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Mourngrymn
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-04-06 03:25 PM
I like it, it's interesting... Though for some reason it strikes me as being a bit munchkin, or, maybe, if that's too strong a term, perhaps Mary-Sue-ish.
Still...

4/5 Go to Comment
Mourngrymn
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-01-24 08:53 AM
Updated with Plot Hooks and information on his tattoos. Go to Comment
Mourngrymn
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-05 11:20 AM
Updated: Updated with more background Information Go to Comment
Mourngrymn
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-02-08 08:53 AM
Updated: Updated some roleplaying information and grammer. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-05 02:44 PM
Wow! From the depths of hell he hath been resurrected. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-06 04:21 PM
I can see where you came up with that thought. However, all of his abilities, tattoos... are all limited and have draw backs to them. I always place conditionals on my magic in my system. But I will look at it again. Go to Comment
Mourngrymn
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-05 02:26 PM
Updated with vote! Go to Comment
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Drackler's comment on 2006-05-05 09:59 AM
Great job Mourngrymn


-Drackler Wyrmdragon Go to Comment
Mourngrymn
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Hrofgar's comment on 2007-04-04 11:09 AM
It was very good, and I shall be looking for more of your posts.



-Hrofgar, Lord of the North Go to Comment
Mourngrymn
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chilled's comment on 2012-06-11 07:11 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 03:26 AM
The new threat of the present day situation adds everything to this! Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-01-21 05:06 PM
Well, I think mostly the reason it's been rated just average is that it really lacks a certain amount of originality.
In many worlds, especially those wracked by cataclysms or Wars of Gods (a frequent mythology- I wonder why?), there are always ruins that lie open to the sky- I have something like this too, called Phanorion, in one of my older worlds (the king stole a God's daughter, and the city was destroyed for his transgression). This is just another ruined city to use as a convenient, if cliche, plot hook. Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-01-21 09:34 PM
Hey, no problem, buddy. Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-01-21 01:06 PM
I hate having a mid rating with no one commenting on why. Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-01-21 08:57 PM
comment well taken... I will return to my hole now. Thanks again Capt. Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-10-28 01:56 PM
Updated: update Go to Comment
Rath ley Mar Ruins
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-05 11:50 AM
Updated: Updated information on the present day situation of the ruins. Go to Comment
Blackrose Academy
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MoonHunter's comment on 2004-12-29 08:47 AM
Good. We bag upon bad posts continuously (and sometimes offer helpful criticism). My best posts have like two posts... one of which is usually me saying... "Does anyone have a comment?" Go to Comment
Blackrose Academy
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Iain's comment on 2004-12-29 04:58 PM
I like it! A few questions though. Other than providing training opportunities for its students, does the Academy have any ulterior motive in choosing missions? Does it choose heroic ones, evil ones or try to prop up and support any political factions (perhaps in exchange for money)? Also, is mission selection up to some central body or the individual tutors?

Also, even though the students don’t know, how many people in the outside world realise what the Academy is doing? I would imagine quite a few have figured it out. What might they think of it when they do? If the Academy does have some overall political goal (or even if their students just happened to thwart someone in one mission) this could seriously affect the way some factions view the Academy. Go to Comment
Blackrose Academy
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EchoMirage's comment on 2004-12-29 05:52 PM
I think the academy mightb ecome a mere pawn if it sell it services too often and does not show some backbone - its voice no longer commanding respect but rather provoking a smirk or frown. Go to Comment
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