YOu see now the complexity of it. Once its revenge is completed it still has its rage and anger and it must choose an outlet for that. Go to Comment

To kill Unicorns, or Dark Unicorns? I could imagine Unicorn HUnters in the vien of Dragon Hunters that seek out and attempt to remove the dark blight that they have become. Interesting plot idea for pcs. Go to Comment

While that is a simple question it is not a real easy answer. They have been seen as mounts for powerful demons but whether it is a broken and tamed thing or a power/ respect thing is totally unknown. No good person will be able to ride them regardless. Go to Comment

I really like the imagery of the horn untwisting and then shrivelling and turning black like a burnt corn shuck... Go to Comment

I imagine a few of these would be great in a world succumbing to darkness. Something where even the last bastions of goodness are being twisted by evil. Go to Comment

I would like to think that an iconically good creature such as a unicorn would not easily follow this path, even in the case of the violent death of their mate. A subset may fall into darkness, but I would not think all.

Still, a logical origin for such creatures. Go to Comment

Well done. Gives golf clap. Go to Comment

Very interesting. Go to Comment

Glad you liked it, added some plot hooks. Go to Comment

Interesting group. Go to Comment

That is a huge spider! Can it make any kind of web? THAT would be interesting! Go to Comment

I have a liking large insects. I thought I had voted on this and commented as well, but I guess not.

The detailing of the poison works well for me. The rest of the write up bring the feel of a real animal to the post. We will have an insect/ spider/ crawlie thing scroll coming online soon, and this will be added to that.

Two paws up! Go to Comment

I like this, it is very well described. Go to Comment

updated with new information. Go to Comment

Updated a few spelling errors and altered a bit of the information that didn't sit well with me after I reread it. Go to Comment

Hmm - nice

I quite like big spiders (about the only Bug-Eyed Monster I regularly use) and this is a good example of the type

A useful toxin too, but dangerous to collect - possible scenario there

Good - not outstanding but definitely very good - 3 1/2 I think Go to Comment

I like this post.... but so many bugs! Go to Comment

A nice variation on the giant spider, and gives enough info to easily add into a game.  It's rather straightforward description and mundane attack methods also let this works equally well in post apocalypse and space faring sci-fi games which is a nice plus.

(On a small side note it could use a quick proof read and a few word corrections "wight power" for example.)

 

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A solid beast with the added bonus of cool, errr, hot water glands. Those glands earned you a .5 point ;) I know you take great personal pride in your posts, but I hope you do not see this as a failure. It is not: Rather it is an animal post of decent quality that glimmers somewhat. That is good. It is above average Strolenite standard and the Strolenite average is awesome. Go to Comment

No insult to injury taken. :) Yes for those of you who do not know, I strive to have all my posts to be of the utmost quality. Although I know they all can not be like that. If you refrain from posting a comment or vote in fear of me not liking it, don't be. I thrive on comments, good or bad. I can learn more from a bad comment than I can from a good one.

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