No starters to get us moving?
Can't just lead us to water, gotta show us how to drink.
Needs some more meat on the bones, but gave me the kick to post a new submission. Come on people, surely you can find some minor magic to add.
Its a great idea for a scroll! I am always fascinated by any non-weapon item, with a more-than-meets-the-eye back story. Will add.
Is this supposed to be a scroll or a wiki? My understanding is anyone should be able to edit the body of the sub, and so be able to put in the new items to appear as one big sub?
Otherwise I miss the point of doing it in this style.
The Needles of Zhi and Wu (Acupuncture Needle)
Description:
A set of acupuncture needles ordinary in every way except that they are of a green colour as if made of jade, rumoured to be so potent in healing properties that even revival of the dead are achievable.
The Origin:
These needles are the tools of trade of Bian Que, the miracle doctor of the Era of Spring and Fall. It was rumoured that Bian Que is in fact the offspring of the Goddess of Mercy and is a divine entity himself. According to such sources, these needles have developed direct healing qualities themselves as a result of prolonged contact with Bian Que with his godly presence pervading this set of tools.
Current whereabouts:
Unknown- Immediately following the end of the Era of Spring and Fall comes the Period of the Warring States, a time of turmoil accompanied by many refugees of wars fleeing the Dragon Empire for more peaceful outlying regions. It was speculated that Bian Que and his family might have been among such refugees.
Note: This is historical fiction since it is genuinely recorded in Chinese history that there was a miracle working doctor known as Bian Que active during what is known as the Spring and Autumn and the Warring States Period.
A fairly standard ghost story; as is, it doesn't really speak to me. Still, you did a lot with your 250-word limit, and I suppose that I can't really expect loads of detail with those kinds of strictures. Perhaps if you ran it with the right accompanying soundtrack, this piece would really have the chance to shine.
May I humbly suggest:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YGRO05WcNDk
or possibly
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZJt-oWDD7U
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Plains)