Yes, definitely. I was never my intention to rain on you parade, my friend. See it as constructive criticism.
Give this an overhaul, add some spice and present it in a nice package and it´ll be a good submission. And dont be afraid to ask for advice, the people at Strolen are pretty nice..
Everyone in here remember how it was to start out, even the REALLY good ones, like Moonhunter, Murometz, Scrasamax and Captain Penguin (and many others).
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Items (Ranged Weapons) (Combat)
Give this an overhaul, add some spice and present it in a nice package and it´ll be a good submission. And dont be afraid to ask for advice, the people at Strolen are pretty nice..
Everyone in here remember how it was to start out, even the REALLY good ones, like Moonhunter, Murometz, Scrasamax and Captain Penguin (and many others).
/ David
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