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Ring of Stonekin
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Iain's comment on 2005-10-19 05:55 PM
Indeed - very nice. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-10-19 01:18 PM
I gave you 5/5. :) I like this invention. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-10-19 09:48 AM
How do I fix the links when posting here? To make them a workable link instead of what I have. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-10-19 10:30 AM
Thanks manfred... I've been sitting on this item for months on my phone but have never transfered it to my PC. I decided it was time, and glad I am that I did.

I appreciate the comment and the vote, but what would it need for a 5/5? Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-10-19 10:50 AM
Yeah I tried the url tags and they didn't work. I agree with the stingy on giving 5/5, I fail to give them and only on the rarest of occasions. But I do give them.

Thanks again. I have some more additions but don't know if I will get to them today. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-10-21 08:47 PM
Thanks again for the comments. . . it helps the creativity flow. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-03-20 01:52 PM
Thank you dreamer... nice to have ones work appreciated even after so long a time. Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-10-20 08:22 AM
Yae to all the above - plus gets my wish I'd thought of that award

Even taking into account the current thinking on being stingy with 5/5 (which, by the way, I agree fully with and am trying to implement as best I can), this is a definite candidate for the top score


Great work - keep it up - 5/5 Go to Comment
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-09 10:53 AM
There are many things I like about this post... good history (specific, yet easily to generalize to another world), not too powerful (needing two at a time!) and the curse. Also, it's hard to come up with something completely new, and to my mind, this is that. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2011-05-02 09:22 AM


Reminds me of some classic comic book tropes, the idea of some technology or item eventually corrupting the user, turning them into something they didn't intend (Doc Ock, for example). I can see the same idea functioniong for any fantasy race.


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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-10 03:08 PM
Can't add to what has already been said, but I like this item(s) :). Go to Comment
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Ted's comment on 2011-03-21 04:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Old Dreamer's comment on 2011-03-20 01:38 PM


This is really cool. History is fantastic. Reminds me of all sorts of strange inventions and machines created during war to give any kind of advantage to one side or the other.  Original, nice history, very limited in use, what more can you ask for? Thanks.


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gulkien's comment on 2011-05-02 04:07 AM


good good good


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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-21 08:29 PM


Very nice.


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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-05-28 11:17 AM
I fail to see your reasoning.
Why would it be in bad taste? They are absolutely demonstrating through magical means their innocence in the matter, and they aren't actually killing themselves. Even a religion with prohibitions against suicide would have nothing to fear from this, unless the person wasn't actually guilty, and then it would be a holy execution.
Or am I totally off-base? Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-20 01:18 PM
He asks the master of links if I know a few sites...

http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=8023#8023

And some other good writing sites:
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=19913#19913
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=24866#24866
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=29862#29862

okay... cut and paste them...

iAnd you people wonder why I index the IGW thread?/i Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-20 08:56 AM
The story meandered a bit. Nicely executed, but needs to be tightened up some. (Sorry no pun intended). You might want to take it to a fiction site and see what advice writers might give about it. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-20 10:07 AM
To be honest, I need to print it out and go over it in text to review it as a piece of fiction. That is why I suggested a fiction writers site... they do that as a matter of course. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2005-05-20 10:31 PM
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