No it counts anyways. It would be nice if you did the Sovereign's Finest and the Grphon Knights. It would also be handy if you explained what you mean by battle magics: Arcanum of the Swords, RQ battle magics, Jedi powers, or something else. Go to Comment
Cool background item that got that .5 boost because I love attention, detail and ordinary-yet-special stuff. Had you added a short historical anecdote and perhaps a plot hook or two, I would have rated it far higher. Go to Comment
It's good, I like it. I think it is a better one than my first post, because it gives you something to build off of. A string of items/people linked together is good, it gives you an idea what the writer was think when they did something.
A circus is in town and while parading down the main street the animals suddenly break free from the cages. After surviving and assisting during the breakout the PCs are hired to help with the investigation. Who did this and why?