I like all the gods, and it is really complete mythos. I am big fan of gods that exisist whether you want them to or not.
But I am curious about the tone and perspective you use when you write these posts. Did you have a narrator in mind or a source text? You aren't really writting from a third person meta-game stand point, but it is not academic write up either. We spoke brieflly about this before i know, perhaps this post-modern idea of needing to know or wanting to know who wrote something is just that. In the Torah there isn't a narrator, and perhaps people didn't ask that questions of there myths. Yet what is your take on it?
I found the last bit about the war of the god hurried and undetailed. I also never got a day in the life idea about what is was like to be a mortal in the 1st era. I know the true "modern" mortals were around until the gods fully equipped them, but we learn little about the people of the time.
Again a nice story of the gods.