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Cloister of the Empty Table
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-06 09:05 PM
Not a place that I would like to visit. Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-04-11 11:43 AM
Okay. This was a hard one. The first story, about Ayyosha, was a true 5.0. The second part, about the cult, was a 4.0.

Distracting feature: When I began reading this I had gone into "imagination-mode" and the ode to Scrasamax was highly frustrating. I realize I sometimes have done the same, but I think I will begin to put such praise at the end of the post.

Overall this is well written. True craftsmanship shines through in a sometimes grisly post. The post is very long and I think you could have split it up in two parts (history/lore and cult/organization), and I would have given the first part 5.0 and the second part 4.0.

Additional plot:
Murder most foul - The local priests have begun dying and are found dead in the temples, their stomachs burst from excessive eating. Now a new priesthood has moved into an old, abandoned warehouse building and has declared that the wrath of their god is upon the city. In the beginning people scoff at these lunatics, but as the priesthoods are thinning out, and even ordinary citizens (most often food merchants and the like) die too, the despairing population begin turning to the newcomers for salvation.

The last remaining Arch Priest of a major temple summon the PCs into his temple besieged by angry converts. Can the PCs discover the relationship between the cult and the deaths, or will they too wither at the hands of the disciples of famine?

Yeah, I know the above plot needs grammar restructuring, but I am lazy :p Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-21 04:53 PM
I like it... I want to vote much higher but something about this doesn't sit well with me, no pun intended. Perhaps it is a cult of people subjugating their own demise... which wouldn't be the first time I would venture to say, but something doesn't really sit right in my liking of this.

I do love the history section however. The last paragraph is what did it for me the most. It was very detailed and heavily visual to me. The muromax duo have done a wonderful job yet again. Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:09 PM
I officially join manfred's club! Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Pariah's comment on 2006-04-29 10:28 PM
I yearn for more posts like this. Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Dozus's comment on 2015-03-20 11:07 AM
I remember reading this, but apparently never voted. Pretty creepy, both the mind control and all the cultic details. Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-05 12:35 AM
Ayyosha is the 'resident deity' of the Cloister, and OTF has no god. THE SOURCE is a RUSE! Its a mind control cult (shhh, dont tell the people) Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-07 12:31 AM


hmmm....this might be difficult to explain properly. We wanted to minimize the demon influence and maximize the strenghth of human WILL! Ayyosha's will. An exaggerated take on what the human spirit is capable of, when faced with ultimate desperation and hopelessness, so to speak. Ayyosha achieved a new state of being due to some unknown universal force. The demon was added to make this easier to digest as an rp concept. Of course there is resistence to the One True Faith! Stay tuned! There are many that twist the nebulous ideas for their own design. Thats the OTF's beauty. Easily altered and recalibrated. See Earl Garmon Cabbagestalk in Qacha's Neck to name one such miscreant. And your damn right! It aint easy taking over the world! Passively-aggresively or otherwise. I'm sure Scras will have his own take. Thats the pleasure of working with him! We dont step on each other's toes

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Cloister of the Empty Table
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-19 05:30 PM
Umm, ok, I guess :) Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Arminas's comment on 2006-05-31 10:18 PM
Okay... it may be because I am as twisted as Muro... but I LIKE this one.

No offense Muro, you understand I mean that in the best sense of it. The way I see it I get half of my ideas from being... morally odd.

Anyways, 5, man. Go to Comment
Cloister of the Empty Table
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the Wanderer's comment on 2006-12-19 05:14 PM
Cloister of the Empty Table
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Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-24 07:49 PM
I'm with AG that I wanted to give 5 for the first part and only 4 for the second so decided to take the middle ground. I'm not an actual fan of grisly but quite stoic with it. Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-12 01:42 PM
Ah. I remember this link and article. I really liked it.

I have also found a listing of people who did an entire seasons of BtVS based on Elvis Albums.

You know, Jethro Tull's theme albums would be prime canidates for this. Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-10-18 11:35 AM
Explanation of my recent addition.
Amya was never named in the song, and his name was changed to protect the guilty. Yet, they should be linked here.

For those that don't recognize it: She is the Girl, Jessie (Jessius) the best friend, and the singer of the song is Jefficus. Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-01 01:59 AM
Come on People. Get your groove on and post! Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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MoonHunter's comment on 2008-01-12 06:22 PM
We have a new addition. More people should submit to this codex Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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MoonHunter's comment on 2008-01-14 12:39 PM
March is comming up Muro Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2008-04-06 07:21 PM
Now, can you find and identify the other two literary references in here? =D Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-27 05:23 PM
I've used this technique myself in For Whom the Bell Tolls (Metallica) and Beneath the Willow (Brad Paisley and Allison Krauss). It is a top notch way to come up with new and innovative ideas. I've followed a link Moon sent me and wrote up an entire scenario, or string of scenarios from Metallica: Metallica.


http://www.gamegrene.com/node/404 Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-08-22 08:28 PM
I wonder why I didn't vote on that before. Go to Comment
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