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Venkis
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 02:53 PM
Two Paws :moon: :moon:

A good solid write up. It does require you to be a bit more familiar with Hewdamia than many of your Hewdamia posts. Go to Comment
Venkis
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-02-02 05:31 PM
By you commenting on all these old subs of mine has caused me to re-read them and go back for an edit. Something better may come of this for sure. Go to Comment
Venkis
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:50 PM
Good solid locale as others, nice history. What is happening now that makes the place interesting? Go to Comment
Stormgarde
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 02:55 PM
Two Paws

This is a Hewdamia post that does not require you to be familiar with it to get the giest of the post. Go to Comment
Stormgarde
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:47 PM
Good solid location but is there anything particually unique about the city apart from its location? Go to Comment
Fey Hound
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 02:17 PM
While it can be said that I am partial to wolves and wolf like creatures, this is still a great write up. The animals have a real feel, while still being fantasy creatures. I give this write up two paws. :) Go to Comment
Fey Hound
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:56 PM
I am of two minds on this creature. On one hand, I like the creative and colorful write-up of the creature. On the other, it is neither fey, nor hound-like. I imagined something a little more fairie-fey, and less of a worghound. A solid creature, good for almost any setting. Go to Comment
Fey Hound
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-29 01:56 PM
forgot to vote. Go to Comment
Fey Hound
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-05 01:34 PM
Updated: This is a very good creature to use as a bane against worgs, winter wolves and the like if they are in a setting that you may be using. Any non-natural creature is seen as as prey. Go to Comment
Fey Hound
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-16 08:50 PM
I agree with Moonhunterthat it is a very good write up, but it seems too much like a generic intelligent fantasy wolf to me (yeah, i realize how weird that sounds ;-o) Adding a cat head does make it not just a wolf, but I don't understand why a cat head makes it run like a cat and have reflexes, and similarly I would think it would lose some of its ability to track scent. I know I'm being picky here, but I love a good marriage of form and function. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
manfred's comment on 2006-10-12 10:08 AM
What an ugly, er, I mean what a nice item. :)

The ultimate price to pay for power. Reading the description in detail, the wearer seems to be in no danger until he puts down the Amulet - what if he doesn't? I would think that the undead under his command would start to hate him anyway - maybe they would still obey his commands, but would work against him at every opportunity, the smarter ones twisting his commands to his detriment, etc. So for instance, if not commanded to attack, they could simply let adventurers get right to him (suprise!). Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-13 09:38 PM
I kinda like it, more for the story and description than the effect. Although, assuming you could deal with the undead and/or manipulate the poor sod, might prove an interesting way to assassinate someone. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-04 04:06 PM
Two paws up Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2005-11-06 04:28 AM
And of course there's always the fact that in using it,you are doomed to become the very thing you command,blisfully unaware of the changes until all hope of salvation has passed. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-04 08:53 PM
Very good. Once you wear it and command the undead you are riding a proverbial tiger. Not something to be used lightly. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-11-04 01:46 PM
A well written item and one that certainly has it uses. I must admit that I have seen similar before, but it is still a good item. It is a solid, good post that rise above the common submission due to its background, plot possibilities and excellent writing. You are a very good writer.

Edit: Removed the references to good english as Mourn felt that was a given. I, having seen less impressive post from native writers, tend to disagree, but I bow to the author's wishes Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-04 01:45 PM
Updated: Added storyline to the item. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-04 01:51 PM
I have been attempting to go past the usual items and bring a fresh light to old stuff that are known or come out with a completely new twist on an old idea. I'm glad you liked it. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-10-12 10:49 AM
The amulet gives the living control of the undead. Not the undead control over the undead. Once the wearer/ user is turned they loose their ability to control that which they have become. A double edged sword.

But I do love your idea... perhaps I could change it a little. Go to Comment
Amulet of the Damned
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-10-12 01:05 PM
And there is the moral dilema... to use it to ward away the dead only to invite them with open arms if used to much. Go to Comment
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