Excellent. Good work, Maggot.
Like AG said- problems with grammar, but it isn't a GIGANTIC point...

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Wow,now that is indeed fine praise. Thank you,Dragon God.

*weeps tears of joy as he gazes upon the creation that has won him such reknown* Go to Comment

I apologize for the sloppy typing and bad grammer. Indeed,I urgently need spell check. But I'm glad that didn't diminish my creation in any way to you guys. To be honest,I actually had doubts about this character at first. Go to Comment

A minor nuisance in an otherwise delightful post.

IA IA GAHOL! Go to Comment

spellchecker needed. Add space after commas for readability. Go to Comment

I'd say more a minor nuisance. Yeah, thats it! Minor nuisance indeed. Go to Comment

Doubts Maggot, how could you have doubts - this is brilliant

A demon that gives as much as it takes - very original

As for Lacah - he has depth - he has the complexity needed to make him "real"

And the Powi - I can see exactly why they would react in that way - it makes sense

This definitely gets the "I wish I' thought of that" accolade, and is thus worthy of 5/5 Go to Comment

Okey then. Like the backstory, like the power, and the thought of the humiliation such emotions might give. Like the fact that the demons can still choose to be cruel and evil. What don't I like about this item?
not too much. :)

One question I have though - how long will they think like a human? I mean, a simple 3-tap and BAM! They have emotions for eternity seems a bit too powerful to me. Perhaps the feelings wear off after a few days? weeks? months? years?

One thing I will bring up - mainly because others will if I don't - is that you should run your posts through a spellchecker before you submit it. The fact that you can spell Precarious and Lecherous, yet mispell plague and impossible suggests your posting was a bit rushed.

Anywho - nicely done all-round. I'm tossed between a 4 and a 5, but in the end, I give it
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Aah, nice. It means there is limitations, but a whole new character can be made from a repentant demon, since they will remain emotive forever. Go to Comment

Lol,yes,this was a bit rushed,Shadow. I started this an hour before lunch and had to wrap it up a little sooner than I'd have like,thanks to hunger pangs. I wish I had spell check,but I don't. Hopefully,I'll get it soon.

And thanks for raising that point about it being a little absurd,regarding the affected demons having human emotions forever. I modified it slightly on that score and hope you like it better now. Go to Comment

A character,eh? Yes,I would enjoy creating one. And yes,Echo,I'd be delighted to chat with you about this. I've been obssesed with demons and hlf-demons ever since I discovered the peasure of tuning in to the now defunct Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Go to Comment

This has sparked a few ideas about half-demons nd demons in general, moreso that my current campaign features quite many of both...
Perhaps we might chat about it... a very good item.. Go to Comment

5/5 Very good. Go to Comment

I get to vote again. Yay. 5/5 Go to Comment

I like this. A good, useful idea executed well. I misread the name a couple of times though ;)

4/5

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A very good backstory, but it still feels like it is missing someting. Maybe the activation would be someting more difficult? Or only work for a half-demon that truly loves normal people?

As a twist, the staf might have the reverse effect on celestials: they might feel the temptations and egoism they normally would not have. Go to Comment

Largely I agree with Shadow

Initially didn't understand Shadow's comment about the duration of the effect - but I see you've edited the post so guess you've fixed whatever he was commenting on

As Shadow says, there is potential for a character here - there may also be potential for a whole setting, so go write - I'd like to see them both

In of itself a 4 but I'm upgrading o a 5 for the potential

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An interesting, usable item.

I thought the backstory was very good too ;-)

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There is just something cool about a demon facing an emotional crisis.

I like the ingeniously nonviolent nature of the weapon. Demons must quake in terror at the mere mention of it.

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I might note that it depends upon the female whether twins are born or not - it is the number of ova to be fertilized that determines the number of kids - if, by chance, two manage to mature at the same time, the potential for twins is given, etc.
The male must just shed enough spermatozoa to fertilize them, and this could indeed be the effect of the soup: potence, combined with desire, and a higher sperm count.

There should be a female counterpart for this, resulting in increased female fertility, to justify that 'twins' part... now, perhaps there should be several potions for the female to ward of diseases of the unborn, and ensure healthy development... I sense a thread coming up... Go to Comment