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Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-14 12:30 PM
I have always a had weak spot for demons. Particularly the demons that don't really enjoy their job.

One question, how common did you envision the knowledge of Belephegor to be, is his name used as an insult or curse? Go to Comment
Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-14 06:03 PM
Plot idea:

The cult that worships the exiled demon nation is ready to open up the gates of hell and bring about the destruction of the universe. But Belephegor is not interested in doing that much work, so he begins to lazily and indirectly lead the PCs into a quest to stop the invasion. Belephegor's plan has no regard for the PCs souls or well being, and he is trying to get this done with the least amount of personal effort and without upsetting his fine and dandy hell-side set up. Go to Comment
Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-06 09:32 PM
I love has subtle this one can be. Easily a king-pen like figure with appropriate lieutenants.

I love this and could easily see his use.

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Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Jarons20's comment on 2009-04-14 04:36 PM
Updated: fixed paragraphs Go to Comment
Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Jarons20's comment on 2009-04-15 05:18 PM
I think if anything, he'd just send a letter and an exact map maybe a super amazing magical item within the scope of the GMs discretion, while getting the generals of whatever hellish army to take a millennium to cool out on cushions of infinite comfort, which I am writing up as an item Go to Comment
Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Jarons20's comment on 2009-04-15 07:40 PM
^ slave to belphegor ^ Go to Comment
Belphegor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
slartibartfast's comment on 2009-04-15 05:36 PM
I'd comment, but after reading this, for some strange reason I just don't feel like making the effort... ;D Go to Comment
Sand Pilferer
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2007-09-04 10:53 AM
hmm, I'm liking the way this is starting out. I want to know more! :) Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-03-02 11:03 PM
Interesting, and I have to say that I like it, technical errors aside. Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-28 03:14 PM
I agree with wulf's comments, but I have to point out a few issues with the text:

The opening sentence is an example of a run-on sentence:

"The local forest has been plagued with animal attacks and few venture far off the path, but the magistrate of the town is willing to pay adventurers who wander into town a small reward if they will venture into the forest, find the state of three merchants, the strawmiller, the woodsman, and a brickmaker, and kill whatever is causing the attacks, he will inform them that the town gates will close behind them when they leave but will give them some provisions and a bit of equipment, including a net."

This needs to be a couple of sentences, not one. I've often repeated Moonhunter's advice, and the best point here is to read your sub out loud back to yourself. Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-28 03:15 PM
Forgot to vote.. Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Wulfhere's comment on 2007-02-28 02:21 PM
An enjoyable take on the old fairy tales. I could see a party slaying the killer granny, then being forced to flee the area instead of being rewarded: That's just not nice!

If I were running it, I would probably make the granny innocent after all, just to confound paranoid players. Perhaps the werebeast is forcing her to give it shelter, so her place will be full of evidence it was there. Go to Comment
Grandmothers' House
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Jarons20's comment on 2007-02-28 04:55 PM
Updated: fixed some sentences Go to Comment
Following The Drum
Items  (Art and Music)   (Combat)
Strolen's comment on 2011-05-16 12:00 PM


I think this has a good start and could definitley go somewhere. Mostly all there for a scroll start. Just need it live and a first couple examples to see what you intend and we are off to the races.


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Following The Drum
Items  (Art and Music)   (Combat)
manfred's comment on 2008-12-07 08:20 AM
If we could gather some examples of musical items related to war (or vice-versa), this scroll could actually go live. I guess what is really missing is the initial seed... Go to Comment
Following The Drum
Items  (Art and Music)   (Combat)
manfred's comment on 2008-04-20 05:54 PM
Thanks to an unknown benefactor for bumping this.

While it could use some combing, if I read it correctly, wanted are tales of war, where the music (or sound signals in general) was particularly important.

Okay... not an easy one. Go to Comment
Following The Drum
Items  (Art and Music)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2008-12-03 09:20 AM
A very specific but fascinating concept for a scroll. Go to Comment
Following The Drum
Items  (Art and Music)   (Combat)
Demagogue's comment on 2007-03-07 06:56 PM
I'm confused on the purpose of this scroll, it seems like the goal is to submit various kinds of battle music, but I am not sure. Go to Comment
Starbeards and Lyts
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2007-03-20 04:13 PM
well, the tagline sure is attention-grabbing! looking forward to see what these may be. Go to Comment
Cristo "Crowstalker" Givenns
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
manfred's comment on 2007-02-19 03:36 PM
A sweet little NPC, someone who the PCs would be eager to recruit - pity he liked his farm so much. Good one! Go to Comment
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