I love it!
I'm going there right now to get my double-bladed fan-pointed sword with spikes on the blade and a whipping chain that slides out of one end. Go to Comment

One thing I wonder is this - if the swamps are so difficult to pass through, and the island is fertile enough to grow food on (clearly not a rocky outcropping), where do the monks get their metal from in sufficient amounts for some of these listed things, like the gate and such? Do you arrive, tell them what you want, and they send you to fetch supplies? Do they have a secret mine? Does their god provide the metal? Go to Comment

I am just going to get on the praise train here. Well thought out. It has details you can hang things on. Easily adapted to just about any game world.

Two thumbs and a tail up. Go to Comment

I adore this! Very well-thought out, both fantastic and realistic (my favorite kind!)

I imagine that there would be a black-market trade in Moldan metal-work knock-offs. That would be an interesting plot twist.

-Krome Go to Comment

I echo krome's opening line! Go to Comment

Bump, a joyful place for PCs to visit. I can picture an adventuring band sitting around a campfire, several days still away from the swamp, feverishly sketching ideas to present to the monks. Go to Comment

People are always dragging my first subs back up from the past. About time I return the favor to someone. :)

Fun one though. I always enjoy these kind of race targeted things. Continues to allow magic weapons to have that unknown to them making the PCs always nervous to be the first one to try a 'new' magic weapon they come across. Go to Comment

Yep, still holds up as a solid item with some fun results! Go to Comment

Good first submission, I don't think it's awful at all.

You've made a well rounded item, not over powerful, with reasons for it's creation and effects, and none of it system specific. Great job. Go to Comment

Yes, thank you very much.
How could you think it's awful?
The only thing I have to remark on is that the backstory for the item is fairly bland, but that can be remedied.
Hope to see more from you, dude! Go to Comment

Hi - this is my first submission, so if you think it is awful, can you give me some feedback and I'll try to make the next one I do better. Go to Comment

It's a nice item and a very good first post. Welcome to Strolens :-) Go to Comment

Like that the hammer helps to train warriors. Go to Comment

Not bad for a first sub... :) Go to Comment