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Lucah the Handsome
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-03-22 08:21 AM
Doubts Maggot, how could you have doubts - this is brilliant

A demon that gives as much as it takes - very original

As for Lacah - he has depth - he has the complexity needed to make him "real"

And the Powi - I can see exactly why they would react in that way - it makes sense

This definitely gets the "I wish I' thought of that" accolade, and is thus worthy of 5/5 Go to Comment
Lucah the Handsome
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Murometz's comment on 2013-11-01 10:07 AM
He reminds me immediately of Xerxes from 300 fame! Nice descriptors!

Also this line is disturbing to visualize..."his perfect chest bare except for the little gold phalluses that dangle over it," :P Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-14 01:40 AM
Okey then. Like the backstory, like the power, and the thought of the humiliation such emotions might give. Like the fact that the demons can still choose to be cruel and evil. What don't I like about this item?
not too much. :)

One question I have though - how long will they think like a human? I mean, a simple 3-tap and BAM! They have emotions for eternity seems a bit too powerful to me. Perhaps the feelings wear off after a few days? weeks? months? years?

One thing I will bring up - mainly because others will if I don't - is that you should run your posts through a spellchecker before you submit it. The fact that you can spell Precarious and Lecherous, yet mispell plague and impossible suggests your posting was a bit rushed.

Anywho - nicely done all-round. I'm tossed between a 4 and a 5, but in the end, I give it
4/5. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2005-03-14 03:16 AM
Aah, nice. It means there is limitations, but a whole new character can be made from a repentant demon, since they will remain emotive forever. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
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Maggot's comment on 2005-03-14 02:15 AM
Lol,yes,this was a bit rushed,Shadow. I started this an hour before lunch and had to wrap it up a little sooner than I'd have like,thanks to hunger pangs. I wish I had spell check,but I don't. Hopefully,I'll get it soon.

And thanks for raising that point about it being a little absurd,regarding the affected demons having human emotions forever. I modified it slightly on that score and hope you like it better now. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
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Maggot's comment on 2005-03-14 10:25 PM
A character,eh? Yes,I would enjoy creating one. And yes,Echo,I'd be delighted to chat with you about this. I've been obssesed with demons and hlf-demons ever since I discovered the peasure of tuning in to the now defunct Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-03-14 11:50 AM
This has sparked a few ideas about half-demons nd demons in general, moreso that my current campaign features quite many of both...
Perhaps we might chat about it... a very good item.. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-03-14 08:02 AM
5/5 Very good. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-06 05:12 PM
I get to vote again. Yay. 5/5 Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-02-22 07:01 AM


I like this. A good, useful idea executed well. I misread the name a couple of times though ;)



4/5


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The Staff of Mozrak
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Phaidros's comment on 2012-03-05 06:01 PM
A very good backstory, but it still feels like it is missing someting. Maybe the activation would be someting more difficult? Or only work for a half-demon that truly loves normal people?

As a twist, the staf might have the reverse effect on celestials: they might feel the temptations and egoism they normally would not have. Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-03-14 08:08 AM
Largely I agree with Shadow

Initially didn't understand Shadow's comment about the duration of the effect - but I see you've edited the post so guess you've fixed whatever he was commenting on

As Shadow says, there is potential for a character here - there may also be potential for a whole setting, so go write - I'd like to see them both

In of itself a 4 but I'm upgrading o a 5 for the potential

5/5 Go to Comment
The Staff of Mozrak
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Kassy's comment on 2012-04-23 08:36 AM


An interesting, usable item.



I thought the backstory was very good too ;-)


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The Staff of Mozrak
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-23 06:50 PM


There is just something cool about a demon facing an emotional crisis.



I like the ingeniously nonviolent nature of the weapon. Demons must quake in terror at the mere mention of it.


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Soup of Fertility
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-02-05 10:50 AM
I might note that it depends upon the female whether twins are born or not - it is the number of ova to be fertilized that determines the number of kids - if, by chance, two manage to mature at the same time, the potential for twins is given, etc.
The male must just shed enough spermatozoa to fertilize them, and this could indeed be the effect of the soup: potence, combined with desire, and a higher sperm count.

There should be a female counterpart for this, resulting in increased female fertility, to justify that 'twins' part... now, perhaps there should be several potions for the female to ward of diseases of the unborn, and ensure healthy development... I sense a thread coming up... Go to Comment
Soup of Fertility
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Roack's comment on 2005-07-28 06:36 AM
I like the gerbils. My brother used to have some of his own, one male, one female, kept in seperate cages. Somehow they managed to have kids anyway... Go to Comment
The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-02-02 09:02 AM
Awesomely powerful, almost certainly too powerful - total control of such a powerful creature could make a man invincible (and yes, I have read the info on the Zaben in the Animals thread)

However, the cost of using it does at least temper it slightly since no sane man would dare use it too often - of course the insane pirate lord (bit of cliche I know) wouldn't hesitate to unleash hordes of ravenous shark-goblin hybrids on his enemies

Could be usable as the power behind some powerful NPC villain - but watch out when the PCs get hold of it (which they almost certainly will) - it's a well know fact that PCs are the most insanely dangerous creatures in ANY universe

My instinct is to give it a 3 (way too powerful) but the price it extracts upgrades it to a 4

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The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2007-03-24 09:36 AM
It is a bit powerful, but I don't mind such things when power comes at a price. Here you've got a guy who creates a race of killing machines and his only way to control them was to trust a djinn. See how well that turned out.

I also like the idea that a simple musical instrument can control an unstoppable army with a few toots. Like if the Pied Piper had dire rats. Nice work. Go to Comment
The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-19 06:52 PM
Nicely done. A good key item for evil baddies to use. Go to Comment
Vantu of the Hanal
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2004-12-27 09:23 PM
Okay! I like him a lot better now. Go to Comment
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