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Ahal Paste
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-05-03 08:33 AM
Seems a touch incomplete...
Perhaps you should add some of the uses of the Ahal paste- I imagine that house builders might find it of some use (workers have buckets of it, chewing and spitting out the paste as mortar). The use in battle is an interesting idea, but I don't see how it would stop an enemy warrior, unless the paste was in their eyes or nose, or possibly gumming up some hinge in their armor or something.

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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-03 08:31 AM
So if your mouth dries out slightly, you have killed yourself because your mouth is now filled with concrete?

I mean a face is nothing but skin, muscle, a little bone. The mouth is just that with a little of saliva. So it can't just react to skin... It needs to dry and lose the saliva enzymes.

It could not be used in blow pipes... if it dries fast enough to be this dangerous... the moment you took it out of your mouth, put it into the pipe... it would begin to "glom".

So it reacts with skin?, then how do they put it in blow pipes, tongs?

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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-03 08:52 AM
Damned! The reaction with skin was supposed to be triggered by a reaction with the sweat present. I guessed I left that part out.

Made some changes to ti. I hope you guys like it better now. Go to Comment
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-12-03 12:24 AM
I like the idea. It's odd tp me because it sounds like it should not be so powerful, but your examples make it seem so. Interesting substance. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-11-18 02:40 PM
I like the general idea of a spittable super-glue, though it is somewhat inconsistent in its trigger - if it reacts with skin, than it would not be that useful against armour.

Probably best if it simply hardened when it dried, and that it dries very quickly.

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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-04-28 09:43 AM
Hi Maggot, it's me Abirame.
Very intricate, creates a convincing atmosphere that goes beyond the immediate focus of the narrative and gives it depth..quite stunning. Go to Comment
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-13 06:46 PM
I like it. One has to wonder, of course, if curious sharks don't come investigate the sacrifices made. And does the Shark King actually give answers, actually speaking to the Shura, or do they interpret his behavior upon accepting a sacrifice? I guess what I'm asking, is it really the Shark Spirit, or a smarter than average shark who has discovered a plentiful source of food? And I can only imagine the impending havok when men discover this bloody monument. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-04-28 06:14 PM
Who is Abirame now? Go to Comment
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Maggot's comment on 2005-04-10 10:18 AM
Thanks,Scras. :) The use of sharks to dispose of the bodies of the deceased chieftains,was inspired by the Parsi practice of getting vultures to put their dead to rest. Go to Comment
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Maggot's comment on 2005-05-08 07:59 AM
That would be my big sister,lol. She's one of my biggest fans,lol. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2005-04-10 09:10 AM
beautiful in a savage way. Well done.

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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-31 09:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-04-13 08:47 PM
Thank you AG. :) Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-11-09 04:14 PM
This is one of the best settings and deserves an HoH nomination. Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-04-10 01:21 PM
I believe this is the best of your submissions to this date. Awesome Maggot! 5.5/5 ;)

On a side note I would add that Acqua has indeed matured into an interesting and bloody brilliant setting! The open development effort (ie. everyone creates for it) suits it perfectly! Congratulations Cheka Man, for having created a setting which should immediately appeal to both newcomers and jaded gamers alike! Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-03-16 06:33 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-02-20 06:08 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-02-15 08:05 PM
BUMP brutal and beautiful! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-22 02:33 PM
Agree with Muro on this one. Conjures up a very effective image. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2012-03-16 07:06 PM


Creative


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