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The Lost Empire
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Cheka Man's comment on 2011-03-23 10:34 PM


Thank you. Those wizards have certainly suffered for their greed. Maybe I should make a 30 Pocket Realms submission.


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Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-03-24 10:13 AM


Oddly enough I read this two days ago and seemed to not have voted or commented on it at all. I like it, the backstory is quirky and detailed enough from a single perspective it reminds me of why I love backstory. Even though it might not be a story that the players will ever find out it is still a much needed bit of context to any sub I think. Kudos to you.


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Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-03-25 12:02 AM
That would be a great addon to this... tie it all together in a huge back story and actual working dungeon. Go to Comment
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Old Dreamer's comment on 2011-03-24 09:29 PM


Interesting. Liked the idea of the Tower creation leading to the city's end and the quest  by the Wizard-Lichs to free their torment.



Question though, would this mean that there are towers in every pocketworld? In my mind the tower(s) act as gates from one world/dimension to another.  As I followed the plot I expected the characters to end up at one of these towers, not a hill. Or, is the tallest hill that dimensions version of the tower?


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Dossta's comment on 2011-04-26 09:44 AM


Pretty much everything has been said already; it's an interesting premise and a solid submission.  I especially liked the writing for the internal dialogs of each character, because they really make it come alive.  I actually feel bad for the wizards, though my normal inclination would be to dismiss them entirely as arrogant fools.  Well done!


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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-23 06:14 PM


Special thanks to Cheka Man for 30 Grassy Mounds. Number 30 inspired the last piece that finally tied all my ideas together.


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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-24 10:30 PM
There used to be a tower there, but it is gone, along with the rest of the city. The only remaining link in that pocket world is the pentagram where the ritual was performed, and that is buried beneath the hill. I probably should have included more detail on that.

Otherwise, you are correct. There is a tower in every other pocket world and they are capable of acting as gates (if anyone could breach them.)

I am working on a follow-up submission, a 5 Room Dungeon that should clarify some of this. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-28 08:05 AM
It's up: The Lost Imperial City.

This is only the first of many I have planned. Go to Comment
Croc-a-Pult
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Cheka Man's comment on 2011-02-25 11:17 AM


Doesn't it hurt the crocs being catapaulted?


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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-02-25 08:10 AM
Yay! Have some grog! Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-02-24 12:42 PM


It is just below what I would expect from a silly item submission, it is not bad per se but a bit short on explanations and I do not find it very useful.


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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-02-24 05:50 PM


You might want to add the "Silly" Freetext.


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Murometz's comment on 2011-02-25 10:50 AM
Congrats! I recommend a shot of Timmy's Tequila when you reach 4th! :) Go to Comment
Croc-a-Pult
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Murometz's comment on 2011-02-25 05:52 PM


Its cute! And how can you not love the title, Croc-a-Pult? The pioneering war-leader and the special padded jerkins sound very interesting btw!


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Drackler's comment on 2011-02-25 08:12 PM


 You could always add in the further information on the end, in case somebody wanted to read it.


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axlerowes's comment on 2011-05-03 03:48 PM


If Kevin Costner and Morgan Freeman can do it why not a croc? 



Solid idea and an amuzing one at that...might be a shark jumper for a campaign though...once the PC realize the GM is open to launching animals at each other as form of warfare things threaten to get all Monty Python on ya.



 


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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 10:53 AM
The image of spinning Croc's makes this for me. Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-25 08:23 AM
Congrads! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-24 12:24 PM


Lol I love it, I'm glad you found my idea worthy to expand into a sub. :)


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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-24 12:43 PM
I rather assumed it was a "silly" sub... Go to Comment
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