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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-09 12:12 AM
I like it. Well executed. Fascinating subject matter. Lots of hooks. A touch of myth. Two Paws, high 8!

It really makes me want to play Blue Planet or work on that Echo the Dolphin RPG setting that I played with for a while. Go to Comment
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Iain's comment on 2006-06-04 05:45 AM
Lovely. Very unusual. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-09 07:46 AM
Wow...

I love it Muro. It has elements of sublime grace, exploitation, and majesty. Now I'm going to have to go and find that Ecco the Dolphin game now. Dammit. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-08 10:16 PM
This is really good and worth reading. Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-06-03 10:11 AM
Brings up some great images in my head. A great post with many gaming purposes.
I would love to hear about the dream that inspired this. Let's hope Muro has more dreams like this everyone! Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-20 01:32 PM
Once again Mur, after reading the first submission of yours I have read nothing but impressive stuff.

I wanted to vote 4.5 on this as I am trimming back my 5/5 votes... but I honestly could not bring myself to do it. While I may never use this entire idea, the concept of it being just a rumor that passes at a tavern around a few drinks and a warming fire, or a sailor on a still watered ship... impressive my friend.

Keep it up. Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-08 09:56 PM
For once you did a short post, and yet, it's as beautiful as anything else you've done. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-04-29 09:46 PM
All I can say has been said before, and better, than I ever could. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2014-02-18 02:40 PM
Lovely imagery on this one. I want to know more about the sperm whale's Leviathan Pool. Why only the "rambunctious" ones? Do they have their own Ocean Mother, or some other deity? Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 01:31 AM
damn log-in issues!

Oh by the way. This is not be confused with "The Piss Pool", the yellowish muck which Hhasgyaj-Adok, the Troglodyte King wallows in every morning. :D Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2012-11-09 07:34 PM
a nice and original piece of scenery Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-11-05 11:56 AM
Well damn, this is good! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-07-20 09:38 PM


A much more somber and thoughtful piece then I was expecting, and certainly memorable. I'm not sure it's a place most typical greedy/ goal driven PC's would be satisfied with finally finding. (given there's no treasure or other tangible rewards to be gained from the place and no great "villain" to overcome.)  



Nonetheless, for those looking for a memorable legend, and a equally memorable location, they would be hard pressed to find one more so.



A bit more detail about the rumor of "You will not live to see the New Moon after witnessing its beauty." might be a worthy enhancement. I can feel there is potential for a surprising climax here with the PC's being attacked by whales, or some type of water elemental near the beginning of the new moon, seeking to return them to the watery grave as well.


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manfred's comment on 2006-04-05 05:07 AM
I have to admit this religion, or sect or what is the proper name has quite surprised me.

Of a particular interest is the demon. A demon of Famine gaining his own cult... a surprising twist not likely in many world (except maybe in ours, with models as worshippers ;) ).

It shows nicely what can follow after a monotheistic religion starts to push all other out... and there can be other newly awakened cults. Is there any political resistance, from countries where the rulers are well-connected to 'their' religion, and see their powerbase threatened? Or could some enterprising ruler turn the story, and start to spread his own 'view on the things', keeping the One True Faith idea with tiny changes (and his own religious hierarchy of course). It is never easy to take over the world, you know. :)


*starts a fanclub for the Muromax Studios* Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2006-04-05 05:09 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-04-10 11:27 PM
Okay. This is faintly horrifying, but only because of the outlook these people have and what they go through. I like it as a group to expose my players to. *shudder* There are so many fun things to do with this... Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-04-05 03:39 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-05 12:18 AM
This should almost be two or three posts. One for religion (as you don't do a Deity for this one), One for the cloister, and One for the NPC.

Still nicely done across the board. Go to Comment
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2006-06-01 12:32 AM
Excellently executed. Go to Comment
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Iain's comment on 2006-05-28 08:58 AM
Another brilliant submission by Muromax! Go to Comment
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