Seems a touch incomplete...
Perhaps you should add some of the uses of the Ahal paste- I imagine that house builders might find it of some use (workers have buckets of it, chewing and spitting out the paste as mortar). The use in battle is an interesting idea, but I don't see how it would stop an enemy warrior, unless the paste was in their eyes or nose, or possibly gumming up some hinge in their armor or something.
I like it. One has to wonder, of course, if curious sharks don't come investigate the sacrifices made. And does the Shark King actually give answers, actually speaking to the Shura, or do they interpret his behavior upon accepting a sacrifice? I guess what I'm asking, is it really the Shark Spirit, or a smarter than average shark who has discovered a plentiful source of food? And I can only imagine the impending havok when men discover this bloody monument. Go to Comment
I believe this is the best of your submissions to this date. Awesome Maggot! 5.5/5 ;)
On a side note I would add that Acqua has indeed matured into an interesting and bloody brilliant setting! The open development effort (ie. everyone creates for it) suits it perfectly! Congratulations Cheka Man, for having created a setting which should immediately appeal to both newcomers and jaded gamers alike! Go to Comment