Here is a worksheet that is fairly complete. From this stage I would generate a more complete write up, including sheets for important regions and such. This would does need a bit more chrome and some interlord conflict to be truely ready, but it is about 70% complete for what it is.
Oh and if I was running this world, it would probably be in Hero System so I could custom all the Noble Powers.
(XX) Sift and sort
(xx) Top down process (__)(__)(__)
(XX) Bottom up (__)(__)(__)
Themes and Images:
The world is built upon the seven elements, each represented by a gem/power stone. (An 8th element exists, as alien force invaded the world). Each stone type glows slightly. It has a base color, with overtones of the second color. Magery is built upon the stone elements, requiring foci. Noble houses are bound to one of the elemental powers, having innate magical abilities.
1) SunStone: Yellow and White swirling mass
2) GreenStone, sometimes called LifeStones. Anchor that of the Sphere itself.
3) MoonStone: White and White
4) RockStone: Brown and Red
5) LightningStone: Yellow and Blue
6) WaterStone: Blue and Green
7) Cloud Stone Blue and White
8) NightStone Black with Blue. An alien stone. Alien invaders from another realm came with this power. Aka DarkStone and BlackStone. Shadi or Shadowstones as well. Anyone who has one can wield a NightStone's power. No binding rite required. More powers can be generated if binding is done.
The world has three continents. The first two are north south axis Asia sized, the last is Australia sized. The last one is the "new world"
We have a variety of terrains in each of the lands.
Fairly Earth typical.
Dragar: Larger than horse sized Dragon creatures. Quadropeds that can run on two legs. Only Cloudtype can fly. Each type of Dragar is alligned to an element. Can be used as warmounts.
There are some other species that are stone alligned. Gembirds (large Falcon) and GemCats (tiger sized) are also elementally alligned.
There might be some other NightStone spawn still in the hinterlands. NightStone monsters were used as shock troops by the Invaders. Some survived their master's retreats.
Other than stones, pretty standard.
Only exception: Orchium, a magical metal. In rawer form it can disrupt magic. In an alloy similiar to steel Oristell, it enhances magical effects.
Races and Peoples:
Each Noble House has its own distinctive coloring and look because of its association with a given stone. Each house will give notable attribute bonuses (and negative mods) as well.
Each region (which each lord-dom will have two or three) will have its own ethnicity. Each region is based upon old kingdom states. Most of these are cosmetic, but some will provide skills emphasis, and a rare one or two will have attribute mods. Yes this is 21 country areas to fill out
One must remember that the Champions originally came from one of these 21 areas.
Yes these 21 areas will be thumbnail sketched. If I was doing this world completely, each would get it own worksheet.
Wizards, those of the magical ability, are a seperate sub-type of human. You are born a wizard, or you are not. They are bald, odd eyed folk, with a thin build. They tend to live in their own quarters. Magic ability is double recessive, so unless both parents are wizards, you won't have magic.
Magical Fedualism. There used to be dozens of kingdoms. After invasion by DarkForces, the set of champions selected by the Grand Wizard became the first StoneLords. They rule by a combination of tradition and mystical might. They are ruled by the GreenStone house. Note: The Dark Forces can only access the world (allegedly) when there is not seven StoneLords.
The world has the late Medievalish set of social classes of Growers, Makers, Wizard, Warrior, and Noble.
Each of the 21 regions has its own little flavor.
There are six months in a year (each Month is two terrestrial months). The year has four seasons. The world has approximately 336 days.
The Moon face changes and revolves in an eight week period. It takes four weeks to move between new to full.
GreenLord's Council- StoneLords (and occasionally their heir or represenitives) sit and debate what needs to be done. Then the GreenLord does it.
Guild Council- every area, region, and lord-dom has one. They run business and business concerns for everyone. They have to defer to GreenLord's council for anything that effects the world.
Wizard's council- The real power behind the world. They are the councillors of every Guild and Noble. They are managing the flow of the world to keep it prepared for the next Shadi invasion. (Of course the public face is that they will never come again, but the wizards know that is a total fabrication).
Laws and Morals:
Moral law: Never wear black. Only those truely EVIL would wear that color.
Laws are fairly standard, punishments vary: Crimes against lower class- fines and embarassing slaps on wrists, crimes against same class- notable fines and minor servitudes, crimes against higher classes- major servitudes and maybe death. Note: Crimes against wizards hold death penalties and worse. Nobody messes with them because they are generally respected and revered by everyone. If you do, well it had better of been worth it because you will wish you had not.
Usual family situation is one or more grand parent, husband and wife, their children. If the family is noble, there might be brothers and sisters of the husband and wife along.
The world has the late Medievalish set of social classes of Farmer, Crafter/Merchant, Wizard, Warrior, and Noble.
You are born into your class. You can only change classes under extraordinary circumstances. After completing training or achieving adulthood, the wizards brand you with your class guild affiliation.
Growers: We Make Food. Tied to your given parcel of land, trading food for protection or craft goods. Farmers also include herders and gatherers. Woodsmen associated with a given green, are generally of the Growers.
Makers: We Make Things.
You are tied to the guild of your birth. You might slide to another guild, but it is unlikely. Some of these folks work villages, but most are in towns. A few are noble retainers, but they are few and far between. After all, hanging around nobles is a good way to get attacked.
Wizards: We Do Wisdom. General magic users. They function as priests, advisors, councilors, and occasionally magic users. While most are associated with nobles, there should be one in each town/ city.
Warriors: We Enforce Order.
These are non powered nobles. They come in two flavors, Sheriffs and Knights. Sheriffs are retainers to Nobles, running a given plot, keeping order, protecting growers, crafters, and towns.
Some are retainers to Sheriffs. These Knights act as the strong arms of the given Sheriff.
Nobles whos bloodline has shifted from the Prime become Warriors by default.
Nobles: We Make Order.
These are the bloodlines descended from the original champions, first StoneLords. StoneLords are SuperHero competitive. Their family and first blood relations have powers, but about half. Two blood steps away have a touch of power. Three or more are nothing but honored warriors. (Bloodline is set by the gender of the StoneLord).
The symbol of their power is their StonePowers, super powers they receive from their association with a Stone's force. The closer your blood tie is to the StoneLord, the more notable your powers. It is easy to spot nobles here.
Stones (as apposed to StoneLords) are normally assigned to supervise the Sherriffs of a given region. In addition some Nobles become Sherriffs.
Note: If someone else was given the ritual of marking/ accension, they would become the StoneLord and their clan would be given the power. While people think the bloodline is important, it is not.
Note that the StoneLords owe fealty and support to the GreenStoneLord. He coordinates their efforts.
Knights keep local order
Sherrifs control areas
Stones control regions
StoneLords control Lord-doms
GreenStoneLord controls the stonelords.
We have a feudal economy. Silver coins find their way to peasants as their basic "rent" in food is minimal per GreenStone Law.
Religion, not a big thing here. One Universal Force/ Diety, wise and unknowable. A vague father figure. The world is nothing more than the interplay of the seven cosmic forces. Wisdom comes from understanding the interplay of the cosmic forces. We have a zen/taoist religion view.
Wizards (who are effectively priests) use their understanding of the flows to do magic, but more importantly guide people to be in harmony with the cosmic forces. Wizardborn (half wizards) and humans who act as acolytes to support wizards.
Wizards are divorsed from worldly affairs. That is part of their problem. They give good theoretical advice, but very bad specific advice. They also view the world with "rose colored glasses." (note, future dramatic element).
Wizards perform Marking ceremonies, where people are magically tatooed with class and or guild symbols. That way you know what everyone is supposed to be.
Technology and Common Power:
Military Weapons and Tactics
Fairly standard fantasy fare. Plate and Chain at best.
Orch steel swords are used by Stone and elite warrior (usually of noble clan) units. This enhances their power.
GreenLord has a unit that is equipped with Orchium shields and swords. They are designed to stop rogue wizards (very rare) and nobles.
Pre-industrial production. The population is not large enough and the economy under developed to have an industrial revolution. Things are created in shops with a couple of guildsmen working together.
This is where the world gets tough. It only has non-magical healing. The wizards are good at this non-magical healing as educated folks. Green Cloaks are the healers here, all taught at a central accademy (at the GreenLord's lands). They are actually better healers and medical personal than one would expect given the world.
Crop Rotation and some land management skills. The world is not quite at full occupancy given its food production.
Wizards have a magical way of communicating (telepathy). Other than that, it is couriers.
Math and Science:
Solid Greek Levels of science. Seems advanced, but really isn't.
They like big flashy structures. Welcome to a world with lots of flying buttresses.
Books. Literacy is standard in the upper classes and very common in the Makers class. Growers tend to be illiterate, but some do know.
Geography and survay work is actually very competent. The GreenLord, working with another lord to be named later, wanted a complete survay of the world.
Solstice, Equinox, and the birthday of each StoneLord in their own lands. NewYears is on the Spring Solstice.
They don't really have a religion to spawn more holidays.
Horses. They have the wheel.
Wizards can teleport themselves and under dire circumstances others great distances (wityh vague targeting).
Wizards run the gate system.This is about as common and as frequent as transatlantic flights in the late 20s. That is to say, not at all, and very expensive.
Songs very common. A Bardic class may be appropriate
I need to work out some classic works. Many sing the praises of warriors who defeated the Shadi.
There is occasionally an organized crime guild, but that is rare and more a thing of myth. They are normally small crime families.
There are still those alligned with the Shadi, those of the DarkStones. They are secret cultists, trading power and position (now and in the future) for assisting the Shadi
The StoneLords will have minor "super powers" based upon their Stone Allignment. Those of NobleBlood will also have weaker versions of these powers, the farther away they are from the Lord by blood. The family chooses the next StoneLord, and in a wizardly ceremony
Wizard can perform minor powers of all stone allignments, in addition they can do meta-magic or things that effect power. They have mental powers (and magic that simulates it). They can sense the future, look at the present, and snoop on the past. They work Orchium and Oristell.
Magic StoneSwords enhance the cosmic magics of the Nobles. If you have a touch of blood, the sword can help you.
NightStone power is somewhat limited due to a binding done by the original StoneLords. It is still there and can be quite effective, but it is nothing compared to its full power. The full power can only be accessed by breaking the binding. That can only be done in a time of transition, between the accension of new StoneLords after the death of another. (SO you can imagine their Shadi agents are working to forment issues to causes power struggles and even civil wars.)
The Shadi are still around in very limited numbers. Those that are here are trapped here. (any travel to the world is one way). They are odd people with green grey skin and huge eyes.
Their monsterous shocktroops were mostly killed off in the way, but a few were left behind when the Shadi pulled out. This monsters still occasionally come out from the hinterlands (or lost eggs) and wreck havok.
Elementals are small handsized critters that reflect the stone cosmic forces. Pretty but have little practical application.
Big War. Other races killed. BlackStone badies invade.
Wizards bring together champions. They allign with the powers of Rythor's stones, and defead the BlackStone badies.
Establishment of the StoneLord's rules.
All the elements have allied powers and antagonistic powers which they have bonuses and mods against. GreenStone has a slight advantage against everything except DarkStone. Go to Comment
The key here is the clear, concise and thorough presentation of the material in the posts. I have used many of these approaches and for those I have not, I soon will. Thanks for taking the time to provide a great compilation of approaches. Go to Comment
This is a nice article MoonHunter. Many experiences gathered and put to text.
If there is one thing I feel missing in the article, it is about the inclusion of player activity in the world building process. You did touch the subject twice (character weave and no gm is an island) (yes, this article could easily be 60 pages long. )
This may be a basic truth but as such it may deserve mention in your article; always let the pc's actions (no matter how small) have some effect on the setting.
Include the PC's. Don't let death and retirement be the end of things. Much later the pc's could read about the loved wizard in a dusty fairy tale book, visit the restaurant of the retired half-orc chef or meet the grand children of that master thief played such a long time ago.
Then with the twists and turns of time details about their pc's could be distorted, roles reversed and facts made false. This could annoy the pc's as the names of their pc's with time get a rediculous pronounciation, etc...
If their characters were epic the entire setting would probably be affected. Nations and provinces, royal lines, etc... The players could leave their marks on every aspect of the setting. Go to Comment
Do you use this worksheet yourself? And if so, do you have any
examples of a filled-out worksheet you could spare? I think it
would make an excellent companion to the article (which I loved,
by the way -- I've started applying your ideas to my campaign
Thanks for the huge amount of effort that went into this
article! Go to Comment
This is probably the most useful world building thing I have ever seen. It is a bit long, but it is one of the most informative role-playing articles I have ever read. I'm using this for my campaign world, Definitely! Great post :-) Go to Comment
this would be much better, even useful if it was written for the task. This is essentially technical writing and thus should use concise prose to communicate points. The first two full paragraphs in the intro could have been two sentences. Go to Comment
I wanted to begin presenting a world, and browsed for articles to help present. I found this and I'm awed. This is an amazingly comprehensive tool which will help shape my works from this point forward. I'm bookmarking it and will be coming back to it often. Go to Comment
A nice City Image, I have a clear feeling and a mental image of the city. There is clearly a need for the soldiers to have an outlet for their military life, however. Don't tell me there are not a few ummm... caffeterias :) for the soldier tired of the drill, or place with a few nice girls that make the life nicer. They may be half-hidden, but they ought to be there; soldiers are known to revolt not only if they lack food.
Funny detail about the secret experiments to make a Hardtack spear, how about making it really hard, but soften upon becoming wet? They would be hardly a weapon of first choice (little beats metal/solid wood there), but a part of the food could be transported that way, to serve as a secondary weapon if needed, and to protect the food transport as well. Aside: while it would surely miss the sharp edge, entering a body and crumbling can be dangerous, too. Go to Comment
Actually, Bakalite (a plastic like substance, first invented by Leonardo DaVinci, but rediscovered/ redeveloped in the 1860s) is somewhat edible (too hard to chew.. but in small enough pieces digestable). While not as durrable as metal, it is tough enough. Perhaps as spear shafts and such.
Note: NASA developed knobs and buttons of a similar substance for the Apollo and LEM ships. However, they needed water to soften, which would of been in shorter supply than food on a Space Mission, before being eaten. Thus they were scrapped after Apollo 3 for the cheaper plastic units. Since this not be a problem for the troopers, maybe this wheat plastic would be possible. It did not take advance chemistry to make, just heat, pressure, and a couple of reactents. Go to Comment
you haven't addressed the cultural and social justifications for such sustained and organzines military activity. That would be another submission actually. For historical examples, in Japan, China, or even Inca, such a city could exist. In a more structured empire, such places would be possible. Again the location needs to be adapted to your world if appropriate.
Was Wheatsword the idea of a General or did it grow up economically first? The Military council.
How do they deal with all the rats? Actually hardtack is avoided by Rats, which could tell you a great deal about Hardtack. There will always be some loss to pests, no matter what the enforcement used. I am sure the military comes up with "the ultimate solution" every few years, from trained cats to magically trapped cheese to sterile rats, or just setting the troops out with slings, and so on.
What is the major water source for the area Well water and rain would be assumed since no rivers were mentioned.
and what of the women? Can you have a military camp without camp followers? Yes you can. It has been done in many times and places, with some just being done by discipline, others by encouraging male companionshisp.
I would assume there are a few around in the city, and in the local farms. Their existance would be up to your preferences. I have them as part of an extreme religious sect, so they would not be as ...um.. active as other women.
Who are the soldiers; are they young nobles, citizen soldiers, conscripts or mercenaries? Self answering question- Militia/ legion. Nobles would imply a feudal system that would not create such a place and mercenaries would be too expensive for a standing force. And Militia was said at the end of the post.
How does life at Wheatsword compare to the daily life of soldiers when they are some where else? Here would seem more boring. It is hard, but light duty here. Go to Comment