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Elves and their Ways
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2009-11-28 12:36 AM
OK because this is a Moonhunter sub I always expect the best. The size of this disturbs me as the norm for Moon is exceptionally detailed. I like the idea first and foremost as an NPC race. I can not see this as a viable player based race. Their limited knowledge is an interesting angle, I like the stagnant evolution they seem to be stuck in, however, not knowing how to trade... or not learning how to trade as it is a skill seems rather limiting and seemingly a death sentence in the long run. Sure they can be self sufficient and continue to produce life and their society, but eventually the outside world will find them. And just like the seemingly primitive tribes of our history, they will perish under the technologically advanced and free thinking societies.

I like the concept... but I feel it may need a little work. Go to Comment
Elves and their Ways
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Murometz's comment on 2009-12-02 12:31 PM
Very stimulating concept, the inability to learn. I look forward to more on this topic. Go to Comment
Elves and their Ways
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valadaar's comment on 2009-12-06 07:23 PM
A neat take on elves, but I would think this would be an irreconcilable weakness compared to any race that could learn. Even orcs would outdo them given time.

I don't think I'd make my elves this way, but this concept is still really cool. Perhaps if I used elves of Tolkinesque power. Go to Comment
Elves and their Ways
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colntrax's comment on 2009-11-25 10:52 PM
Not to criticize - just happened to me...

...If they do not learn, how did they "learnt" of their new fear of being surpassed?
Anyway, excelent submission, as always. ;) Go to Comment
Elves and their Ways
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gulkien's comment on 2011-02-01 09:25 PM


i agree cheka totally

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Shambala
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-07-29 06:16 PM
Lyrics: 3 Dog Night

Wash away my troubles, wash away my pain
With the rain in Shambala
Wash away my sorrow, wash away my shame
With the rain in Shambala

(chorus)
Ah, ooh, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah

Everyone is helpful, everyone is kind
On the road to Shambala
Everyone is lucky, everyone is so kind
On the road to Shambala

(repeat chorus)

How does your light shine, in the halls of Shambala (2xs)

I can tell my brother by the flowers in his eyes
On the road to Shambala
I can tell my sister by the flower in her ear
On the road to Shambala

(repeat chorus)

How does your light shine, in the halls of Shambala (2xs)

(repeat chorus reprise)

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Shambala
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MoonHunter's comment on 2009-07-30 11:00 AM
There is only two links in text, and songs of fantasy! out of text What was confusing with those? Go to Comment
Shambala
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MoonHunter's comment on 2009-08-06 01:21 AM
See the link works for me http://strolen.com/viewing/Holde

In short, it is a bubble of reality where slightly different rules apply. Go to Comment
Shambala
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2009-07-29 10:10 PM
Hm. It's solidly done, with plenty of hooks. It feels awfully generic, but there are enough places to rebrand it to your own. Generic is not always bad.

Much of your linkage around this subject does not work, I had to break out the search engine to understand what I was reading - it made it more difficult to comprehend.
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Shambala
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2009-07-30 12:59 PM
The holde link Doesn't work, and searching for it all I found was a sanctuary for demons. It's a rare and special place, okay, but what the meaning of that secret specialness is supposed to be evades me. Go to Comment
Shambala
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-08-01 09:06 AM
I like, the vibe is there, the challenges on the road are solid. I like the Shambala is a real place, and it is both what you expect (a holy place) but it is also somewhat realistic (rock pile, farms, etc). Kudos. Go to Comment
Shambala
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Murometz's comment on 2009-07-29 06:34 PM
Shambala inspired a writer to invent Shangri-La, so why not inspire a sub. Good work Moon, I like what you've done with the ancient legend. It certainly works as dangling worm for PCs. Go to Comment
Shambala
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valadaar's comment on 2009-07-30 11:06 AM
Not bad at all Moon. Go to Comment
Shambala
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hylandpad's comment on 2011-09-21 05:45 PM


I think you just took a wonderful piece of Buddhism, and made it unique and fantastic, while still retaining all the emotional and philosophical pieces that come together to make the legend of Shambala so important. I like it.


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Star
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-15 01:04 PM
gargolyes again

Are you going to stick with the name star? Go to Comment
Citizen Prime
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Cherry's comment on 2016-06-16 12:47 AM
Nice and short to the point.

While it apparently is a stub, but the links has to be copied into the new tab. Go to Comment
Roddenberry Writes I
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-12-24 02:29 PM
In brief: Involve characters with drama, rather than arbitrary situations. Secondly consider that all actions have consequences.

I have a few complaints. Mainly, the article, informative as it is, is dry and the paragraph formatting is choppy and inconsistant. The Roddenberry quote is interesting, the italicised additions are not really necessary. The rest of the submission is IMHO rather basic information. I could be wrong on that account though. Go to Comment
Roddenberry Writes I
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Chaosmark's comment on 2009-01-18 05:27 PM
Honestly, I agree with Scras' comment, but not his vote. In the past, you've talked about PCs having goals and the GM including them in the game where appropriate, but this is the first time I think you've really gone in-depth on that. I rather enjoyed this one, even though it seemed a smidge dry. Basic isn't always a bad thing: we all need to go back to the basics sometimes, simply because we didn't pick it up the first time through, we're just now learning it, or because with more experience we can understand and apply it better. Go to Comment
Roddenberry Writes I
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axlerowes's comment on 2010-10-14 03:18 PM


You were not wrong Scrasamax


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Roddenberry Writes I
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 11:44 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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