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Incarnadine's comment on 2006-09-28 07:29 PM
I have no idea how to respond to this torrent, other than saying-

Thank you, everybody. This started with a cool title, and has evolved into something that has transcended my wildest hopes of success.

That being said, it's still a work in progress- if you have any suggestions at all, please leave them. After all, it's not like I'm at a shortage for words or anything.

PS- Anybody who read it the whole way through without stopping has far too much mental fortitude. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-28 07:36 PM
Sheer, unadulterated genius. The likes of which is very rarely seen on this plane of existance. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-08-01 08:54 PM
I weep that it wasn't finished by the quest deadline, but I still look forward to it becoming a submission proper. Excellent idea. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-09-27 01:23 AM
Absolutely, 100% solid gold. Way to go, Incarnadine. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2016-11-15 11:39 AM
If you haven't read this one yet, do yourself a favor. This is one of the best of the Citadel. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-08 01:16 PM
wow...some amazing concepts and ideas. Intriguing mix of fantasy and sci-fi. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-21 10:57 PM
C'mon Inc! 9 days left! 8 or 7 when you read this! :D

Its a beaut! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-08-13 03:52 PM
I give this a 4.8 as is. When it comes out, I will give this a 5! HoH too. :D Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-26 11:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-27 01:40 AM
I wish to golden this submission!!!!!!!!!!!!...but the gods are cruel! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-04-12 08:50 PM
You're right Cheka...this may well be the Citadel's only PERFECT submission!!

yessir, its official. I am a fan of your imagination Inc. Give it here! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 11:02 AM
Have nothing to add that has not already been said.

You should write a novel with this... :) Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-27 02:01 PM
Wow. Impressive doesn't begin to cover it. I was expecting something reminiscent of Harlan Ellison's For I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream or The Matrix, but this one had several intriguing surprises. I will be running this.

Awesome! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-01 03:39 PM


An incredible sub, truly epic and memorable, a real shame the author no longer frequents Strolens :(


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Kassy's comment on 2013-06-01 06:28 AM
5.0/5 + Golden Vote + Added to Favorites

Amazing. Definitely deserving of its Golden status. Come back Incarnadine! Go to Comment
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Kassy's comment on 2013-06-03 06:19 AM
Because I couldn't give it on Saturday, due to me giving it my Golden, have a HoH too!

It's that good! Go to Comment
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Elbin's comment on 2013-06-01 05:47 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Nafar's comment on 2010-11-19 05:38 PM
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-08-16 03:11 PM


I was exhausted after reading this, like I had taken the journey myself. The conclusion is so beautiful too. 


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Malicious Archeology
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-29 05:15 AM
Minor suggested change: have the painting show wolves hunting someone. Actually, you could show a hunt with all the details, making it just a pretty show... until they get into the painting, and become a show themselves. Finally, when (if) they get out, a heap or two of old, dry bones could be ejected with them... as a final warning. Go to Comment
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