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manfred's comment on 2008-02-26 03:41 PM
The update has really helped it.

And of course there will be adventurers looking for it... in search of a god or for whatever reason. Too bad nobody can find it on purpose. :) Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-04-25 07:45 PM
It could be expanded... Perhaps the inn is a sort of flying Dutchman, and the heroes must exorcise the lost spirits who dwell in it...
Ah, just playing with ideas.
Lots of promise.

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Kassil's comment on 2008-02-26 03:41 AM
I like this, with the added aspect, particularly the touch about it being a place involving the God of Travel. I could easily see such a place; wandering at the whim of the divine, showing up to offer the road-worn wanderers a place to shelter from the elements for a night, with a good hot meal and some good drink to fortify them from the journey's resumption. And then, they wake, bellies full, from a night's slumber they do not recall, to resume their journey with the god's blessing strong upon them. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-25 11:00 PM
This is actually more of a plot than a place, as it stands right now.

Nicely executed, thank you for writing in an appropriate style and with good Grammar and Spelling.

If you could simply add the rational, the reason for why this happens to the post, it would be a winner. Now I know, you are saying "But where is the mystery" or "well everyone should just figure out their own reasons". The point of this site is to give strong, well developed ideas for others to use. If you are still of the "well you need to figure it out", give a list of three to four options for us to pick from (or inspire our own answer). Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-25 07:54 AM
Its short, and there are no major writing flaws such as bad spacing, or alot of misspelled words. I would like it better if there was more detail, possibly about the innitself, perhaps the style of clothing of the building itself seeming out of date with more regular inns. I am also curious to know what caused it to become a ghostly wandering inn in the first place.

also very similar to my own Chateau Darque
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-04-25 04:26 PM
I agree with Scras here however I felt it should be more of a plot than a location.

If this was detailed out a little more then I think it would be a great submission.

1) How did the Inn become the way it is? Was it a real place and something foul happened to make it a wandering, ghostly inn?

2) I think that should anyone enter the inn there should be something amiss that could lead to a few questions about its origin and authenticity. A ghostly image seen from the corner of the eye but when looked at, it was mearly a women coming down the stairs or a page boy coming in from the stable.

This has a lot of promise, please continue with the fleshing out. I would love to see where this goes. Go to Comment
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LamentoftheLost's comment on 2008-02-26 03:24 AM
Updated: Updated: Forgive the roughness of this tale, and forgive how long it has been since original post, in truth I has forgotten all about it until recently.
Long ago, you requested a fleshing out of this dismally short description, and I only recently remembered it, and late this night a lesser muse struck me and I just added to it. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-06-06 09:00 AM
Cool - it does have similarities to other subs, but it is different enough to be usable. Go to Comment
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Ramhir's comment on 2010-12-16 10:54 AM


Very good sub, similar in many ways to my The Inn of the Wild Geese, but enough different not to overlap.

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