... A dagger that is both enchanted and cursed. I make the distinction, as it is very well possible that the dagger can help you, it also may actualy be a curse to use it. Go to Comment
I agree that this piece could really use some fleshing out, but it's a solid idea to start with. Would love to see a quest centered around removing the curse or appeasing the dead spirit of Jamil. Go to Comment
This is a nicely generic class item. Something useful, but not too powerful for the players to have. I would have liked some more background on the initials and any stories related to this item. Good work, though. Go to Comment