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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-28 06:36 PM
Sheer, unadulterated genius. The likes of which is very rarely seen on this plane of existance. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-08-01 07:54 PM
I weep that it wasn't finished by the quest deadline, but I still look forward to it becoming a submission proper. Excellent idea. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-09-27 12:23 AM
Absolutely, 100% solid gold. Way to go, Incarnadine. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-08 12:16 PM
wow...some amazing concepts and ideas. Intriguing mix of fantasy and sci-fi. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-21 09:57 PM
C'mon Inc! 9 days left! 8 or 7 when you read this! :D

Its a beaut! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-08-13 02:52 PM
I give this a 4.8 as is. When it comes out, I will give this a 5! HoH too. :D Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-26 10:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-27 12:40 AM
I wish to golden this submission!!!!!!!!!!!!...but the gods are cruel! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-04-12 07:50 PM
You're right Cheka...this may well be the Citadel's only PERFECT submission!!

yessir, its official. I am a fan of your imagination Inc. Give it here! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 10:02 AM
Have nothing to add that has not already been said.

You should write a novel with this... :) Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-27 01:01 PM
Wow. Impressive doesn't begin to cover it. I was expecting something reminiscent of Harlan Ellison's For I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream or The Matrix, but this one had several intriguing surprises. I will be running this.

Awesome! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-02-01 02:39 PM


An incredible sub, truly epic and memorable, a real shame the author no longer frequents Strolens :(


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Nafar's comment on 2010-11-19 04:38 PM
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-08-16 02:11 PM


I was exhausted after reading this, like I had taken the journey myself. The conclusion is so beautiful too. 


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Malicious Archeology
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-29 04:15 AM
Minor suggested change: have the painting show wolves hunting someone. Actually, you could show a hunt with all the details, making it just a pretty show... until they get into the painting, and become a show themselves. Finally, when (if) they get out, a heap or two of old, dry bones could be ejected with them... as a final warning. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-26 05:39 AM
Ah, you have posted it. The challenges of 2D combat are what it makes unusual. The imagery is also interesting. A nice strange room that makes a dungeon unique. Good work. Go to Comment
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-28 05:30 PM
Kind of nifty and suitably creepy. Probably the best part is the concept of forcing things into 2D, since that's not something you see every day. Of course, if they get back to 3D and still have some wolves around, I would imagine that the fight would get much easier; the wolves aren't used to fighting in three dimensions. What happens to the people who aren't so lucky, and either get killed by wolves or never figure out how to get out? Do they just die, or are their souls imprisoned in the wall? Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-26 02:03 AM
Bizarre and intriguing. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-26 04:11 PM
Nicely described and a great inspiration. One should never laugh at primatives again. Go to Comment
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Iain's comment on 2006-06-26 09:21 AM
Bizarre - I like it just because of having to make the PCs fight in 2D (which is something I've never considered), though the description around it is also interesting.

Regarding missile weapons, you could still shoot up in an arc to get it past someone in the way though I agree that aiming might be rather tricky. Go to Comment
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