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Charles Hurley
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-30 11:48 AM
Thank you for writing this, I can so see him as a *real* carecter. The equivilent in your world of a Communist. Go to Comment
Charles Hurley
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-03-01 11:24 AM
I think this entry will most likely win the Quest. Go to Comment
Charles Hurley
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2009-03-03 08:03 AM
My opinions of this is somewhere in between Echo and Scras. I would like have some more landmarks to follow. My major brownie point for this one is that it's quite usable. Go to Comment
Charles Hurley
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
klauston's comment on 2009-01-30 10:41 PM
A very nice history for this character. It is well written with lots of details about his youth and the trials of growing up. The single minded fanatacism to bring about equality among everyone is like Cheka Man says, a true communist. 5/5 Go to Comment
The Ragori
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-27 10:41 PM
I've fixed that part about the female shamans. Is there anything else that needs to be sorted out? Thanks. Go to Comment
The Ragori
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
EchoMirage's comment on 2009-01-26 04:11 AM
They could stand some editing - there are some contradictions in the writeup, such as the role of the female being unclear; as it is written it means all women would be shamen - which would make little sense.
I do like their communication, though.

It needs to be smoothed out still, spelling and content. Go to Comment
The Ragori
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-22 12:07 PM
They remind me a bit of the Spartans. Go to Comment
The Ragori
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2009-01-23 09:19 AM
I was trying to figure out as i was reading whether these were crocodilian lizard-men, or something else entirely, but then finally settled on them being eel-men, yes? Sugada being the clincher.

I like these folk, its a ready-made, detail-oriented swamp race, and i love anything tha lives in a swamp. My favorite terrain for adventure! Physiology (nice touch on the tentacles and egg-sex variances) and 'dwellings' (banyan tree, panels to Sugada, etc...) were hi-lites for me.

Good race! Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-12 10:13 AM
That's true, now that you mention it. I guess that as long as he has the good sense to stay away from the transcendants, he would have a very fulfilling career as the personal chef of some noble who would allow him to butcher and cook pretty much anything he wanted. And on the subject of Rephatia, have I ever mentioned that it's easily the most disturbing fictional culture that I've ever had the pleasure of reading about? Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-08 11:58 PM
You raised a valid point Muro and I amended that part. Only the bones are now given to the dogs. Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-11 10:14 AM
Val, I imagine that Jimmy would be thrilled to find himself in the country of the Rephatians where there would be so many different varities of humanoids for him to cook and feast on. However, if he allowed temptation to get the better of him and tried to murder and eat a member of the soldier or elite caste, I have no doubt that he would meet with a swift and savage end. Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-08 10:38 AM
I'd rather not eat his meals, tasty though they are. 5/5 Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-08 09:29 AM
Bizarre yet believable. As a wannabe gourmet, i can appreciate Jimmy's tastes and curiousities. Remember, taboos aside, human flesh tastes remarkably like pork. Heck, even cat testicle stew is not all that unbelievable. Testicles of bulls, sheep, etc are considered delicacies in many countries. Jimmy is kind of a Sweeney Todd of the kitchens, without the revenge angle. I kind of like the fact that Jimmy seems aware and yet ignorant of his own brand of evil.

I'm a big fan of the MEAT LOVING KNIFE (include a link!!) Nice way to use it with an NPC.

Also, fix up this sentence.....Born with highly sensitive taste bus, he could perceive the differences that existed bet wend different types of meat

Oh, and why would he get rid of offal? A man like Jimmy Stout can certainly appreciate some sweet meats, livers, kidneys, hearts... Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-01-12 10:41 AM
Wow. From you I take that as high praise :P Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-01-10 06:45 PM
I think he needs to take a trip to Rephatia, he'd fit in well with my own group of cannibals.

Nicely done Maggot! Its a good length and he's a good NPC. Go to Comment
Jimmy Stout
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-01-11 10:19 AM
If he was a good enough cook, a noble would be happy to have him on staff... He wouldn't need to murder them. Even the soldiers are fodder for the elite or the transcendants.

:P Go to Comment
Yogran
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Pieh's comment on 2008-12-26 09:49 PM
Good one. Plenty of usable material and nice flavor. Speaking of flavor... What do they taste like? Go to Comment
Yogran
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-26 10:41 PM
They would remind one strongly of old, rotting cheese in terms of flavour. The flesh is both vile tasting and extremely tough, making it a less than suitable culinary ingredient. Go to Comment
Yogran
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-03 04:41 AM
You're essentially right in saying that they're just a variant on pirahnas, but I thought I'd just create a fish that is both highly prized as a pet as well as being totally dangerous to humans. Ya know, just to create some excitment for NPCs or PCs looking for fairly popular but challenging pets. Go to Comment
Yogran
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-12-26 02:05 PM
Interesting, perhaps the prettiest pirhana I've read about. Go to Comment
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