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The King's Paupers
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Murometz's comment on 2006-03-14 12:07 AM
As Moon said, a tad cliche. They are rich kids slummin' I say tad because this has an original 'oomph' of its own. Having said that, the story and detail is very good! The last plot hook would obviously make a great 2 part scenario. 1-catching them 2- oh crap Kings nephews, now what?

reminds me of a film I saw recently, Hungarian I think. Cant recall the name, but I'll remember tomorrow. Rich kids would break in homes of the even riccher, and rearrange furniture, drop sofas in pool, stack up beds and chairs, that sort of thing. Harmless anarchy they called it. They would leave a note.."Your Days of Plenty are Numbered". Not the same thing I know, but same vibe for me. Well done Mourn! Go to Comment
The King's Paupers
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-10 12:02 PM
This is interesting, though the scale of the organization seems severely too high to have any chance of secrecy. I really like the idea though. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-07 11:37 PM
Both posts need to be read to get the most out of them. You can miss the fact that this is just another part of the same moral code. Still well done and well presented. Two paws up. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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Iain's comment on 2005-11-07 06:51 PM
First I read the Tenets of Knighthood and liked them, but thought they were nothing special. Then I read this and realised that beforehand I was reading on one face of a coin. Together, these two make an excellent post - I love the idea of two rival orders (or rather, amalgations of orders) of knights and especially the fact that those of shadow also have a strict code of honour, which overlaps with that of goodness. For example, Knight of Shadow and a Knight of Goodness would both agree on the formality of the challenge - to outsiders, there might at first sight be little difference. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-07 08:23 PM
Interesting. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-08 03:53 PM
A nice amoral code that fits well with its counterpiece. Well done. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-07 09:47 PM
Iain, that was their purpose. For every whisper there is a yell. For every dawn their is a dusk. For every good there is an evil. You can't have one without the other.

Thanks for commenting. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2016-01-06 09:42 PM
Update: Fixed a few spelling errors and fixed the Justice Tenet as it was a hash of the Knighthood and was ill typed. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-22 11:16 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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Moonlake's comment on 2016-01-07 07:33 PM
This is meant to be an opposite to the Tenet of Knighthood and yet not quite the opposite, and in there lies a refreshing twist, methinks. Go to Comment
Tenets of Shadow
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tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2009-11-24 07:08 PM
Everything by its nature defines its opposite. A nice concept to compliment the other. Go to Comment
Tenets of Knighthood
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-07 11:37 PM
The other side of this social system seems to have generated a great deal of buzz, yet this is a clear and well defined code. Well done.

Both posts need to be read to get the most out of them. Go to Comment
Tenets of Knighthood
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Cheka Man's comment on 2016-05-12 11:01 PM
Useful for any games featuring knights. Go to Comment
Tenets of Knighthood
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-08 03:52 PM
A nice moral code that fits well with its counterpiece. Well done. Go to Comment
Tenets of Knighthood
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-08 09:20 AM
This is actually a break down of an original codec, for lack of a better term, in history about the morals of knighthood and honor. It was much larger and a great deal heavier to read. So this is an actual view of what knighthood was supposed to be like. Whether it was in history or not is clouded by those who write it. Go to Comment
Tenets of Knighthood
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Murometz's comment on 2016-01-05 01:16 PM
good guide for aspiring (Westerosi :) ) Knights. Go to Comment
Tenets of Knighthood
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valadaar's comment on 2016-05-12 08:33 AM
Good, straightforward post.
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Venkis
Locations  (City)   (Water)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 02:53 PM
Two Paws :moon: :moon:

A good solid write up. It does require you to be a bit more familiar with Hewdamia than many of your Hewdamia posts. Go to Comment
Venkis
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-02-02 05:31 PM
By you commenting on all these old subs of mine has caused me to re-read them and go back for an edit. Something better may come of this for sure. Go to Comment
Venkis
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:50 PM
Good solid locale as others, nice history. What is happening now that makes the place interesting? Go to Comment
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