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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-09 10:53 AM
There are many things I like about this post... good history (specific, yet easily to generalize to another world), not too powerful (needing two at a time!) and the curse. Also, it's hard to come up with something completely new, and to my mind, this is that. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2011-05-02 09:22 AM


Reminds me of some classic comic book tropes, the idea of some technology or item eventually corrupting the user, turning them into something they didn't intend (Doc Ock, for example). I can see the same idea functioniong for any fantasy race.


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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-10 03:08 PM
Can't add to what has already been said, but I like this item(s) :). Go to Comment
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Ted's comment on 2011-03-21 04:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Old Dreamer's comment on 2011-03-20 01:38 PM


This is really cool. History is fantastic. Reminds me of all sorts of strange inventions and machines created during war to give any kind of advantage to one side or the other.  Original, nice history, very limited in use, what more can you ask for? Thanks.


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gulkien's comment on 2011-05-02 04:07 AM


good good good


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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-03-21 08:29 PM


Very nice.


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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-05-28 11:17 AM
I fail to see your reasoning.
Why would it be in bad taste? They are absolutely demonstrating through magical means their innocence in the matter, and they aren't actually killing themselves. Even a religion with prohibitions against suicide would have nothing to fear from this, unless the person wasn't actually guilty, and then it would be a holy execution.
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-20 01:18 PM
He asks the master of links if I know a few sites...

http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=8023#8023

And some other good writing sites:
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=19913#19913
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=24866#24866
http://www.strolen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=29862#29862

okay... cut and paste them...

iAnd you people wonder why I index the IGW thread?/i Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-20 08:56 AM
The story meandered a bit. Nicely executed, but needs to be tightened up some. (Sorry no pun intended). You might want to take it to a fiction site and see what advice writers might give about it. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-20 10:07 AM
To be honest, I need to print it out and go over it in text to review it as a piece of fiction. That is why I suggested a fiction writers site... they do that as a matter of course. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2005-05-20 10:31 PM
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-20 06:19 PM
4/5

I wish the Noose of Redemption really existed.If the story was a bit...tighter,haha, then it would be 5/5 Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-20 06:20 PM
4/5

Whoops, it came out twice. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-28 11:11 AM
So I had a question for everyone here.

Knowing that if you were innocent you would willingly put the noose around your neck to prove it. Even though you know your innocent and you will not die (hopefully) would that not be a similar act of suicide?

So, would a priest or a Paladin or Holy Warrior of the church put on one? Knowing they were innocent, but by placing a rope of execution around their neck would that not be seen in bad taste? Just curious. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-23 11:28 AM
Edited some for content. Thanks for the compliments. I was worried about this one as it was difficult for me to bring to life.

Dragon Lord :
The item is very unique.

There could very well be other items of such history created. This was actually a dream I had which I fleshed out into this.

The other item in question (Pueola Demuet) is another such unique item whose origin can be linked back to the Gods. Which is being detailed as we speak.

The Gods have tried not to become involved with the mortals (in my world) on too many occasions but there are some items that have been created for special events, heros, kingdoms, and even by accident. See Pueola Demuet for a good example of an accidental item created by the Gods. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-20 09:13 AM
Thanks Moon.

I have been writing on this for four days now not happy with it. Now when I posted it... I was like, HOLY COW thats a lot of information.

Any other ideas then reducing the ramblings? Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-20 12:19 PM
Any good choice sites?

Wow printed up as 5 pages without comments... I will take the knife to it. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-20 01:38 PM
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-06-02 08:25 AM
I see your reasoning behind that. I was under the outlook that by physically putting the noose on, regardless of it's intent was an act of self harm, even though they willingly know it will not hurt them it is still the act of it that should be seen in bad form.

I was thinking that one of the two listed archtypes would demand the use of the noose to prove any innocence yet also degree that by being judged and having it put on them would clear them of any guilt at doing so.

Just my thought. But that is why I asked. Go to Comment
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