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Murometz's comment on 2011-02-25 10:50 AM
Congrats! I recommend a shot of Timmy's Tequila when you reach 4th! :) Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2011-02-25 05:52 PM


Its cute! And how can you not love the title, Croc-a-Pult? The pioneering war-leader and the special padded jerkins sound very interesting btw!


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Drackler's comment on 2011-02-25 08:12 PM


 You could always add in the further information on the end, in case somebody wanted to read it.


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axlerowes's comment on 2011-05-03 03:48 PM


If Kevin Costner and Morgan Freeman can do it why not a croc? 



Solid idea and an amuzing one at that...might be a shark jumper for a campaign though...once the PC realize the GM is open to launching animals at each other as form of warfare things threaten to get all Monty Python on ya.



 


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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 10:53 AM
The image of spinning Croc's makes this for me. Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-25 08:23 AM
Congrads! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-24 12:24 PM


Lol I love it, I'm glad you found my idea worthy to expand into a sub. :)


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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-24 12:43 PM
I rather assumed it was a "silly" sub... Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-25 11:43 AM
Probably, and it likely pisses'em off too; an the only thing worse then a croc, is an angry injured croc! Go to Comment
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Ramhir's comment on 2011-02-25 05:22 PM


Ooo-Kay! Remind me not to be a kobold around there. Or a croc! Watch out for low-flying crocs!


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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-25 08:29 AM
Aye! We have excellent grog in these parts. Though I fear it often leads to more silliness. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-24 05:59 PM
I intended to but didn't see the option. If I understand the level system correctly, it is level 3 that lets me use established freetext. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-24 11:48 PM
Update: Finally, level 3 :)

Adding "Silly" freetext. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-25 12:29 PM
Honestly, there were a couple of ideas I left out when I wrote this because I didn't want to overdo the gag. There was the history of the pioneering war leader who invented the tactic and then there were special padded leather jerkins used to cushion their landing (which they were trained to quickly release).

Of course, I hadn't considered the efficacy of pissed off crocs :) Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-25 12:36 PM
I know I'm easily amused, but the image of a croc sailing through the air as a projectile just tickled my funny-bone and I had to run with it. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-28 07:53 PM
Update: Incorporated the padded leather jerkins and the story of the intrepid warleader. Go to Comment
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Renlim's comment on 2011-02-24 05:19 PM


Silly or not, it is awesome!  I can just see the expressions of my PC's faces as I describe what would be happening.


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RHHale's comment on 2012-12-11 06:51 PM
Hilarious!!! Love it!!! Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2011-02-22 03:39 PM


It might be because it is late but I had to read the first two sentences a dozen times to get it straight. "take her place' told me that Sean was a girl and the other was taking her place. Then in the next sentence it said the girl in front of the master was 40, or is that Sean...ah, "his" I guess he is a dude, oh -'s that is a break in the sentence. There were a couple more leading sentences that were interrupted by commas making it hard to track. (It happened that...) I normally don't nickpick but I very much enjoyed the narrative but it didn't flow. There wasn't much to prove the intense hatred but I can assume more went on, don't need it all.



Would like to see a hint of the demon in the passage though. At least an inkling of hatred not fully his own perhaps to give some foreshadowing to the unnaturalness of it all. That would make the intense anger more justified.



Sorry, didn't mean to dwell. I will hold the vote and give it another read.


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Strolen's comment on 2011-02-22 11:46 PM


That made a huge difference! It all falls together very nicely and the narrative compliments and enhanced the nature of the demons to make them more useable. Great addition of a few hooks as well. PCs often make plenty of enemies so could see this coming into play. Solid sub!


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