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Crow-Killer! :)

He is a simple soul, but I like that you included little details, which endeared me to the character (like the bobbing adam's apple!). I can picture him stalking the corn fields.

Good candidate for the Extras-Minor NPCs scroll. Go to Comment

Might be handy to bring along in the swamp! :) Though I would not think it very hard to tell crows from PCs....

Not bad :) Go to Comment

In the tall stalks, any movement would irk him, something is in his fields... Go to Comment

Well, we have seen them before, but you just can't have a high-fantasy forest without a plant that drags you towards it to eat you. (Psst, add some detail on its actual feeding methods and equipment... it will be necessary when the heroes will have to fight it.)

It is a decent implementation of the cliche, with nice plot hook for use. Go to Comment

Better. :)

Nice narrative add-on! Go to Comment

I like it-but I'd stay well away from it if I met it in rl. Go to Comment

what manfred said! (both times) Go to Comment

I really like this nasty vine. A couple of questions:

1. How does it sense victims? Scent? Vibrations? Photosensors?
2. Does it have a special origin? Go to Comment

Holy Carnivorous Plants, Batman!

A well-executed rendition of the fantasy/pulp adventure staple. They also come in handy when your science-fiction adventurers are marooned on a hostile planet: A larger version of the creature could entangle entire spacecraft... Go to Comment

Drat! Forgot to vote! Go to Comment

Updated: more terrifying Go to Comment

Update: format Go to Comment

abbey, cell, chapterhouse, convent, friary, hermitage, house, lamasery, monastery, nunnery, order, priorate, priory, religious community, retreat, sanctuary Go to Comment

It's an Exalted item! Go to Comment

It's an Exalted item! Go to Comment

This would be perfect for a priest of Dionysus! Go to Comment

Yup, wrote this for a wiki site for exalted, but it can work for any fantasy setting i feel Go to Comment

hmmm, could be a nice plot hook to be in the service or running an errand for a party god Go to Comment

Now this is how divination devices should work!

I can well imagine a bigger version in some lost ancient city, still able to offer advice, if you know the right words. Those who seek it have to brave uncounted dangers... and you know the rest.


Also very like their bickering nature; don't come too close, they might snap out at you as well. :) Go to Comment