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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-26 11:07 PM
God jeezus, finally. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-09 11:11 AM
You should of released this during the quest. It would of been a winner.

So far it seems fairly complete (with a couple of fill in your own blanks to taste areas). Why are you holding it back? Go to Comment
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Alec_Shadowkin's comment on 2006-07-07 11:07 PM
All I can say is: wow. This is amazingly impressive and once it is finished deserves HOH. I can't wait to see the rest. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-07-20 07:54 PM
Vivid is the word I think describes this. This evokes my mind into thinking of the worst possible hell a machine could come up with.
I could never write something so in-depth - i'd lose my train of thought halfway though :P

Now, a couple of questions and thoughts:

Where there is hell, there is usually a devil. What represents the devil in this case?

What motivation does anyone have for entering this hell? Are they able to be banished in there by someone? or is there a reward?

Considering Izzy G killed itself, letting down humanity, do you think it would have thought itself deserving to go to hell? Perhaps he copied himself (or created a new Integrat Grande) Into his dimension before he 'died'. Or also, perhaps he, in his ultimate knowledge, saw that he had the potential to be the 'ultimate evil': He had the power to do terrible things. As such, perhaps he (Or once again, a copy) is the 'devil' of the Gasp of Glass?
Whatever the case; if Integrat Grande were in his own hell - probably in the middle of The Dark - that may provide motive for a human to go there, if his need were great enough. The journey is exceptionally dangerous, but up the top of the tower Integrat Grande is there to solve any problem placed by it.

And to get to the dark? perhaps the only way is to climb to the top of the tower and find some sort of teleporter?

Anyway - whatever the case, this is definitely a powerful idea - Cudos, and good luck finishing it! Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-09 11:06 PM
Incarnadine, Where art thou!? This needs to go to the main site!

As it is, this is worth a 5 and a HoH from me; I feel it should be a golden submission of dungeons, too - it's something for others to aspire to. It's one of the best, most in-depth and original submissions i've seen on this site and I fear it gets ignored when it sits in the incomplete section :( Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-26 10:41 PM
And the beast rears it's head.

Everything's been said from me in earlier posts - all I can say is thank you Incarnadine: This post is an inspiration! If I had the ability, I'd give it a golden vote. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-05-31 08:28 PM
Yeah! This sub deserves as many goldens, HoH's and exposure as possible! Go to Comment
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Iain's comment on 2006-11-21 02:11 PM
Absolutely stunning. I liked it all, but particularly the description of the Storm. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-08-08 05:00 PM
When this is finally released, you can count on a HoH from me. The excerpts from the scientists made it good, usage of the word Cabochon was sweet. A hell of rust and decay made it great. C'mon now, finish this so I can properly lavish praise upon it. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-28 12:06 PM
Here is the vote and HoH I promised when this was still but in work.

Awesome stuff! Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2006-09-28 03:56 PM
A self-crafted tombstone of a genius.
It seems to me that it inflicts its sorrow upon those who enter to make them experience and share it, without any actual malice, more with the 'noone understands me' inclination.

Far out there...
Two thumbs and one cogweel up. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-27 07:10 AM
5/5 and an HOH. This is one of the best submissions here. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-27 06:37 PM
This should be a Golden Submission. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-11-21 07:49 PM
This is a perfect submission. Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-02-01 07:43 AM


I did not comment and vote on this in the old days, fixing that now. The funny thing is that I actually HoHed this way back... Anyway, here is  my vote, comment and a new HoH to go with that.



As Muro pointed out to me in chat, this sub is at a professional level. It has an amazing introduction followed by vivid images and splendid writing! It is in many ways a perfect sub, both in size and content.



So here it is, brought fourth by the HoH for our newer users to read.


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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-26 12:54 AM
4 days left... C'Mon Incarnadine, time to let it live ;) Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-09-28 01:52 AM
Inventive, refreshing, genuine and an excellent read. Truely a 5/5, HoH and Golden if I ever saw one.
Kudos Incarnadine. You humble us all. Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-09-27 09:59 PM
Nothing else need be said. Go to Comment
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Incarnadine's comment on 2006-07-08 01:57 PM
Geez Cap, too high a praise. The only edge that I have is the thesaurus open in my lap at the time of the writing. You have the advantage with, say, everything else. Go to Comment
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Incarnadine's comment on 2006-08-23 05:46 PM
Oops. I should probably have said that at some point...

Thanks Cap. Go to Comment
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