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Lorning
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-09-30 01:59 PM
Lorning, Sir Lorning.

I like the combining of genres and settings to produce something new. They had spies in the Renaissance times, each prince/ household against the others. I could see a campaign of spy vs spy set in Italy in the late 1300s. Go to Comment
MoonHunter's comment on 2004-11-19 09:44 AM
He has a number of campaign uses. He can be a pawn, a puppet, a mcguffin, an employer, a compatriot, or just some fool waundering around in the background of the campaign.

He is here to show how a common bland character can be made interesting by good execution.

Alas, he is the most common of the character ideas I have had recently. He is my low score. Go to Comment
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-03-11 02:40 PM
For the people who asked. This character is the Benchmark for a THREE FLAME score. It has a good format, good English execution, and a passable idea behind it. Not every character has to be flashy, powerful, or even that intricate. Every character does not need to be exotic or unique. There is a lot to be said for a solid, basic, character. Go to Comment
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-11-19 02:30 AM
While he can provide some comic relief, and be an 'employer' of sorts for PCs, this character leaves to be desired for... he's not all too different from the classic "unprepared nobleman/woman in need" Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-13 11:23 AM
I agree. A good starting point and bit player.
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Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-09-07 12:43 PM
Really great character 5/5. I'm translating him to d20 as we speak!
Thevail Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-01 08:57 AM
Except for Leningrad, what mistakes? Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-09-09 10:50 PM
Updated: Updated some capitalization I seemed to have missed. Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2004-11-18 08:24 PM
Alas, Arcadia...

4/5 Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2004-11-19 02:27 AM
An interesting character, moreso for being a great contrast to the classic "fool-around, good-for-nothing" Pooka...
His personality is realistic (for a fae:) and there are many ways to include him in an adventure.
Good post. Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
EchoMirage's comment on 2009-04-16 04:44 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Pariah's comment on 2007-01-21 06:43 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2006-09-01 12:36 AM
I really enjoyed this. Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Drackler's comment on 2006-08-31 09:49 PM
I noticed a few spelling mistakes, but, overall really good


5/5 Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Drackler's comment on 2006-09-01 01:58 PM
Sorry, bad mistake. Go to Comment
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 07:30 PM
Fang
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
Ramhir's comment on 2010-09-21 09:31 AM
I *Love* it!. Extremely well detailed and the personality overflows the writing. I will certainly add him to my fantasy world, and perhaps eventually to the Urban fantasy that we are talking of making. Go to Comment
It was just a book
Plots  (Crisis)   (Multi-Storyline)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2004-12-11 12:41 PM
I like the idea! Go to Comment
It was just a book
Plots  (Crisis)   (Multi-Storyline)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-02-25 03:28 PM
Although a bit confusing at first, this sounds really good.
I give it a 4/5.

Dragoon God Go to Comment
It was just a book
Plots  (Crisis)   (Multi-Storyline)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-10-25 09:31 PM
Yep. But still, I'd say it's a solid...

4/5. Go to Comment
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