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Ouroboros's comment on 2010-04-23 07:55 AM
OK, I´m not usually adverse to these kinds of posts. With some originality, this could have been good. But its not.
I´ll suggest expanding this with some colourful ingredients, some "flair".
As it is, its so mundane as to be boring. There´s nothing creative here.
And, I would suggest, use the spell check.
I´m looking forward to see this expanded upon - surprise me!!

//David Go to Comment
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Ouroboros's comment on 2010-04-25 05:16 PM
Yes, definitely. I was never my intention to rain on you parade, my friend. See it as constructive criticism.

Give this an overhaul, add some spice and present it in a nice package and it´ll be a good submission. And dont be afraid to ask for advice, the people at Strolen are pretty nice..

Everyone in here remember how it was to start out, even the REALLY good ones, like Moonhunter, Murometz, Scrasamax and Captain Penguin (and many others).

/ David

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Ouroboros's comment on 2010-04-25 05:20 PM
I think this will be very nice indeed when you´ve cleaned it up a bit and expanded it - and so, I´m withholding my vote for version 2.0. :)

/David Go to Comment
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Kassy's comment on 2010-06-07 04:03 AM
Only Voted. Go to Comment
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Nafar's comment on 2010-04-23 09:27 AM
sorry about that i will fix it up Go to Comment
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Nafar's comment on 2010-04-23 09:45 AM
Update: I made the mistake of first creating this in the Strolens Citadel editor so i had no spellchecker and no idea how long it was, i am now editing it in open office so it will be slightly better now Go to Comment
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Nafar's comment on 2010-04-23 02:21 PM
Wow.... -1xp? that's strange it'll get better soon. Go to Comment
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