Okay. I really like this one. It strikes a cord in me.
It makes sense. It is not overly powerful, but useful in its own way. And it just smacks of that randomn wierdness that populates real life.
It is one of those forgotten magic items that would be in a Garage Sale from Hell, but without all those adverse problems that most items would have. Go to Comment
Very cool! I always knew that there's a reason I cling to all the toys of my childhood, despite the best efforts of my wife. You never know what might come in handy (or enchanted). Go to Comment
WOW! I like the story of Sorezeck and wish I had the idea you had. I am a screenwriter, do you mind if I put him into a movie I'm creating? Go to Comment
Awesome write-up, a pleasure to read! Not sure why but his single-minded end mission of finding his father was a little less than I expected with such a complex character. With the unpredictable humans, and since it was their fault he was in this predictament, I was expecting a little more animosity towards them. Not the hostile, killing kind as this dragon is refreshingly self-aware, but more like, "Lets see what we can manipulate these idiot humans into doing that won't be blamed on me." I would have saw him doing odd things to start some small wars between cities and such just for a little payback while he was on his way to his greater mission. Dragon scale "pranks" that would cause quite a bit of disruption which could continue to prove his superiority over them even in his current state.
Really enjoyed reading it!
(PS. 2m = ~6.5ft, not 8 -- you could just say just shy of 3m and we would all get it without the conversion) Go to Comment
Hmm... a good point. Mucking with the affairs of humans is something the character I imagine would do, and it would give him a bit more depth, as well as game usability. Sub revised.
Oh, and I really do stink at the metric system. Sorry. Go to Comment
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Great work! Go to Comment