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Blood Spiders
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-07-23 09:18 PM


A nice variation on the giant spider, and gives enough info to easily add into a game.  It's rather straightforward description and mundane attack methods also let this works equally well in post apocalypse and space faring sci-fi games which is a nice plus.



(On a small side note it could use a quick proof read and a few word corrections "wight power" for example.)

 


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Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-08 12:52 PM
A solid beast with the added bonus of cool, errr, hot water glands. Those glands earned you a .5 point ;) I know you take great personal pride in your posts, but I hope you do not see this as a failure. It is not: Rather it is an animal post of decent quality that glimmers somewhat. That is good. It is above average Strolenite standard and the Strolenite average is awesome. Go to Comment
Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-08 12:58 PM
No insult to injury taken. :) Yes for those of you who do not know, I strive to have all my posts to be of the utmost quality. Although I know they all can not be like that. If you refrain from posting a comment or vote in fear of me not liking it, don't be. I thrive on comments, good or bad. I can learn more from a bad comment than I can from a good one.

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Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-17 07:46 AM
Protection. In a desert environment, the strong survive. The sandgrazer's are nearly defenseless. The symbiosis that they shre with the Lemieans is simple, they each have something the other needs. The desert tribes need a source of water, which the sandgrazer provides. The sandgrazer needs protection from predators and other hazards, which the lemiean's provide.

I was thinking that the glads would naturally drop off due to weight. After a certain weight they would simply fall.

The do eat, but do not seem to eat as often as most animals would. In a desert you wil lfind a lot of animals eating certain plants that horde water to get their water intake. The sandgrazer doesn't need to do this as they horde their own water, therefore they would not be required ot eat as much as a normal desert animal. They eat yes, but not nearly as much.

They are more of a domesticated animal. They have very little fight in them and enjoy the attention and protection the Lemiean's give them. They are not like their difficult cousins, the camel. They will allow only certain people to ride them and if they are of a certain weight, to heavy and they will just stand there or sit.

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Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-03-16 08:50 AM
updated with more info. Go to Comment
Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-17 12:11 AM
A nice post. I have many questions :-)

Why do the glands naturally drop off? In a desert, I would want to keep my extra glands. And why don't they need to eat? How do they behave around the Lemeain's? Camels are supposed to be mean animals - are these also? Will they permit Lemeain's to ride them, or only to steal their glands? What do they get out of their partnership with the Lemeain's? Not water or food I imagine? Go to Comment
Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-17 11:34 PM
Thanks, it is a nice addition. I like the idea of a camel-based creature. They are, to me, exotic creatures. Go to Comment
Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Aldwin's comment on 2006-07-02 04:02 PM
Descriptive nature was well written. I got a good feel for what these creatures look like. More information, and perhaps some backround would have been nice, though t'was a nice overall piece.

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Sandgrazer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Redgre's comment on 2011-11-22 09:16 AM
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Yeaken
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2005-11-07 10:41 AM
I want to know what kind of sound it makes. You could use that to mess with the players!

Domestication: what are they used for? Being eight feet tall might not be the easiest thing to farm with. Like elephants, can they use their horn to manipulate things? Drag stuff? Used to pull wagons... Go to Comment
Yeaken
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-07 11:36 AM
The sound is a long and deep blart for lack of an exact replicated sound. It is deep similar to a tuba sound. Very clear and resonant, not hollow sounding.

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Yeaken
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-03-16 12:00 PM
updated with some information. Go to Comment
Yeaken
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-16 11:56 PM
I like the details, the horn, the bleating, the longer front legs, the back leg claws... Go to Comment
Ka'tshar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-06 07:05 PM
Insects are a great deal of fun. Huge insects more so. Go to Comment
Ka'tshar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-03-13 04:23 PM
This was one of my first and early subs here... Go to Comment
Ka'tshar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-15 12:37 AM
I like the details, like the different types of ants, their roles and their physical differences.

Mmmmm. ant eggs! my favorite! Go to Comment
Ka'tshar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-09 07:33 AM
Good details, though the color-coding really does not fit - ants use pheromones almost exclusively to communicate, and have quite poor vision.

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Ka'tshar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-06 06:04 PM


The ant egg is a nice touch. Overall, a solid sub.


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Choker of Conversion
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-10-19 08:08 PM
Two thumbs and a tail up. It has a nice balance between story and effect. Go to Comment
Choker of Conversion
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Iain's comment on 2005-10-19 05:54 PM
While I don't dislike this item, I felt it was quite similar to the Stonekin ring you just posted but less good (less atmospheric and less interesting powers). That's why I only gave it 3/5 (I gave the other 5/5). Go to Comment
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